IshRa SS - Raman's Hormonal Battle

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parvathyskumarr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

superb update... waiting eagerly for the next update.

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postforforums

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Hi All,

Note: To all Ishita fans - She might be hurt by Raman many times here. So please refrain from reading if you are not up to this. I apologize for this. But this is to bring out all the bitterness, hatred, Raman has been storing it in him. I connect to Raman's character more so I will be concentrating more on his emotions, his feelings and his desires.

Part 4

Precap: Ishita enter Raman's cabin and is surprised to see him laughing and daydreaming

Raman's jerks out of his fantasy when he hears Ishita calling him. Seeing Ishita in his office with his tiffin is no less than genie fulfilling one of his many such wishes. He keeps staring at her without blinking his eyes with an unconscious smile plastered on his face.
After bringing him out of his reverie Ishita asks him to have lunch.
Raman does not want Ishita to know or explain what he was dreaming and why he was staring at her so he asks,
R - Is there anything anything you want to discuss ?
I - (knowing Raman would ask this) No. Nothing like that. I just brought your lunch.
Raman is unable handle this wifey Ishita. Already he has fallen for her. But if she behaves like this he would go insane.
R - (in frustration) But why ? My lunch has been ordered as it is done everyday. Why have you brought the lunch ? I am telling you time and again not to do these all but still you are being the same. Listen carefully Ishita, I will do everything it takes to be a good father to Ruhi. I promise you that but nothing more than that. Let us just be Ruhi's parents, han ? Why are you doing things that a wife does for a husband ? {(in his brain/self talk) This makes me expect more and more from you. Why can't you understand that. I do not want to suffer another heartbreak}. Ishita, as I mentioned earlier, keep me out of your list of concerned people.
Ishita was very much hurt with his words. He always avoids the confrontation through his harsh words. She loses her self-control and starts crying.
I(in tears) - What have I done wrong Raman ? Why do you behave like this with me ? One day you reveal you wanted to kiss me and then this behavior again and again. Tell me Raman, what is wrong ?
R - (looking away, unable to see her cry) There is nothing wrong Ishita. What was revealed to you for that I can't go back and stop that but now I am being clear, let us be nothing more than Ruhi's parents. You don't have to do anything more for me.
Ishita does not have anything to say to him as of now. She just want to go from there not to show how worn out she is now.
I - Okay Raman, for today have this lunch else it will go waste.
Ishita goes from there not speaking anything else.
It has been few days since the office incident. Ishita tries her best to not do anything for Raman. But this doesn't sit well with her. She really started to like to do all those activities for Raman.
On the other hand, Raman is bit relieved as Ishita is not even coming in front of him until necessary but deep inside he knows he gravely misses everything she does for him and about her.
Raman knows he cannot voice out his desires, fantasies and his emotions to anyone but his logical mind knows that if he keeps it in him it is going burst open as volcano one day. So, he decides to write it all in a diary as they occur in his brain. At least he doesn't have to keep it bottled up in himself.
[This happens after Raman and Ishita win competition in Ruhi's school and on the way back some goons stop them and Raman fights them off]
Ishita was completely in awe of Raman's protective nature. How he locked the car door before going out, how he fought all of them. He was even hit once on back by the rod but still he didn't budge. She did not want to show it to him but this is what she (a wife) always looked for in a husband. That she and her kids mean the world to her husband. This gets her thinking, who is this Raman ? After marriage she is seeing him in a complete different shade. Yes, he has hurt her a lot through his bitter mouth but she knows that was all because something is troubling him so he is acting that way. Now he has hurt his back, and if I ask him he will again retort and remind me of their relation. But I cannot sit quiet. She decides to take Ruhi with her. He will not say anything in front of Ruhi.
Here, Raman is in a complete different world. He comes and opens his diary and starts writing. He writes without any inhibitions.
Today, in the competition when I was making Ishita wear kamarband across her waist I was completely in a trance. I do not know if I have right to imagine such thoughts or not but I cannot help it. I just wanted to hide my face in her waist and keep relishing it. When I looked at her she had closed her eyes, hands tightly holding her saree in anticipation. I just want want to keep pouring wet kisses on her waist. Will this desire ever come true.
That is when Ishita enters the room with Ruhi making Raman jump from his place. I have to keep this diary hidden from Ishita at any cost. So, he keeps it in his laptop bag as he knows nobody (not even Mihir) touches his laptop bag. Ishita brings the ointment to apply on his back and first aid in case he needs. Raman knows what is coming next.
[Now he remembers he was hit on the back😉. That's the power of desires/fantasies/emotions😊]
Before Ishita can even speak he kisses Ruhi on his cheek, bids her goodnight, takes the ointment from her and goes to Mihir's place. He messages her
'I know why you brought Ruhi along with you. But please do not do that in future. I am at Mihir's place. I will use the ointment well.
Thanks. GN'
Ishita does not know what to say after reading the message. Raman is being so adamant, so childish. But she knows now that Mihir is his confidante. She decides to talk to Mihir about Raman. She has to know. Ishita knows this is the wrong way but she has to know what is bugging Raman and also what happened in his past.
[After the Incident on Adi's birthday]
Raman is very hurt and disturbed. He is hell worried about Adi's upbringing. As Ruhi is getting her parents love now he wants the same for Adi too. He knows Shagun will never give that kind of upbringing to Adi and he is very well aware of Ashok and his lifestyle. But he doesn't want to separate Adi from his mother either. So, he thinks to talk to his father about it.
R - Papa, I want to discuss something important, aap abhi free ho kya?
Mr Bhalla(Mr B) - Ha Raman, bolo
R - Yahan nahin, bahar chalein
Mr B - okay lets go
In the cafe nearby,
R - Papa, aapne dekha na Adi kaise bigadta ja raha hai.
Mr B - Ha Raman, mein bhi tumse iss bare mein bath karna chahta tha
R - Papa, maine kuch socha hai. Shagun ne to Adi ke mann mein mere bare mein zeher bhar diya hai. Par main soch raha tha ki hum court se request kar ke aap ko, mummy ko, Simmi ko aur Romi ko milne de Adi se. Matlab, mera sochna tha ki at least aap sab se contact mein rahega to kuch na kuch to badlav aa sakta hain na usmien.
Mr Bhalla after a long time sees his son's pain. He knows that Raman leaving from here was wrong but he also wrong in not stopping him in his anger. He did not even speak to him when he needed him. He decides to set everything in place and connect to him once again.
Mr B - You are very right Raman. I am really happy that you thought this. No matter what the outcome let us try this. And don't be disheartened beta. One day Adi will come to you. Have faith, okay ?
R - Thanks papa. Main Pathak se bath karke aap ko batata hoon. Par aap maa to samjha didjiyega. Meri taraha wo bhi Adi se bahot attached hain. To zyada expectations rakhne ke liye math kahiyega. Main bhi bas outside visiting hours ke liye request karne wala hoon aur ise mein represent nahin kar paonga. Aapko karna padega kyunki cour mere khilaf rahega.
Mr B - Thik hai beta, tu mujhe Pathak se milke details batadena.

