Ishra ss-bawra mann dekhne chala ek sapna#4,epilogue on pg 70updt10/12 - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Heyy...
Please update this one soonnn...
Eagerly waiting..
It's looking sooo longg ThT I didn't get it's update..
You haven't update yet..

Please update Soonish..
N yeah Please don't let Raman die..
Please ..😭
Please..😭
Please..😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Many congratulations n the thread!!!
A lovely story!!
Teaser was shocking!!
Please don't let Raman die!!!
Please continue soon!
Thank you so much for the pm!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrts for new thread di... 😃 ...interesting teaser...finally sarika's truth is out...hope raman is fine...plz plz update soon and thanks for pm di...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome story...
Loved it...
Ishita has entered his house a maid to win his love, but then she got to know d pathetic life he is living loosing his family...n she slowly brought him out of that n make him live his life...a one stage I so badly wanted to beat romi...he is so ignorant to his bro pain n always blaming him for d death of their family but now I really pity him bec he is just under the influence of a bad company...he also loves his brother a lot...but because of his rude behaviour Raman was so close to death...but Bec of ishita's love he became normal n was able to love her...ohh their past were connected...happy that appa wanted them to marry...n their marriage is going to fix...really wanted to kill that param for what he had done with ishita..but thank god romi came on right time n teach him a lesson...but d news of Raman flight clash was shocking...but really hope he is safe n fine...teaser was awesome...finally romi came to know d truth...
Eagerly waiting for the update...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congratulations for new thread Di...
Interesting teaser Di..
Romi got to know the truth...
Plz update soon..
Thank u...
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PART 20

Ishita and romi got shocked hearing this and ishita said-yeh kya bakwaas kar rahe ho. Raman ko flight crash ho gayi.

Mihir-yes bhabhi, I am telling the truth. I saw it on news, saying so he switched off the TV and all saw the news of flight crash from Delhi to Mumbai. Ishita crushed on floor hearing this while romi was equally shocked.

Ishita-nahi, it can't be happen.mere Raman ko kuch nahi ho sakta. He is all fine, mihir he is all fine. I know no-one can separate from from him. Hume koi alag nahi kar sakta. I know, she said and got up at once.

Ishita took her car keys and ran out saying -i had to go to him, he needs me. Saying so she ran out of the apartment wearing the ripped up Saree and romi's jacket.

Romi and mihir look at each other and next second both ran behind her. She was sitting in the car trying to start her car but it was taking time as she hasn't used it for months.

Ishita hit on the steering wheel and said-tu chalti kyun nahi, chal jaldi se. She was cursing when mihir said-bhabhi.

Ishita looked at mihir and said crying-gaadi start nahi ho rahi mihir,i have to go to raman. Please start kar do.

Mihir eyes got teary seeing her so devastated. He walked to her and said-bhabhi, Aap mere saath chalo.

Ishita -raman ke paas jaana hai.

Mihir-i am taking u there, Aap please meri gaadi mein baithiye.

Ishita was just looking at him not understanding his words as the accident news was going on in her mind.

Finally mihir and romi took ishita out of the car and drove towards the accident spot. Crash happened near to Delhi around 100 kms away from the airport. Mihir drove fastly to reach there while ishita was continuously praying to her Murugan for his well-being. On the other hand romi was thinking how he always wanted that something should happened to him. And today like his wish was granted, Raman's flight was crashed but today he wasn't happy but guilty for thinking so about his brother, his only guardian, his only family. He closed his eyes to send a silent prayer to matarani to keep his brother safe.

It took them about to three hours to reach their due to heavy traffic. Mihir stopped the car and ishita got out of the car like maniac. She ran to the spot and saw the aircraft was still burning a little while dead bodies were coming out on stretchers.

Ishita cried seeing this and prayed for the nth time for Raman and was going near the aircraft when the constable stop her and said-what r u doing ma'am, can't u see accident hua hai. U cant go there.

Ishita-dont stop me, I had to go. Mere Raman hai wahan, I had to find him, unko kuch nahi hoga chahiye. Mujhe jaane dijiye ander, I had to save him, I have to save my love. She was saying crying struggling hard to go near the aircraft when mihir and romi took came and said holding ishita-bhabhi u can't go. Wahan danger hai.

Ishita cried and said-wahan Raman hai mihir. Mujhe jaane do.

Constable -arey ma'am, why u r not understanding, ander abhi bhi aag hai ,fuel is leaking. kabhi bhi blast ho sakta hai. Aapko kuch ho gaya toh mujhe jawaab dena hoga.

Ishita-u r not understanding, mere pati hai ander. I have to save him. Agar unhe kuch ho gaya toh main mar jaungi. Please let me go inside. She said folding her hands crying.

