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Posted: 5 years ago

So beautiful! Ishita already likes him, should ask for sometime to think n Raman spoil her while she making her mind!!

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Posted: 5 years ago

lovely updt

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Posted: 5 years ago

Beautiful update

Loved It

Raman antics are cute he climbs pipe to meet ishu

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 15


Fascinating and Curious Update


Raman now thinking about Ishita and decides

to call her , he learns that she is again going out with Mani

and this makes Raman comes to Ishita

he finds her in her towel and he is mesmerized with her beauty

Raman tells Ishita about his insecurity as he did not want Mani

proposing Ishita before him

he tells her he cannot live without her

and he is aware when he first saw her , he was rude and disrespectful

towards her but now he is changed and she must give him a chance

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Posted: 5 years ago

Nice update

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Posted: 5 years ago

Wowwwww wonderful update

Really loved it

Raman is so naughty

He was teasing her

Eagerly waiting

Plzz update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hlo guys! I how are you all... I hope you all are doing good. Today i am back with new update.

Am really sorry for being super late but what to do yaar... I was sick..... From past few months so that's why hadn't able to update my stories. And thanks in advance for bearing me this time also...

Part 16

He came forward and told her wear something. She went in her washroom angrily taking her clothes which was placed on bed. And came out after good 10 minutes. And only to find him sitting in her room only.


Raman got up from his place and said ishita please don't misunderstand me this time. this time i m genuine. And please don't come on your decision do easily without thinking. I m Ready to do anything for you. If you want to test me then you are free i will not back off.


All the time ishita was mute spectator and he came forward and kissed on her forehead lovingly and hugged her tightly spoke lovingly looking into her eyes while caressing her cheek


Raman: take care jaan..... And i love you so much... Dhyan rkhna now i m going byee.... And yes please don't say no..... Byee


Saying so he went back from her balcony itself. While ishita was in dilemma about her feelings and for Raman. She thought to herself


Ishita (st) : what's just what happened..... Raman proposed me and why m i not feeling bad about it. I m feeling happy after knowing his feelings....m i in love with him..... Oh god what is happening to me like i m drowning in his love.... LOVE is it a love ishita, or he just faking ...no no.... He can't i can see sincerity in his eyes..... That's mean he loves me but who is that shagun oh god its so complicated now he left saying he will wait for my answer i need someone to ask but kisse puchu...mihika no no vandu akka..... Never they will tease me to no end.... I should myself figure it out.... Yes yeh shi hai ....


Thinking so she slept just to dream about raman.


Next day she was getting ready to meet mani when her phone buzzed she picked it up and saw a whatsapp message from Raman. He sent message of good morning jaan with a kiss. She blushed deeply reading it and kept it aside again started getting ready when he sent one more message.


(Author note: below is whatsapp chat)


Raman : apne hone wale pati ko morning wish nhi krogi.... 😉


Ishita saw this and her month flung open seeing his message stating himself her would be husband. She typed


Ishita: i didn't said yes yet....


Raman: so what..... I know that you will say yes only...jaan


Ishita: how do you know that what if i say no then.....


Raman: then?


Ishita: yes then?


Raman: no worries..... I will make sure you will say yes.... And if you don't then i have other ways also..... 😉


Ishita: don't make castles in air.....and what do you mean other ways....i don't believe you one hand you say you love me on the other hand you are threatening me.... Its not done raman.....



Raman: jaan.... I love you whether you believe it or not....


Ishita: mujhe yakeen nhi ho rha hai aap pr raman.....


Raman: don't worry i will make you believe me.....


Ishita: hmmm....


Raman: jaan....sari pehnke mat jana mani k sath suit dalna aur vo bhi Blue colour ka.... Blue is my favorite colour ..... Agr kho toh mai aa jau tumhare sath....


Ishita: aur agr nhi pehna toh....


Raman: toh kya kr skta hu.... I will kiss you in front of mani.... 😉😚😚😚


Ishita clamped her mouth with hand and called him in n next second. Raman picked her call smiling


Ishita: what the hell is this raman....


Raman: kya jaan....


He act innocent like he hadn't done anything wrong.