[I will not go into court details and drama. I will just give the result and start from there]
The case was lost from Raman's side as Adi himself refused to meet anyone. Mr Bhalla said to Raman about the same in a sad tone. Raman really wanted to drink and drown himself in his sorrow but he had made himself a promise that he will not drink for Ruhi. He is realising now that he cannot neglect Ruhi for Adi. So, he runs to Ruhi's school takes her from there and goes with her to a nearby park.
He messages Ishita that Ruhi is with him and he will be back with her by evening.
On the other hand Ruhi is on cloud nine by this gesture of her father.
R - Ruhi, aapne pucha nahin ki maine aapko school se off lekar kyun laaya
Ru - Papa, I am very very very happy that you came. Aur waise bhi woh teacher mujhe bore kar rahi thi😃
R - Hawww. dadiamma ho tum bilkul. Acha chalo to bolo aaj sirf hum dono evening masti karenge. Tum bolo tumhe kya kya karna hain ?
They enjoy together till evening and come back home.

Ishita she had an inkling that the whole family was behaving weirdly but she was unaware of the court proceedings.
Reading the message from Raman she was very much surprised that Raman left his office and went to Ruhi. and she got the right time to meet Mihir. So, she went to his office.
M - Arey bhabhi aap yahan? Par Raman bhai to nahin hain office mein.
I - Main Raman se nahin tumse milne aayi hun
M - Mujhse? Kuch problem hai kya bhabhi? Acha, pehle aap mere cabin chaliye, wahan baath karte hain.
In his cabin,
Ishita decides to take it slow. She knows Mihir will never spill the beans as she has seen how loyal he is to Raman.

To be continued...