Constable -ander koi nahi hai madam ji. Sirf laashein hai, everyone died. Not even a single passenger survived. If u want to find ur husband's dead body then, he was saying when ishita clutched his collar and slapped him hard saying-he is not dead, u r getting it. Mere Raman zinda hai, agar bakwaas ki toh muh tod dungi. She said angrily with blood red eyes.

Constable-why u r slapping me, it's my job. Abhi tujhe thaane bhejwata hoon.

Ishita-bhejwa de thaane, phansi chadwa de but I will not spare anyone who will talk rubbish about my raman, he is not dead body, he is alive. Mere Raman zinda hai. She said shouting at top of her voice.

Mihir told romi to hold ishita while he apologised for ishita's behaviour.

Mihir-sorry, she is too shattered with the news.

Constable -i understand but we r also doing our job. If u want u can check the dead bodies or wait till all the bodies cams out, trust me sir Noone survived. Everyone is dead. He said making mihir's eyes moist.

On the other hand, ishita was uncontrollable. She was running here and there to find Raman. Romi was trying hard to control her but she was not hearing anything,at last romi hold her tight and said-bhabhi, stop being so restless. Bhai will be OK. Aap vishwas Karo.

Ishita looked at romi and said hugging him-raman chahiye romi, le aao unko. Please le aao. She said and sat on the ground hugging herself tight. Mihir and romi cried seeing her condition. She was behaving like maniac, not listening to anyone. Two times romi saved her from getting banged with cars.

They stayed there for more then five hours till the mess was cleared. They took out all the dead bodies, they were searching raman like mad but couldn't get any trace of raman. They decided to go back as police assured them that they will inform them if they get any information regarding Raman. They were going back but ishita wasn't ready to go anywhere. She sat on the ground and said-u guys go, I will wait for raman. Unko liye bina main Kahin nahi jaane wali. She said sitting on the ground adamantly. Mihir and romi tried alot to make her understand but she was nowhere to listen, at last romi and mihir literally drag her to their car while she was still crying to go back.

At last later in night they reached home all worn-out. Romi and mihir took ishita inside while she was walking lifelessly lost in her own grief.

It was more then two hours since they were back, ishita was in Raman's room sitting taking his shirts in her room and sobbing silently.

Ishita-i know raman, u can't leave me alone. U love me way too much to hurt me. I know u r teasing me Raman. But please, stop this teasing now. I can't take it anymore. Please wapas aa jaiye raman. Main mar rahi hoon aapke bina. Please come soon Raman. She was talking to his shirt hugging them tight.

On the other hand, mihir was constantly in touch with police to get some news about raman but to his bad luck, there was no trace of raman.mihir hung the call telling them to find Raman soon. Mihir was too worried for raman and even ishita. She was behaving like mad without Raman. While Romi was sitting sadly in his room thinking about all the times he has ignored and insulted raman due to his hatred towards him and was feeling guilty of his deeds when sarika sat next to him giving him a glass of wine.

Romi-no sarika, I don't feel like drinking, infact I am, he was saying when sarika said-oh come on, stop this romi. I don't know why u r behaving like this. Raman marta hai toh mare, hume kya lena dena. Infact I am happy that he died now we don't have to share our property. Just think romi, saari property sirf aur sirf hamari hogi. Kaash raman pehle hi mar gaya hota in that plane crash,we don't have to plan so much against him. She said in a go ,but suddenly realised what she told. She bite her finger realising her mistake while romi was looking at her with shocked expression.

Romi-kya kaha tumne, u planned against Raman bhai. Bolo kya kaha tumne. He said holding her tight poking his nails in her flesh.

Sarika-what r u doing romi. It's hurting. Stop it.

Romi-no first tell me, what u did with Bhai. What u planned against him. Bolo warna tujhe abhi maar dalunga. He said clutching her neck.

Sarika tried to loosen his hold but when he didn't, she said-i didnt planned anything, it was param who planned. Maine toh uss uska saath de rahi thi. Saying so she narrated all the plans they made against raman just to separate him from Raman.

Romi was shocked to hear how they made him believe that Raman killed their family.

Romi-but tumne uska saath kyun diya. U loved me naa.

Sarika looked down without saying anything. He tighten his hold on her neck and said-batao warna bahut bura hoga.

Sarika -coz I love him, I am his girlfriend not urs. She said in fear making romi stunned.

Romi-u cheated me, u bloody bitch. Main tujhe chodunga nahi, he said clutching her neck tight while sarika was trying hard to free herself. After trying much she said-please leave me, tumhe apne raman bhai ki kasam.

