REDEMPTION ISHRA FF NOTE AND CHAPTER 22 page 52 - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
#81
Sorry for lite nice part waiting for past
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82
Lovely update...
Poor ishita she was cheated by her appa...
Mr.iyer is soo disgusting...
Raman knows the truth now...
Continue soon...
Tanx for the pm...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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NOTE

Hi every one, please forgive me for the late updates! I will post the new part today evening. Ishra past will be in the part after this part. I can't pm all my loyal readers yet on the same day,please bear with me for a few more days.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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it's ok dear
waiting for the next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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CHAPTER-10


Raman woke up from a restless, disturbing sleep. His sleep muddled brain slowly recovered the events that had taken place in Ishitha's living room a few hours back. Tears started their journey once again from his eyes.


Raman jumped to his feet and ran towards Ishitha's bedroom, but it was empty. When he went into the kitchen in search of her, he noticed the open back door moving violently in the strong wind. It was raining cats and dogs and Ishitha was nowhere to be seen.


Without thinking much , he went out into the rain, calling out her name. He ran along the beach calling out her name. Millions of thoughts and emotions passed through his mind.


He heard a loud wail . ISHITHA!


He moved towards the source of the sound and reached a small clearing, which he never noticed before. He carefully walked through the clearing. Once his eyes adjusted to the darkness, he managed to locate Ishitha's position.


Certain sights , certain sounds, smells, or memories get forever engraved in a human being's mind in strangest circumstances. These memories will haunt us throughout our life, coming to us in the most unexpected time , with the power to wrench your heart a million times. The sight before Raman was one such...


The mother of his son lay on a small platform too small to accommodate her, hugging it as if her life depended on it, blabbering away in Tamil. The sobs that escaped her mouth could touch even a stonehearted man.


The rain masked the tears that escaped from both the pairs of eyes.


When lightning struck, Raman recognised that the platform was actually a tomb. When thunder followed , Ishitha screamed out for her mother in fear . She tightened her hold on the tomb. Raman felt his heart breaking into a million pieces


Raman walked towards Ishitha. He gently touched her shoulders. Ishitha was shocked to see Raman there. She quickly made her face impassive. Raman silently watched Ishitha's unsuccessful attempts to cover up whatever he had witnessed

there. She quickly walked out of the clearing and Raman readily followed.


" Raman...um...I did not know that you all got back..." Ishitha told in a stammering voice.


They were walking along the beach now, oblivious to the incessant rain.


"Did you have fun today? Did the children trouble you much? Have you all had your dinner? Did the children get wet?"


Her nonstop questions infuriated him to no end. He walked in front of her and pulled her towards himself by her arms. Once the initial shock wore off, Ishitha started struggling.


"STOP STRUGGLING YOU MAD WOMAN! The children are fine, I am fine, the world is perfectly fine, even your Muthuswami is fine, but are you FINE?"


" I am fine and even if I am not, it is none of your buisness. You just make sure your family and friends are FINE! Ishitha spat back.


" You are the mother of my son and it is my buisness to see to it that you are fine!"


"RAMAN BHALLA , I AM GETTING WET TO MY BONES HERE, I HAD A VERY BAD DAY, I JUST WANT TO GO HOME , CHANGE MY DRESS AND SLEEP, LEAVE MY HANDS NOW AND DONT EVEN DARE TO UTTER THE F-WORD ONCE MORE!" Ishitha said angrily.


" I am really sorry for your mother, Ishitha" Raman said in a sombre voice.


The sincerity in Raman's voice melted Ishitha.


" Its been eighteen years since amma left us. I can never get rid of that hollowness that she had left behind Raman. I tried... but ...everyday this year...the pain in my heart gets fresh as a newly acquired wound...it just reminds me how much lonely I am..."


A humorless chuckle escaped her lips.


Raman wanted to apologise to Ishitha for the uncountable mistakes he had committed. He wanted to hug her and cry his heart out, tell her the circumstances that forced him to do all that he had done eleven years ago. But tonight was not about his redemption. Tonight was about healing Ishitha or at least comfort her, convince her that she is not alone from now on, promising her that he will be there with her forever, holding her hands in the face of any hardship.


Raman bent his head and gently placed his lips on Ishitha's soft lips.. Ishitha went limp in his hands.


"Trust me Ishitha, trust me for this last time in your life. I promise, I will never break your heart again." Raman whispered against her lips.

Ishitha was amazed at Raman's sudden change of heart. In the morning he was at his sarcastic best, now he was trying to kiss her. She can never trust him again , but he was right when he said that he will never break her heart again, he had done that many times in the past and now he no longer had the power to hurt her. He did not love her, neither did she. Then what was his motive? She will ponder over his intentions in the morning.

Ishitha looked up and their eyes met, she could not see anything but immense respect for her in his black depths. Maybe tonight , she should just toss every one of her inhibitions away and for once follow her desires. She knew that Raman is not ready to offer her anything other than his body tonight and she felt no desire for anything more. She was no longer the naive Ishitha who associated sex with love. She just wanted to let go of her loneliness, at least for tonight.



The second time Raman kissed her, Ishitha responded with equal passion. Some recessive part of her brain whispered that it was her first kiss which made her smile in between the kiss. She readily allowed Raman to carry her to her own bedroom, never once breaking eye contact.



This was not their first time together, but in many ways it was. He never took out the time to actually look at her before, now he worshiped her body with his eyes, with patience and pleasure. Ishitha sensed the eagerness to please her in his every touch and caress. His actions awakened in her a desire, that has been suppressed for longer than a decade, and she felt herself returning the pleasure he was generously bestowing on her, as sincerely as she could. The reverence with which he kissed her fading stretch marks and the wetness of his tears on them brought tears to her eyes as well. He made love to her so beautifully that the memory of that night got forever imprinted in their minds. They reached a climax filled with togetherness and satisfaction. Their heartbeats and the warmth of their entwined bodies lulled them into a deep sleep.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
emotional update
ramanw as worried for ishita he found sihita on her mother thomb
poor ishita loved the way raman lessen her pain
pls continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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THANKS FOR YOUR VALUABLE COMMENT, WILL UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
Lovely.
Raman search for ishu and find hr on hr mother tomb.
Ishu is not able to believe raman again.
Update nxt part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
very emotional and nice update
ishu is so lonely
and Raman wants to apologize for his behaviour in the past
do continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90
Lovely and emotional update. ..
Raman is guilty...
He seeks apology from ishita...
Loved it totally...
Continue soon...
Tanx for the pm...

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