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Rithika

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Awesome update dear

Hope Ishita comes to know about his fantasies soon

update soon

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GBSC

@GBSC

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

V.nice update.
Yes I'm an ishra fan.
But its the process that made me fall in love with them.
I'm loving raman's actions.
He wants Adi too to be a part of his family.
He is keeping his weakness in check by keeping ishu away.
As a husband he may be hurting her.
But by being extra caring for Ruhi he(raman) would have only shown his side of being a responsible dad.
He is mentally strong as long as he maintains his distance from ishu.
He does not want to go through another heart break.
But the responsible wife that ishu is,she plans to find the reason for his current behaviour through his(raman's) confidante Mihir .
Even though the storyline is similar to the show the scenarios are original.
Eager to know about ishra more.
Will Mihir answer ishu's questions?
Pl continue soon.

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Diksha Naik

@DikshaN

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

awesome update
I love how it progressing with their relationship
it's slow and nice
Adi refused to meet the family
let's see what ishu comes to know from Mihir
do continue soon

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postforforums

@postforforums

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Hi All,

Part 5

Precap - Ishita goes to meet Mihir

Ishita is in a dilemma whether to ask about Raman and his past or not. She is hesitating for various reasons. If she does this she would be breaking Raman's trust when already he has completely distanced himself from her. But, on the other hand she knows, her intentions are not to hurt him in any way but to know him. After a lot of contemplation she decides to go against her 'jagga jasoos mode'. And she gets another topic to ask, about Adi.

[ In my other Ishra OS -The Inner Battle
Raman has mentioned about Adi to Ishita before marriage. I intend to keep it that way. Ishita knows about Adi only what Raman has mentioned and she has not gone into it further ]

I - Mihir, sometimes during the night i have heard Raman taking Adi's name in his sleep. From what I know, Adi is Raman's son right ? After our marriage, the Raman I have seen would never have been an abusive father. So, why not request just for visitation rights from the court. At the very least, he will be able to meet Adi.
Mihir has nothing but smiles in his heart for his bhabhi. Because he is now very sure that if anyone can bring the old Raman, Happy as his mother used to call him, back, it's Ishita. He has already seen how caring and concerned Ishita is and he has also heard a lot from Mihika.
And, he is also taken off-guard by the coincidence. Just when the family had applied for visitation rights, Ishita has also brought out the same topic. His respect towards his bhabhi has grown after this. How he wishes that he would have a sister like her (comparing to Shagun).
Ishita bringing him out of his thoughts, asks,
I - Mihir, maine kuch galat boldiya kya ?
Mihir feels very bad for her bhabhi that nobody in the bhalla family has involved her in this discussion. He knows they have their own reasons but seeing nature, during this time they must they must have had a change of heart. He decides then and there that he is going to tell Ishita about this because he has faith that in the end it will be in favor of his Raman bhai.
M - Bhabhi, actually uncle (Mr Bhalla) has applied for visitation rights on Raman's insistence but was rejected today because Adi himself refused to meet anyone.
I - What ? What did you just say ? Hold on. So, past couple of days everyone were busy in this ?
M - Yes. Actually Raman knows that if he includes his name in visitation, the court will not even accept the request based on the previous judgement against him. So, he asked uncle to include just family members name.
Ishita, on one hand is very much hurt that no one even considered her wee bit important to involve her in this but she also understands why. On the other hand, she cannot help but feel the pain Raman has been going through. No parent in this world ever wants to go through their kids' rejection. Then she realizes that the reason today Raman has taken Ruhi out with him.
Mihir has been watching Ishita. He decided to clear the air first
M - Bhabhi, don't be disheartened. They did not hide this from you with any wrong intention in mind. They just need time to have faith in you, especially Raman. His scars are so deep, you will have to give him ample time and patience.
Ishita decides to do the same.
Ishita smiles at Mihir's understaing nature. She sees herself in him. Maybe he might have been her brother in previous birth😊.
To make the situation light,
I - You are completely opposite to Raman. I mean, he is, he is a Ravan😡. And how did Ravan get a brother like Laxman😉.
M - Not bad bhabhi. Aap par bhi Raman bhai ke sangat ka asar pad raha hai. Yeh one liner bilkul spot on tha.
Ishita, inwardly feels happy listening to that. She looks down and smiles.
I - But Mihir, on a serious note, do not mention Raman about this conversation we had. As you said and you are right, if he needs time I will give him that.
M - Thanks a lot bhabhi. And a special thanks for coming in Raman bhai's life.
That is when Ishita gets a call from Raman,
I - Hello, ha Raman boliye ?
R - Tum kahan ho ?
I - Main ghar nakal chuki hoon. I will reach in sometime. Kyun, kuch important kam tha kya ?
R - Nahin, actually Ruhi zid kar rahi thi tumhe clinic se pick karne. Toh hum tumhare clinic mein hi hai abhi. Anyways, hum bhi nikalte hain yahn se.
Ishita's was way too happy today. First, her conversation with Mihir has cleared few of her doubts she harbored and she came to know one thing very clearly that Raman is a doting father. And, today her husband and her daughter came to pick her from office. Truly, what a day!
Okay Mihir, I shall take my leave now. Ghar par aate rehna.
Okay bhabhi. Take care.