Ishita: that message.... You said that you will... Ummm u will...


Raman smiling sheepishly completed her sentence: kiss you in front of mani....


Ishita: aap esa kuch nhi kroge..... Aur yeh jaan kehna bnd kro mujhe....


Raman: mai esa kruga jaan.... And yes i will not stop calling you jaan....


Ishita: you are impossible raman...


Raman: toh haan krke... Possible krdo....


Ishita: aap manoge nhi na.....


Raman: tujhe apna banake hi manuga....


Ishita: mujhe apse baat nhi krni....


Saying so she cut the call without listening to his answer and again looked at herself in mirror and realized that she is actually Wearing blue anarkli designer suit. She blushed remembering his words. She once thought to change her dress thinking that he will think that she is wearing blue because of him. And spoke lost in her thoughts while smiling


Ishita: toh janab ka favourite colour blue hai... Ummm.... Interesting...

Saying so she dodged the idea of changing her dress and went out informing her family about her plans with mani. Mani picked her from her house and went straight to a fancy five-star hotel where he has booked a roof top of hotel only for them. Seeing this all ishita gets conscious and started to anticipate the situation which is coming her way. She asked stammering like child


Ishita: mani.... Why have you done all this.... I mean its not necessary ....i m not someone whom you need to impress.... I m your best friend so it was not needed...


Mani while side hugging her: yes my dear but it was needed i want privacy while doing my personal meeting.

He made her sit on chair and himself settled down on his chair. And asked waiter to bring to coffee


Ishita: but mani.... Itna bhi kya jruri kaam hai... Kahin tum mujhe propose toh nhi krne wale...

Mani: kyu... Kya kami hai mujhme.... Didn't you like me....


Ishita gets scared listening to him and spoke : mani.... Mjaak kr rhe ho na....


Mani: kya hua ishu.... Why are getting nervous.... Why are you sweating.... Do you love someone else...


He spoke while gazing her intently when she blurted out without thinking twice


Ishita: yes.....


Ishita bite her tongue and closed her eyes for saying yes then she tried to correct herself...


Ishita while composing herself


Ishita: no no... There is nothing like that......i said yes that i m sweating.....


Mani suspiciously : yes.... That's mean you love someone.....who is that lucky guy....


Ishita: i said na no....koi nhi hai meri life mein....


Mani laughed aloud : and said ok ok.... I know that.... Vese i took you here because i want you to meet someone....


Ishita sighed in relief after knowing that he is not proposing her and thought to herself


Ishita(st): what is this ishu.... Why are you so nervous.... Mani is not proposing you.... But when raman confessed his feelings i felt so happy.... My Heart was beating faster than its speed i was not even feeling scared ....that was totally a different situation for me... And with mere thought of mani proposing me i got so scared.... Kya iska mtlab yeh hai ki i m in love with raman.....kya mujhe raman se sach much pyaar ho gya hai.... But how mai toh unse nafrat krti thi.... Mujhe unse pyaar kese hua....


She was lost in her thoughts when she heard a female voice calling mani while coming towards them. She widened her eyes whenani also replied her and rushed towards her to hug her they hugged each other. Mani came forward taking her along when both the ladies gets surprised to see each other. The other woman was none other than shagun. Shagun hugs ishita happily and ishita asked mani about shagun through her eyes.

Mani make her sit beside him and spoke while holding her hand


Mani: ishu meet shagun .... She is shagun my girlfriend ...I love her.... And shagun she is ishita my best friend since childhood.....


Shagun smiled and said: yes i knew her before....


On the other hand ishita was also smile fully and was happy to know that raman and shagun did not have any relationship beaide best friend....


Shagun: abhi why i you didn't told me that its ishita..... Vese i bring someone from my side also to meet you...


Mani: who is this someone?


Mani asked while gazing at the door. I when door gets open and a handsome man came inside taking over phone wearing shades.

He was none other than raman.

Shagun waved him and called him. He came to them after Finishing his call. He shaked hands with mani while staring at ishita who was oblivious of his arrival. She stands up from her seat and said spoke in utter shock


Ishita: you..... Aap yahaan kya kr rhe ho....