Romi left her instantly and said-jiske saath itna galat kiya,aaj ussi ki kasam de kar bach rahi ho. Anyway I will leave u as nothing is important for me in world then my raman. But I will surely throw u out. Saying so he hold her hand and drag her to the door and throw her out. Sarika cried not to throw her out but he was nowhere to listen. He just throw sarika out and closed the door.

He was going back to his room when the door bell rang.

Romi -she came again, iss sarika ki toh main. Ek toh bhai ki wajah se hum pehle hi worried hai aur Upar se yeh, saying so he opened the door and got shocked to see Raman standing infront of him with bandage on his head and hand.

Romi -bhai aap, he said with shocked expression.

Raman -yes, woh actually I was going, he couldn't complete as romi hugged him tight and start crying like a baby.

Romi-i am sorry bhai, really sorry for my every mistake, dobara iss tarah kabhi chod kar mat jaana hume bhai, we all were dying without u. He was crying and saying while Raman was all confused that why he is crying.

Romi-main bhi kitna pagal hoon, aapko chot lagi hai aur aapki ander bhi nahi bulaya, aaiye bhai, come inside. He said and bring raman inside and shouted -mihir, bhabhi dekho Raman bhai aayen hai.

Raman was pleasantly surprised hearing bhabhi from romi. He was thinking what went wrong when mihir came and hugged him tight crying bitterly.

Mihir -thank god u r OK bhai, we were so scared hearing about the flight crash. He said making Raman realise that the flight he was about to take crashed. He was about to say something when he saw ishita coming to him. She came close to him and cupped his face.

Raman -I Am alright jaan, main woh flight nahi le paaya tha. He said while ishita hugged him tight crying bitterly. She was trying to say something but words weren't coming out of her mouth, she was just murmuring something and then start crying again. Romi and mihir too hugged him tight and said-aisa phir kabhi mat Karna bhai, we can't live without u. They said crying while ishita was just holding raman tight hiding her face in him like he will disappear if she leave him for a second while Raman couldn't stop but smile seeing the love they have for him. He wrapped the trio in his arms and said-mujhe kuch nahi hua,kuch ho hi nahi sakta, tum log mujhse itna pyaar joh karte ho. Ur love is strong enough to protect me against everything. He said hugging them tight while they were hugging Raman tight like they have finally found their solace .

That's all for now, enjoy and do comment and hit like. Will wait for it.

Ps-200+ likes with long comments for next updt.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Romi-no sarika, I don't feel like drinking, infact I am, he was saying when sarika said-oh come on, stop this romi. I don't know why u r behaving like this. Raman marta hai toh mare, hume kya lena dena. Infact I am happy that he died now we don't have to share our property. Just think romi, saari property sirf aur sirf hamari hogi. Kaash raman pehle hi mar gaya hota in that plane crash,we don't have to plan so much against him. She said in a go ,but suddenly realised what she told. She bite her finger realising her mistake while romi was looking at her with shocked expression.

Romi-kya kaha tumne, u planned against Raman bhai. Bolo kya kaha tumne. He said holding her tight poking his nails in her flesh.

Sarika-what r u doing romi. It's hurting. Stop it.

Romi-no first tell me, what u did with Bhai. What u planned against him. Bolo warna tujhe abhi maar dalunga. He said clutching her neck.

Sarika tried to loosen his hold but when he didn't, she said-i didnt planned anything, it was param who planned. Maine toh uss uska saath de rahi thi. Saying so she narrated all the plans they made against raman just to separate him from Raman.

Romi was shocked to hear how they made him believe that Raman killed their family.

Romi-but tumne uska saath kyun diya. U loved me naa.

Sarika looked down without saying anything. He tighten his hold on her neck and said-batao warna bahut bura hoga.

Sarika -coz I love him, I am his girlfriend not urs. She said in fear making romi stunned.

Romi-u cheated me, u bloody bitch. Main tujhe chodunga nahi, he said clutching her neck tight while sarika was trying hard to free herself. After trying much she said-please leave me, tumhe apne raman bhai ki kasam.

Romi left her instantly and said-jiske saath itna galat kiya,aaj ussi ki kasam de kar bach rahi ho. Anyway I will leave u as nothing is important for me in world then my raman. But I will surely throw u out. Saying so he hold her hand and drag her to the door and throw her out. Sarika cried not to throw her out but he was nowhere to listen. He just throw sarika out and closed the door.

He was going back to his room when the door bell rang.

Romi -she came again, iss sarika ki toh main. Ek toh bhai ki wajah se hum pehle hi worried hai aur Upar se yeh, saying so he opened the door and got shocked to see Raman standing infront of him with bandage on his head and hand.

Romi -bhai aap, he said with shocked expression.