Evening, in the park, Raman and Mr Bhalla are having conversation
Mr B - Raman, I am really sorry beta. Hum court ko convince nahin kar paaye.
R - Papa, aap kyun sorry bol rahe hain. Main itna toh jaanta tha ki Adi mujhse milne mana karega par puri family se milne mana karega yeh maine nahin socha tha. Papa, yeh Shagun ne hee kiya hai. Adi Shagun ki har bath maanta hai. Aur Shagun ko ache bure pahchaan hi nahin hai. Isika to mujhe dar hai papa. kahin aage Adi bhi kuch aisa na kar baithe jisse woh bahar hi na nikal paaye. Anyways papa, aap maa ko sambhal lijiyega. Main jaanta hoon maa kitna miss karti hai Adi ko. Aur main yeh bhi chahta hoon ki ghar par iss bare mein kuch bhi bath na ho. Kyunki Adi ke saath saath Ruhi bhi meri beti hai aur mein use udaas nahin dekhna chahta.
Mr B - I am very proud of you beta. Andar chalte hain.
R - Aap jayiye papa, main thodi der main aata hoon.
This all is witnessed by none other than our Ishita, the jagga jasoos.
The Raman she is seeing is surprising her day after day. How can this rude, arrogant, with the tongue of a snake can be this understanding.
She was about to go from there when she sees him shedding tears holding a pic which is not clearly visible to her. She could not hold herself anymore and goes to him
I - Raman
Raman quickly wipes his tears hiding from her
R(self talk) - yeh Madrasan har bar wrong timing pe tapak padti hai. Kya karoon iska yaar...
I - Raman, are you alright ? Iss waqt aap yahan ?
R - (looking down) Madrasan, tu 2 min ke liye uss taraf paltegi ?
I - kyun ?
R - Yaar, kabhi to meri bath man liya kar, main thodi na tujhe laxman rekha par karne bol raha hoon
I - ravan kumar. (self talk) dailogues bhi ravan ke hi bol rahe hai. chalo inka mind to divert ho raha hai
She turns around.
He composed himself. Cleans his face with his kerchief, hides the photo and then when he stands, all of a sudden he just keep staring at her back. He suddenly shuts his brain off from those desirous thoughts and asks her to turn around.
R - Ask what you want to ask
I - I do not want to ask anything. I saw you sitting and I just came to check
Raman is surprised. Today jagga jasoos has no questions to shoot. Truly, what a day!
R - Ishita, I never thanked you for coming in Ruhi's life (to himself(st), in my life too) na. Let me do that today. Come have your seat. As you mentioned earlier, Nothing and no one can bring back those 5 years for Ruhi when she was devoid of her parents' love. I had left this city when she was 1 year old and that also when she had grown attached to me. Those were the prime years when a kid needs his/her parents the most. And I failed at that. I will live with this sin my whole life because I know no punishment is enough. But I promise, that now I will be there for Ruhi whatever may come. I am sharing this with you because till now I could not completely accept you as Ruhi's mother. I know how much you care and what you have done for Ruhi but still I was hesitant to accept. I am sorry for that. But today I witnessed something truly amazing. Your hospital's address is on tip of her tongue Ishita. And when we reached there everyone greeted her so dearly and she without any hesitancy ran and sat on your seat. I am not saying this is a big thing Ishita, but this is the level of comfort you provide her Ishita. Then and there my doubts were completely cleared Ishita that I do no want to add another sin to my list by questioning the bond you share with Ruhi. I am sorry I realized this late. I am really grateful Ishita that Ruhi has got to chose you as her mother. I sincerely hope and wish Ishita, that this bond between you two keeps going strong everyday.
Ishita was just staring at him with tears of happiness in her eyes. This day has to be the best day after her marriage. To ease the conversation,
I - Ravan and lecture😉. Aur aap mujhe lecture queen bolte ho.
R (self talk) - Sach mein yaar Raman. Tujhe sirf ek thank you bolna tha aur tune itna bada bhashan chipka diya.
R - Kya kare, Sangat ka asar hai.
Ishita could have replied to that but seeing Raman smiling she did not want to break that moment.
R - Chalo, andar chalte hain

In the night Raman was standing in his balcony thinking about today's events. He didn't know how to save Adi from spoiling his life. He knew he had to do something but he has to be patient. So he put that thought out and remembering the after events with Ruhi and Ishita, he had a content smile on his face.
He took out his dairy and started writing.