Raman: vhi jo tum kr rhi ho.....

He said with smirk on his face. He scanned her from top to bottom and raised his one eyebrow . Ishita sensed his thoughts and started feeling butterflies in her stomach under his gaze and her cheeks turned red . Shagun was already sitting beside mani so raman sit beside ishita. Mani called waiter and all gave their order.


Mani: so mr. Raman.... You are best friend of my love.... Its seems interesting.....


Mani side hugged shagun when raman spoke under his breath while smiling


Raman: aur tu meri jaan ka dost hai....


Which was audible to ishita.

She looked at Raman glaring him when he said coming closer to her.


Raman: you are looking ravishing in my favorite color jaan.....


Saying so he winked at her


Ishita looked other side and was struggling to control her blush and smile. Soon she composed herself immediately and spoke after clearing her throat


Ishita: so mani shagun.....toh kese hua tumhari love story start and you cheater mani.... You didn't even told me.....


She spoke showing fake anger hitting mani on his shoulder.


Mani: toh tumhara dra hua face kese dekhta

He said laughing at her.


Ishita: why would i get scared.....


Mani: don't lie ishu.... I know you were scared to death thinking that i m gonna propose you....


Ishita hit him again smiling. On the other hand shagun and raman was listening to them.


Raman: why she thought so abhi....


Mani: i think meri best friend like someone else.... Isn't it ishu....

He asked winking at her.


Ishita looked at raman and spoke : nothing like that....



Shagun: so what if she likes someone one....

And vese bhi.... You are mine abhi....

She said glaring mani.


Mani: yes yes baby..... I m yours.....


Raman gets close to ishita and spoke in her ear slowly with his husky voice


Raman: and you are mine....


Ishita looked away from him as she was trying to hide her blush from everyone. Raman like a naughty boy enjoying his effect on her as he can sense her blush on her cheeks.


Before dinner mani asked shagun for a dance. she happily agreed. She forced ishra also to have dance as well with each other.


She dragged both of them on dance floor and started swaying in the tunes of romantic song Tum hi ho.


Raman kept his both hand on ishita's waist and pulled her closer towards himself.

As they were Dancing in dim light. No one can notice ishra closeness.


Ishita felt goosebumps all over her body with his touch and current ran down through her body. He looked in her eyes deeply. And they shared a beautiful eye lock.


Hum Tere Bin Ab Reh Nahi Sakte

Tere Bina Kya Wajood Mera

Hum Tere Bin Ab Reh Nahi Sakte

Tere Bina Kya Wajood Mera

Tujhse Juda Gar Ho Jaayenge

Toh Khud Se Hi Ho Jaayenge Judaa

Kyunki Tum Hi Ho

Ab Tum Hi Ho

Zindagi Ab Tum Hi Ho

Chain Bhi, Mera Dard Bhi

Meri Aashiqui Ab Tum Hi Ho


Ishra were lost in themselves when raman turned her around and back hugged her tightly and spoke huskily near her ear.


Raman: mere liye dali hai tumne yeh dress....

I loved it.


Ishita: mene apke liye nhi dala hai.... It just that i had already wore it and was in rush....


Raman turned her towards him again with jerk making her face him. And again pulled her closer to him making their breath mingle with other. Ishita closed her eyes feeling his proximity. When raman spoke.


Raman : acha.... Agr esi baat hai toh i will kiss you in front of everyone.....


Ishita open her eyes in horror and spoke trying to come out of his hold.


Ishita: are you nuts..... Leave me....

She said pushing him away with force. When raman clamped her hands behind her tightly.

Her upper body colides with his hard chest making them aware of their proximity. Both looked at each other.



Tera Mera Rishta Hai Kaisa

Ik Pal Door Gawaara Nahi

Tere Liye Har Roz Hai Jeete

Tujh Ko Diya Mera Waqt Sabhi

Koi Lamha Mera Na Ho Tere Bina

Har Saans Pe Naam Tera

Kyunki Tum Hi Ho

Ab Tum Hi Ho

Zindagi Ab Tum Hi Ho

Chain Bhi, Mera Dard Bhi

Meri Aashiqui Ab Tum Hi Ho

Tumhi Ho... Tumhi Ho...



