TS: WHAT MY HEART WANTS TO SAY

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello friends i am here with new TS as i promised to freedomofspeech @ greeshma that i will pen down a three shot after completing my first story and the story is here
this is based on yhm scene where ishitha brings drunken shagun to her home,this is the episode which i last saw as i lost connection from this serial with this episode

this TS is a track where raman and ishitha realise what is the relationship between them and how they come closer towards each other leaving their baggage behind

this track is completely different from the scene and later happened in YHM

i hope you all will like it
scroll down for the first part

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Posted: 7 years ago
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part-1 : scroll down

Edited by sarayasriya - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part-1
after an initial argument with his wife bringing his ex-wife to his home he now stood at the entrance of his room watching ishitha helping shagun to adjust on his bed...!his bed he uttered under his breath
he silently walked out not able to see his wife doing service to his ex-wife in her own home in their own room

when his mother told her what she did is not considerable she felt bad for hurting them but she felt bringing a lone woman in the mid night to save her is not wrong

after few minutes when he walked silently and left the room taking his blanket ishitha followed him thinking to justify her intention of bringing shagun home

before they can have an argument shagun's drunken screams made ishitha walk inside leaving raman in thoughts

she worried for a woman who always tried to insult in every way possible and brought her to our home but why can't she think that her husband will get hurt by this act of hers
how can she bear his ex-wife in her room,doesn't she feel any right on him as her husband is he just ruhi's papa? is she here just for ruhi,these 6 months relationship is nothing to her
can't she feel his pain ?can't she understood that her raavan is very angry, rude and impromptu hurting words to her is because of that lady who was now authoritatively sleeping in their room

can't she see he is changing slowly into ishitha's raman leaving the stone hearted raman made by shagun

why it hurts him when he thinks ishitha has no feelings for him?why it pains when he thinks that she can't see his pain,
his growing feelings towards her

with endless thoughts about his wife and ex-wife he spent the restless night in the couch waiting for a new morning so that he can escape from his own home which he is not feeling as his since last night

she couldn't find him when she walked out of the room early morning thinking to talk with her husband who was angry on her according to her assumption
she felt disheartened when she got to know raman left early morning to office using the guest room for getting ready

all the day his thoughts were around ishitha,what is his place in her life,what she feels about him
when they asked each other that they are falling in love they brushed it off and never gave a thought to their words
their relationship is not strong he thought,what their future? his mind clouded with endless thoughts making it impossible for him to sit and work
he left the office to some isolated place so that he can think peacefully


when he didn't answered any single call of hers she decided to visit raman's office,she was very eager to solve their differences but she doesn't know why she need to resolve it, is it for ruhi to give a good environment for her or is it to give peace to her heart and mind which will happen only when raman
becomes normal teasing and taunting her
she never gave a thought

while he was very disturbed is it because his wounds were freshened with his ex-wife in his home or is it because of ishitha's actions ignoring his feelings
he was on thinking mode trying to understand why his heart and mind restless

she felt sad when she came to know that raman left the office in the morning itself and strongly decided to clear the matter between them as soon as possible
before it disturbs the cordial relationship they share

she came from clinic by afternoon cancelling all her appointments as she was not in a situation to attend her patients
her mind was preoccupied with her husband thoughts,his silence since yesterday night killing her
and now she was in kitchen preparing dinner along with her MIL who was also still angry on her for bringing the woman who no one likes in their home
though she was doing the work all her attention is at their main door looking for husband arrival,she was so much disturbed that she even didn't met her parents since last night

her eyes sparkled and her chain of thoughts came to halt when he stepped in with his coat on his shoulder completely worn out not because of work but because of thoughts running in his mind
he raised his head to meet her eyes who was longing to have a word with him
he walked into his room silently exhaling deeply he settled in the couch resting his aching back closing his eyes

she walked in with a glass of water her presence made him to open his closed eyes,he glanced at the glass which she is offering,getting up from the couch he walked to their wardrobe taking his clothes he left to washroom leaving behind a teary ishitha
she doesn't know why she is hurted so much with his silence and ignorance than his taunts and screams

ignore typing mistakes and do comment your views
and let me know should i continue this TS or not
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome start
Love to read your take on ishra this situation
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This is superb
Loved it
Waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Aw I am so happy to see my wish getting granted even though you're busy. Thanks a lot sriya. Coming to update loved the way you penned their emotions. You know you're one such beautiful author who gives lively updates. Ahh it pains to see ishra separation. Hope she clears the air soon. Do continue na it's only some TS na *PuppyFace* I wish it could be some SS 😆 (okay no more greediness) happy with what I got 😃. Love ya 🤗
Edited by FreedomOfSpeech - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update
Please do update soon
Thnx for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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congrats for new story
interesting update
ishra are hurt specially Raman
continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh wow that was amazing!!
Both Raman's and Ishita's thoughts were expressed beautifully!!
They both care for each other!!
But both are reluctant to admit it even to themselves!!
What I did not understand in the show was why did she not put her in the guest room???
Why did she bring her to their room??????
I really hope that he gives Ishita a chance to explain!!
Please let them have a proper conversation and discuss the situation!!
In the show they did not actually discuss anything!!
Just assumptions were made with his taunts and comments only!!!
I have every confidence that you will handle the situation just the way we on IF would have wanted it!!!!

Eagerly awaiting your next update soon please!!
And I would really appreciate it if you could pm me as well please?!?!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb start
I love your take
Update soon

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