[Raman's fantasy: +18]
Ishita was just staring at me when I speaking with her. It was a sight to behold. I just wanted to lick her all over her body then and there. Her patience to listen to me was breaking my build up walls. I wanted to go close to ears and send an erotic whisper making her moan my name. I would hold her fingers and give slow and wet kisses in each of her fingers. Will she ever understand the intensity and passion that she brings out in me ? Wil she run away from me knowing my desires ? Will I be able to trust her as a woman ?

To be continued...

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Diksha Naik

@DikshaN

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

awesome update
loved how he handling Ramans emotions
do continue soon

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postforforums

@postforforums

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Hi All

Fast Forward to when Ishita brings Param home and solves Simmi's problem. Here, Raman notices Param's wrong intentions towards Ishita before anyone. And also Mihir's love life issue will be looked from another perspective.

In the YHM serial Raman is shown impulsive and 'act before think kind of man' but here he is impulsive only when it comes to Ishita or Ruhi else he thinks rationally in all situations.

Part 6

Param settles in Simmi's room. Raman is waiting for Ishita.

Raman is in his thoughts. Ishita could have atleast shared it with me but she did not. She is not at fault though. We are not there yet when it comes to trust. But Simmi is my sister, she could have shared it with me about this. Anyways, what has happened has happened. That is when Ishita enters breaking his chain of thoughts.

And there is silence. Both are waiting for the other to say something. Ishita wants to explain to Raman the whole story and she is sorry too for having hidden this from him. She does not want anything to ruin this peace between them.

I - Raman, I am sorry, actually mujhe aapko batana chahiye tha jab mujhe par...

R - Ishita, first and foremost, yes you have to be sorry because it was risky of you to do this alone. Look, you have done nothing wrong, not sharing it with me I understand to some extent, but doing this all alone, its a bit risky, don't you think ?

I - what ? were you worried about me ?

R - oye!! jhansi ki rani, zyada udd mat. Main to yeh kehna chahta hoon ki ab se you not alone. There is a sweet soul called Ruhi whose life depends on you. So before taking any huge steps like these, you will always have to think twice.

Ishita's face fell hearing this. Here, she wanted to clear everything and he thinks I do not think about Ruhi.

I - Raman do you really think I do not think about Ruhi first ? Why do you always, always spoil the mood Raman. Ruhi is my daughter. I think of her every second Raman. Anyways, there is no use explaining it to you.

R - What ? Yaar, where is this heading, why are thinking that way Ishita, I did not mean to..

I - Goodnight Raman.

R(st) - yaar!!! sach mein Raman mood spoiler hi hai tu. Rehne de Raman, tu jitna kam baat karta hai na utna acha hai.

Raman is thinking to solve Mihir's love problem.

R - Mihir, tu Mihika se sach mein pyaar karta hai ?

M(nervous) - Bhai... woh mein

R - (in angry tone) bata mujhe Mihir.

M - Haan bhai, Mein Mihika se pyar karta hun

Raman slaps Mihir hard

R - Yeh thappad uss mms car incident ke liye.

M - Kya bhai, aap ko abhi bhi lagta hai ki woh mms maine banaya hai.

R - Nahin Mihir. Mai janta hun tu aisa kabhi bhi nahin kar sakta. Yeh thappad Mihika ke saath car mein Intimate hone ke liye tha. Tu hi soch Mihir, you have not made your relationship official neither to me nor to her family then you should not have taken that step yet. I know Mihir, the battle with hormones is a very tough one. It always makes us do things on impulse some of which we have to pay for later.

M - I am sorry Bhai.

R - Do you consider me your brother ?

M - Is that even question to ask bhai ?

R - Okay then. I will approve of this alliance but you do three things before that. Are you in ?

Mihir is unable to contain this excitement that his brother, a father figure to him, has approved of his love.

M - Yes bhai, anything you say.

R - First, Sincerely apologize to Mihika and her family for your behavior (in car) that. I know, I know you did nothing wrong from you point of view as you both were in love but that resulted in Mihika and her family to suffer. So, do you agree ?

M - Yes bhai, infact you voiced out my inner thoughts. I will surely do so.

R - Good. Second, find the culprit who created the mms. Actually I wanted to help you in this, but I want you to do this by yourself as it your job safeguard Mihika.

M(in tears) - bhai, I do not know how to thank you. Actually I have hired a private investigator already. I will surely find who has done this.