Raman: kyu push kr rhi ho mujhe... I know that you too love me....


Ishita: no ...its nothing like that


Raman: toh kesa hai.... Btao naa....


He said pressing her more into himself. Ishita blushed crimson red and spoke looking Downward


Ishita: raman we are in public... Leave me....



Tere Liye Hi Jiya Main

Khud Ko Jo Yun De Diya Hai

Teri Wafa Ne Mujhko Sambhala

Saare Ghamon Ko Dil Se Nikala

Tere Saath Mera Hai Naseeb Juda

Tujhe Paake Adhoora Naa Raha Hmm..

Kyunki Tum Hi Ho

Ab Tum Hi Ho

Zindagi Ab Tum Hi Ho..

Chain Bhi, Mera Dard Bhi

Meri Aashiqui Ab Tum Hi Ho

Kyunki Tum Hi Ho

Ab Tum Hi Ho

Zindagi Ab Tum Hi Ho..

Chain Bhi, Mera Dard Bhi

Meri Aashiqui Ab Tum Hi Ho



Raman smiled hearing her and spoke naughtily


Raman: toh corner mein krna hai....


He said winking at her. Ishita opened her eyes wide hearing him.


Ishita: kya....


Raman: kiss.....


Ishita: leave me otherwise i will shout...


Raman: acha beta.... Yeh baat hai......itni himmat... agr himmat hi dikhani hai toh dikhao....


Ishita was about to speak something when raman called mani and told him that there is some clients over here in this hotel they are coming in short while.


Mani agreed and told them to come asap.

Ishita was about to deny but raman dragged her with himself in secluded dark corner where nobody could notice them. Raman pinned her to the wall and clutched her hand either side of her head tightly.


Ishita was shocked with this sudden act.


Ishita: raman what is this... Leave me....let me go....

Raman: sorry jaan.... But now i can't control myself....

Saying so he put his lips on hers and started kissing her hungrily while ishita tried to free herself but he pushed her body into wall with force. She struggled to come out of the kiss. And spoke breaking the kiss in mid.


Ishita: what the hell is this..... Leave me raman....we are in public


Raman: koi nhi hai yha jaan......let me kiss you.... You are looking so tempting

Saying so he again started kissing her. Ishita was also getting affected by his proximity but how she can let him kiss her. She pushed him with her all might. They were panting hard. Raman smiled looking at her swollen lips. And spoke


Raman:See i have told you i will kiss you .


Ishita: you know what.... You are shameless... And don't try to come near me that too in public...

She warned him and listening to her he smirked naughtily and started to come closer to her


Raman: that mean i can come close to you whenever we two are alone.... Isn't it...


Ishita : raman stop there.... I said don't come near me not even when we are alone....


Raman pulled her towards himself by her waist with jerk . And spoke caressing her face with his index finger.


Raman: why did you dress up like this.....i always loose my sanity seeing you looking so tempting. Ok i will be away from you just tell me one thing...


Ishita: what!...she asked with curious filled voice....


Raman: first promise me that you will not lie...


Ishita thought for a while and said ok


Raman: do you love me.?


Ishita was dumbfounded by his sudden question. How could she tell him how much she love him. How could she tell him that she have feelings for him. But somewhere she is in dilemma about her feelings for him. She was in her own world when raman nudged her


Raman : kya soch rhi... Dekho if you say no then i will not Cross your way in any manner will keep it professional only.....if you say yes then


He trailed down his sentence without finishing it. She got suspicious about it


Ishita: then....

Raman: then i will not ever leave you not even in your dream..

He said huskily near her ear. Making her shudder with his voice.


He smiled naughtily and asks her with his eyes.

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Thank you all

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hi

Thanks for the lengthy update

Enjoyed reading

Waiting for Ishita’s answer

Pls continue soon

Hope u r perfectly fine now

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Posted: 4 years ago

Heyyy after a long time yarrrr and that's really a nice update with all the ingredients love cuteness naughtiness everything and now can't wait to have the next update eagerly

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Posted: 4 years ago

Amazing update

Loved it

Update soon plz

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