Raman -yes, woh actually I was going, he couldn't complete as romi hugged him tight and start crying like a baby.

Romi-i am sorry bhai, really sorry for my every mistake, dobara iss tarah kabhi chod kar mat jaana hume bhai, we all were dying without u. He was crying and saying while Raman was all confused that why he is crying.

Romi-main bhi kitna pagal hoon, aapko chot lagi hai aur aapki ander bhi nahi bulaya, aaiye bhai, come inside. He said and bring raman inside and shouted -mihir, bhabhi dekho Raman bhai aayen hai.

Raman was pleasantly surprised hearing bhabhi from romi. He was thinking what went wrong when mihir came and hugged him tight crying bitterly.

Mihir -thank god u r OK bhai, we were so scared hearing about the flight crash. He said making Raman realise that the flight he was about to take crashed. He was about to say something when he saw ishita coming to him. She came close to him and cupped his face.

Raman -I Am alright jaan, main woh flight nahi le paaya tha. He said while ishita hugged him tight crying bitterly. She was trying to say something but words weren't coming out of her mouth, she was just murmuring something and then start crying again. Romi and mihir too hugged him tight and said-aisa phir kabhi mat Karna bhai, we can't live without u. They said crying while ishita was just holding raman tight hiding her face in him like he will disappear if she leave him for a second while Raman couldn't stop but smile seeing the love they have for him. He wrapped the trio in his arms and said-mujhe kuch nahi hua,kuch ho hi nahi sakta, tum log mujhse itna pyaar joh karte ho. Ur love is strong enough to protect me against everything. He said hugging them tight while they were hugging Raman tight like they have finally found their solace .


Yayyy
My fav part
Finally sarika ne khud hi bol dia..
Dat ye unka plan tha
Use raman se alag krne k liye
Aur just look at there bond
Tumhe tumhare raman bhai ki qasam
Chor do mjhe
Aur usne chor dia
Awww
Pr sarika ko nikal dia finally
And dn raman ki entry
Wow
Humare hero ne flight le hi nhi
Aur ishita mihir aur romi
Lag gaye uske gale
How sweet
Just luv it..
Now raman would never be depressed
Naa hi use koi pills ki zaroorat hogi
Finally he got his family back
Just luv it..
Update more soon
Look i quoted my fav part even

Edited by NIDA.ISHRAFAN - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dekho
Aj tum complain nhi kr skti
Nidu tum late ho
Bohot late lateef hogaye ho
Kabhi jldi rply nhi krte
Pooja di ki story mai krdia
Mere mai nhi kia
Look
Aj teri ye wish bhi grant krdi..😆
Aftr all
Ab tum meri wish grant krogi
Mini geenie
The great geenie ki choti aur moti behan😉😆
Han tau hum kaha the
Han meri wish ye hai k...
I want update
Baba saheb ...
N meera si deewani #2
Umm nhi mann bawra
Uhhh aur bhoot wali
Aur vo jis mai raman ko ishita marne se bachati hai
Aur vo lawyer wali
Aur vo wali jis mai raman andha hojata hai
Han tau total 7 stories hogaye
Aj konsi 2 story update krdo
Tau u can start
Abhi se..

Han tau about comment
Ishita gets to know about plane crash
And trio gets to airport to get any news of raman
Where dat man says
Every passenger died
And gets a tight slap on his face...👏👏
Yr usko pta hona chahiye na hero marta nhi hai
Aise hi bol dia
Tau jkr se thappad tau bnta hai
Hehehehe
Oky yr mai hans rahe hun
Tension hai abhi update mai
Sooo dy (romi n mihir) took ishu force fully
And trying to get any news of raman
Where dat bitch sarika
Spill all the beans
N he gets to know his raman bhai is innocent
N he throw her out of his house
N finally raman is back
With a bandage on his head
Dat means he met an accident
And he could not take dat flight
And most imp scene i mean to say
Emotional
Trio hugged him
Telling him how scared dy were without him
And he was smiling
Dat how much dy luv him
Luv is wat he all craves fr
And just that news
And how scared dy are
N he hugged them
Assuring dm
Dat he is fine
But mostly he is assuring himself
Dat he is loved by all three of them
Specially his baby brother
Who used to hate him
N in last the shared hug
And u ended it
Bechare raman ko rest bhi krne nhi dia
Ab jb tk tum update nhi krogi
Vo bechara
Aise hi khara rahega.
Aur uski tabiyat theek nhi
Tau jldi update krna..😉😆
Edited by NIDA.ISHRAFAN - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Raksha me first yipppeee🥳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yayyy
Dekho atlast em first on ur update
Vo bhi on my one of most fav stories
Dekh lo..
Mai bhi first ho skti hun

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