R - Okay, now the third one. Tell Mihika everything about your relationship with Shagun. Even after that if she agrees to be by your side, share it with her family.

M(shocked) - No bhai, I cannot agree to the third condition. Bhai aap jaante hai ab mera aur uska koi rishta nahin hai toh Mihika ko kyun batayein?

R - Kunki tu Mihika ko apna better half banana chahta hai. Dekh Mihir marital relation mein main fail ho chuka hoon toh main nahin jaanta mujhe tujhko iss par suggest karne ka haq hai ya nahin par.. (looks away)

M - nahin bhai, aapko mujhe kuchh bhi, kuchh bhi bolne ka haq hai. Aap aisa math sochiye.

R - like for a long lasting house the most important thing is a strong foundation, you cannot start this relation based on secrets, lies and mistrust. Think if Mihika comes to know this from someone else or if someday Shagun interferes. You are getting my point right ?

M - Yes bhai, but what if she leaves knowing this. Even Ishita bhabhi will come to know of this. Will this be okay to reveal ?

R - It has to come to light someday. And this part does not concern Ishita much, so I have not disclosed it to her yet. This part is related to you so you have to be the first to reveal it. I know it is not easy so take your time till you complete the first two tasks. Third one I will support you, do not worry.

M - Okay bhai. Thanks a lot bhai for accepting my relationship.

R - I have not acknowledged yet. I will accept only after these three tasks are completed successfully. And I am very serious about it. All the three have to be successful, only then...

M - Yes bhai.

R - And Mihir, I still want you to reconsider your relation with Shagun. You can still give her a chance. Please do not sacrifice for my sake. I know how much you cared for her. Relationships are very complex Mihir and the emotions that crop up due to these are much more tangled.

M - I know bhai what you want to say. To be honest, even I thought to reconsider bhai, but she is leaving no space for me bhai. I did not break the relation just for you bhai but for myself too. I fear her bhai. The things she does and make the people around her do too, I fear her for that.

Raman hugs Mihir.

R - It's okay. It's alright. I fear that too because Adi is with her. Adi is with her Mihir, what if he turns out like her. Sometimes I get nightmares even thinking this. Adi ko kaise wahan se nikalna samajh hi nahin aa raha hai Mihir.

M - Don't worry bhai, Adi aapka beta hai, uspe bharosa rakhiye. Sab thik hojayega.

R - Okay, enough of this, you get those three tasks done asap.

M - Yes bhai.

Mihir apologizes to Mihika and her family too. They already know that he has not created the mms, so they decide to give this relation another chance.

Ishita is thinking how Raman will react to this. Raman enters the room

I - Raman, are you okay with Mihir and Mihika's relation ? I mean you were against it na

R - (playing along) I am still against it. I do not want Mihir to get hooked to that Madrasi sambar

I - Kya kahan aapne ? Madrasi sambar na. Listen Mr Raman Kumar Bhalla, Mihir aur Mihika ki shaadi toh main karvake rahungi, aapke saamne. Dethte rahiyega.

R - Han han dekhlenge. Mihir mera bhai hai, main bhi dethta hun tum kaise shaadi karvati ho.

R(st) - Wah Raman, kitne dino baad yeh jkr ke darshan mil rahe hain. Thanks to you Mihir. Ab ye mauka nahin gavana chahiye.

R - Aur waise Mihir ke liye Mihika suit hi nahin karti. Height, no match. Kitna chillati hai woh. Uss din toh mujh par bhi baras padi thi.

I - Mihir and Mihika love each other so nothing to be bothered about height or appearance. Aur, han, aap to deserve karte hai. Mummyji ne bachpan mein aapko thodi daant laga di hoti toh yeh Ravan to nahi milta mujhe

R - (flirtatiously) sach mein

Ishita looking at Raman's dimples mellows down and looks away.

I(st) - Yeh Raman ko kya hogaya hain. Mujhe to aise lag raha hai ki yeh mujhse janbujkar lad rahe hain.

I - Mera challenge hai aapse Raman, ki Mihir-Mihika ki shaadi toh main karvake ke rahungi.

R(st) - Main bhi toh yahi chahtha hun.

R - Bas baatein banana seeklo tumse. Lecture queen😛

I - Kya kaha aapne, main, lecture queen. arghhh😡

Here, the news from the private investigator(PI) shocks Mihir [Not going into 'how he found out' details. Not important to my story]. He is numb to react. But after a deep thought he decides to share this with Raman

M - Bhai, what I going share, please take it calmly. I got to know who has created the mms. It was Romi.

R - (shocked and angry) Are you mad Mihir. Think before you speak yaar...

