REDEMPTION ISHRA FF NOTE AND CHAPTER 22 page 52

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PROLOGUE



They say that labor pain is one of the greatest pains that the human body can endure,but it was worth it for it also brought an ocean of happiness in her heart. She got her child. Her Adi...Raman Kumar Bhalla craved for a son for a long time,right from their first lovemaking. He treated her with coldness, but will surely love Adi to the moon and back.Appa entered the room with Adi She enquired about Raman"He left ishu. I transferred the plot to his name right after Adi's birth. The contract is over."Appa replied carelessly."What contract, Appa?"Ishitha started panicking."The marriage contract, what else?Raman gets me my grandson, he gets his property and divorce. Ofcourse you know that Ishitha."Mr.Iyer finally looked at his daughter.Her eyes looked lifeless. Something is terribly wrong.Ishitha Bhalla's body felt used...abused... Her heart burned in pain...agony.She was cruelly betrayed.Ishitha fell into a deep sleep, this time unknown to herself.

part1 page 2

part 2&3-page 3

part 4-page 4

part 5 -page6

part 6-page 8

part7-page 10

part -8 page 12

part 9-page 13

part-10 page 15

part 11 page 18

part 12-page 20

part 13- page 24

part 14-page 26

part 15- page 28

part 16 page 31

part 17- page 34

part 18 - page 36

part 19 - page 39

part 20-page 42

part 21- page 46

TEASER page 49

part 22- page 52
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Beautiful
I am speechless 👏

Is this your very first writing?
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Its too interesting
Update soon
And thanks for the pm
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very interesting concept continue soon
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Interesting prologue
Please update ASAP and pm me
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NOTE



I am busy with sem exams till friday,will update for sure on saturday
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it's ok dear exams are more important
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hello posting first chapter in the post below
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CHAPTER one
11 years later
Raman was in a hurry. He had back to back meetings that day and was now on his way home. He had take his family to meet a girl's family, someone who his brother thinks is his soulmate. The knew minimum details of the girl,just that she was a Tamil brahmin an iyer at that. Raman felt wary,his past associations with iyers had not ended up well.BANG!OH GOD NO!He hit a kid. Raman hurriedly parked his car and went to help the child,a totally unnecessary move as the boy, about nine or ten jumped off the ground and looked at him with fire in his eyes."Do you have eyes or buttons in its place?"The boys question made Raman swallow back his apology.He replied"Oh,hello nothing serious happened now.""what is it with you rich people other's life? you have two extra wheels in your vehicle,you act as if you own the road!"the boy promptly replied.Raman felt his anger rising,he just wanted to leave the place.He took a thousand rupee note and forwarded it to the boy.The boy looked at him with contempt and turned back,pulled up his bicycle from the road and cycled away.He should have just apologised...EVENING,GRAND ORCHIDS HOTELRaman was surrounded by his giggling,excited family. The girl's family will be here any minute now.But his mind was occupied with the boy's thoughts."YOU,HOW DARE YOU COME HERE ?"Raman looked to see who his mother was yelling at.ISHITHA!"here to destroy our family again are you?"Simmi questioned Ishitha in anger."Mihika,come let's go"Ishitha said in calm voice."No,akka don't go,there is some misunderstanding, please bhai what is happening in here"mihir voiced his frustration."Mihika i can't allow you to marry someone related to Raman Bhalla"Vandita's voice betrayed her fury."Oh,please, this much attitude!When sister is ready to play marriage with someone for two years,then separate,then her younger sister will also be the same". ishitha lost her cool after that."ENOUGH!I am no longer a part of your lives.So i suggest you keep your opinions to yourselves""Great ,I see that you have grown a tongue,but it is better to keep your mouth zipped up.Nothing that my family said about you is false."Raman could n't let her have the last word."You lost the right to ask anything of me a long time back"Ishitha replied."IT WAS NOT A REQUEST BUT AN ORDER" Raman became more angry by each second."Who are you to take that tone with my mother?"He was the boy whom he had fought with.HE WAS ADI,HIS SON."Adi,he is your father..Ishitha said in a small voice. A little distance away ,a six year old girl looked at the heated exchange with curiosity.She had seen the lady in a photo her father had kept hidden in between his old clothes. She knew that her mother went leaving papa and her after fighting with him.Is the lady her mother,did she come back to her,to live with her,to love her,to pamper her...The lonely child's heart filled with immense happiness.
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Nice update
Raman was hurry to go home a boy came infront of his car raman was going to say sorry but that boy talked rudely with him which made him angry raman was thinking about that boy when he heard his mother is yelling at someone it was ishita they were arguing I think there is some misunderstanding which was created by mr.iyer who is little girl if raman married someone else pls update soon

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