M - I know bhai, It was shocking to me too. That's why I have confirmed it again and again along with the PI.

R - Are you sure Mihir. I mean there might have been mistake from the PI's side. I know Romi is spoiled adolescent but to this extent. One sec, hold on. I know Romi has a habit of not deleting watched movies for a long time. Let me check his laptop first.

Till then halt your thoughts okay. I know it is difficult but just for today.

M - okay bhai.

Raman somehow (not important to my story) checks Romi's laptop and confirms it is him. Raman doesn't know how to react to this. He composes himself. He decides to bring Romi back to right path. He comes up with a plan [Author - I don't know this plan is right or not but still it is my attempt. Criticism, cynicism accepted]

Raman calls and informs Rinky about the plan and explains what Romi has done and asks her if she is in this plan to bring Romi onto right path.

R - I am sorry Rinky that I am making you lie and be part of this but I am not seeing any other way bring Romi back. And anytime, I mean anytime you want to back out just let me know.

Rinky - No bhai, I want to help. I will do as you say

R - Thanks Rinky. I am very proud of you.

Raman from an unknown number sends sms to Romi telling Rinky and her boyfriend's mms has been created when they were kissing in the car

Romi is shocked to know this. He calls Rinky and asks her about her boyfriend. She stutters initially but says, yes she has a boyfriend and yes I was kissing him. But how do you know this ?

Ro - Rinky, what have you been doing there. You were sent to study right.

Ri - Really bhai. Do you have right to say this. Jo khud din bhar ladkiyon ko tad ne mein laga rahta hai.

Romi gets a huge blow when his own sister has this image of him.

Romi instatly cuts the call and goes to Raman and shares the sms news to him.

Raman puts his head down sighing and says

R - tumhare liye toh common hai na Romi. Tumne bhi to banaya hai na mms

Romi falls back listening to this

R - kyun Romi. Aaj bhi chup hi rahega. Sach nahin batayega. Rinky ka mms nahin bana hai. Woh sms maine hi tujhe bheja tha. Kaise feel hua Romi jab tujhe pata chala Rinky ka mms bana hai. Yeh sunkar hi tu itna darr gaya, par tune toh sach mein mms banakar leak bhi kardiya. Tu hi soch Romi Mihika aur uske family ko kya kuch nahin sahna pada hoga. Mujhe pata hai tu padhaai nahin karta and apni masti mein kho chuka hai par tu iss hadd tak gir jayega maine socha hi nahin tha Romi.

Romi realized what a grave sin he has committed. He immediately calls Mihir and Mihika and tells them everything and is ready for any punishment.

Ro - I know sorry is not enough but still I am very very sorry for this. I have decided that I will pay for this act of mine.

[To the readers - I apologize for not conveying Mihika's emotions because unable to. I am really sorry for that]

Romi goes to police station and confesses everything. Mihir informs Raman of Romi's huge step. Raman asks Mihika what she wants.

R - Mihika, jaisa tum chahogi waisa hi hoga. Tum 'mms leak' par charges press karna chahti ho toh waisa hi hoga. I will not stop you. I am really sorry for my brother's actions.

But still I will be on his side in the police station as he is my brother. I am not telling you to drop the charges Mihika as it your freedom and right to decide on that.

Ishita and Iyers come to know of this.

Mihika decides to drop charges.

I - Raman aapko pata tha phir bhi aapne mujhe nahin bataya. Mihika meri behen hain Raman. Iss haq se to bata dete.

Raman is silent.

Romi hears this and interrupts.

Ro - Nahin bhabhi isme Raman bhai ki koi galti nahin hai. Infact unhone hi mujhe sahi raasta dikhaya. I am sorry bhabhi. Main apni masti itna andha ho gaya tha ki mujhe pata hi nahin chala ke mein kitna bada paap kar raha hoon. I will repent for this all my life bhabhi.

I - Thanks Romi for realizing your mistake and taking responibilty for the same. Mistakes happen Romi but being irresponsible and not rectifying them is a huge sin.

Raman interrupts

R - yahan par apna bhashan chipkana zaroori hai. Romi tu ja, nahin toh iska mantra jaap chalta rahega.

Romi goes from there smiling

I - Raman, main Romi ko kuch Important samjha rahi thi na. Aapko usse bhi chid hai kya.

Ishita is also enjoying this nature of Raman when he always provokes her to fight.

I - Waise aapko kaise pata chala ki Romi ne kiya yeh sab ?

R - Mihir ne pata lagaya aur phir mujhe bataya.

I - Dekha maine kaha tha na ki Mihika ke liye Mihir perfect hai.

Ab toh man jaayiye.

R - Oh Madam, Mihir Mihika se pyar karta hai yeh uski problem hai. Mujhe accept karna hai ya nahin yeh meri problem. Par ek bath yad rakh madrasan, Mihir mere approval ke bina Mihika se shaadi nahin karega.

I - Par aapko Mihika se problem kya hai ?

R - Kuch bhi problem nahin hai. Bas she is not my choice for Mihir. Aur Mihir ke liye main khud ladki chununga.

I - Aap Mihir par itna haq kyun jata te hain. Matlab maine aapko kisi bhi family member par itna haq jatate hue nahin dekha

R - Kyunki Mihir khud chahta hai ki main uss par haq jataun.

Aur Mihir aur Mera rishta (pause) han, tumhare aur Ruhi ke rishte ki tarah hai samjho. We are not blood related but still there's that strong bond which we can't express it in words. He has been with me through all phases of my life.

Ishita feels a bit jaelous seeing the bond Raman shares with Mihir. Mihir knows everything about Raman.

I - Mujhe toh lagta hai woh aapka bhai nahin aapki biwi hai😉

R - Kya ? Tum pagal toh nahin hogayi ho.

I - Aur nahin toh kya, jaise aapne Mihir ko describe kiya hai, woh ek biwi ke liye hi karte hain

R - Madrasan, kyun tujhe jalan ho rahi hai😛

I - (taken aback) Mujhe aur jalan. Dream on Ravan kumar.

Mihir and Mihika hear are listening to their conversation. Mihir is very touched by listening to his bhai's confession about him. Mihika feels low as she thinks still her jiju doesn't approve of her and Mihir. Mihir knows his bhai is only teasing bhabhi.

Ishita and Mihika conversation

Mi - akka I did right na by dropping the charges ?

I - Yes Miku

Mi - Actually Romi himself confessed and went to police station to surrender

I - Even I could see sincerety in him. It is good that he be given a chance

Mi - Adding to that even Raman jiju apologized on behalf of his brother. He even asked me to not drop charges if I am not willing to

I - (shocked and surprised) You mean Raman himself did all this ?

Mi - Akka but still he has not accepted Mihir and my relation. What to do akka ? I know Mihir, akka, he will never go against Raman jiju. For Mihir, Raman jiju always comes first. You know, sometimes I feel jealous. He is most happiest whenever Raman jiju's name comes up.

I(st) - Even I feel jealous😡

I - You dont worry Miku, Mihir aur teri shaadi toh main karvake rahungi. Dekhte hain woh Ravan kumar kya kar leta hai.

Mi - Kya hua akka. Jiju se jhagda hua hai kya ?

I - Unse toh baat karna hi jhagda hai

Raman Mihir conversation

R - Toh Mihir, pehle 2 tasks toh ho gaye, ab baki hai sabse bada kam. Tu tayyar hai na ?

M - Bhai tayyar to nahin hoon but main accept kar chuka hoon bhai. Jaise aapne kaha use batana toh zaroori hai uske baad hi baat aage badana thik hai

R - Thanks Mihir mujhe samajh ne ke liye aur har waqt mera saath dene ke liye

M - Kaisi baatein kar rahe hain bhai. Aaj main jo kuch bhi hoon aapke karan hi to hoon. Aur aap mujhe thanks bole rahe hain

R - Acha acha ab se no thanks.

M - Waise bhai aap bhabhi chidha kyun rahe hain

R - Han woh bas aise hi, jkr ke roop mein lal tamatar ban jati madrasan

[To be Continued...]

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nafnaf

@nafnaf

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#39

I just read all the parts together!!!
I absolutely love your version of YHM!!
The way the MMS was handled was great!!
And Raman wants Mihir to tell Mihika about Shagun is just as it should be!!!
And you are very very slowly bringing Ishra closer - yayyy!!
And your thought of Raman noticing Param's intentions is also brilliant"!!!!
So the outcome will different!!

Eagerly awaiting next update soon please!!
Thank you so much for the pm!!

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Srivallika

@Srivallika

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#40

.Hello Author...i've just completed reading all the chapters and this has made me remember the old yhm and ohh how i miss it..I really liked the way how you had expressed Raman's thoghts,fellings so clearly which we never really get to watch in the show..Hope ishita gets to know about raman's inner battle soon.

The way the whole mms fiasco was handled is great .Romi regretting and apologising for his deeds was written nicely.And now Raman would get to know about Param's intensions before that's interesting,i am eager to know how will he handle the situation. Continue soon...wil be waiting.