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Posting new part in the next post
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CHAPTER - 6 Aditya was quite content in his small world. The recent addition of Ruhi into his life has filled a void that he has not even acknowledged before. But with Ruhi came her father.Adi did not even know whether Mr.Bhalla loved him as much as he tried to show.It was quite difficult to trust a person who did not bother to meet him in his eleven years of existence. And Ruhi!GOD,she invented new ways to come over to his house and the weird thing is that she would spend maximum time with his momma rather than him. Momma was no better, both of them would play those frustrating girly games!When Ruhi so much as mentioned her barbie Aditya would run for his life.Ruhi's habit of calling his mother ' momma ' made both Raman and Adi uncomfortable, sensing their discomfort, Ishitha modified it to 'Ishima'. Saturdays,Aditya spend in the Bhalla house.He will play video games with Romi chachu or go for a walk in the society compound with his dadu.His dadi and bua competed in filling up his tummy. His love for butter chicken surprised both of them.He understood that both of them felt grateful to his girlfriend for acknowledging his punjabi traits.But they refrained from talking about their mother in his presence for good or bad. Mr.Bhalla spend Saturday evenings with him and Ruhi.They will sometimes go for a movie or dinner. Aditya avoided conversation with Raman as much as possible in the beginning, but when he realized that he ended up hurting both himself and Raman, Adi stopped doing that. Both started building a relationship that should have been there in the first place. AKASH GANGA SOCIETY,8.15 pm Raman became happy easily nowadays.Simple things like having dinner with both his children warmed his heart. He loved Saturday s for the same reason. All were having dinner. Suddenly,Adi got a phone call,which he answered immediately. He started talking. "Hey girlfriend. Whatsup?" Raman choked on his food. His 11 year old son has a girlfriend! "Having dinner,yeah.Missing you so much"Adi continued his conversation with his GIRLFRIEND.Raman sneakily looked at the other occupants of the dining table.His father and mother looked absolutely shocked, Simmi embarrassed and Romi! the idiot looked at Adi as if he has received the President's bravery award!The only soul who was least bothered was his little girl. "Ok,LOVE YOU TOO,UMMA... "Adi continued with his dinner without further ado. A battle was raging between Raman's heart and brain .His brain advised to keep his mouth shut,but his heart demanded a man to man talk with his son.Finally his heart won. After dinner, 9.00pm Aditya was busy reading something. His timid father walked towards him ."Um...Adi?"Raman began tentatively ."Yes?" "You have a girlfriend?"asked an embarrassed Raman ."GIRLFRIEND?OH,girlfriend!.Yes I do have one .Any problem?Adi replied with mischief in his voice. "Problem... Um ...not exactly...By the way,how old is she?" "She is a bit older than me,but don't worry ,she is quite young and beautiful."Adi replied with a smile. Raman did not know how to react!His son had a girlfriend and an older one at that..."Where and when did you meet? . "Where and when we met is irrelevant. The important thing is that we love each other to death and she is the most beautiful person I have ever met and i will be with her for the rest of my life."Adi said a bit seriously. Suddenly both heard a loud noise from the hall.Raman and Adi went their quickly. Raman's laptop was lying on the floor, broken."Who did this?"Raman asked furiously."I am really sorry papa."came Ruhi Bhalla's soft reply. "SORRY! YOU ARE SORRY,DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA OF WHAT YOU HAVE DONE?HOW MANY DAY'S HARD WORK...".Raman was angry beyond reason."Raman,leave it."Mr.Bhalla said."Please stay out of it papa."came Raman's reply.Aditya was witnessing Raman Bhalla's legendary temper for the first time. . Ruhi bent down pick up the laptop. Raman asked her to stay away.She started sobbing uncontrollably.Suddenly her lips turned white.She fell on the floor shaking, a frothy discharge was coming from her mouth...TO BE CONTINUED...
Edited by parvathyskumarr - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome update
ruhi filled the void in his life she started spending time at his house with various excuses ruhi spends more time with ishita both playing girly games adi started spending Saturday at bhalla house everyone loes hi their adi and raman bonding is growing slowly
pls continue soon it was too small

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Posted: 8 years ago
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amazing update
Adi has accepted almost everyone
do continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome story...
Ishru has a nyc bonding..
Ruhi wants to spend time with ishita as she thinks her as her real mother...
Ruhi is shaguns daughter right??
Adi is spending with bhallas...
He started talking with raman too...
Ruhi broke ramans laptop..
Poor child got scolded and
What happened to ruhi?
Update soon
Do pm me if u can..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely.
Ruhi make strong bond with ishu and adi.
Adi start to spend time with bhallas
. Evryone is shocked when adi say he has gf.
Ruhi broke raman laptop and make hm angry.
Ruhi got faint.
Updt nxt part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb update
What happened to ruhi ??
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Nice update
Adi bonding with Raman
What happened to ruhi??
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Hey I am going to update today itself,sorry for being this late.

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CHAPTER-7



BHALLA HOUSE,AKASH GANGA SOCIETY,11.30 am



Two days has passed since the accident. Ruhi Bhalla was, is and always will be a winner. She might look like an innocent angel, but she is actually nothing but a 'devil in disguise'.

Just like her papa,she had not expected the panic attack, that too after such a long time. Doctor uncle has strictly warned her father against upsetting her in any way. And papa was so apologetic. He included a 'sorry' in every sentence he spoke to her, from the time she had gained consciousness. But Ruhi was not ready to forgive him that easily, she really wanted to relive his stress, but she knew that if pushed the right button now, both she and her papa might end up gaining a lot.



DR.BATRAS CLINIC,1.00pm


Ishitha has just finished her lunch. Suddenly, she got a phone call from the receptionist, Sarika. A certain Mr. Bhalla was here to meet Ishitha. She was surprised, Raman came to meet her in a place, devoid of Adi's presence! Curiosity got the better of her and requested Sarika to send him in.


A worried Raman Bhalla entered her cabin. She offered him a seat and some water.


"What brings you here , Raman ?"


Reluctant eyes met hers.

"Ishitha, I... I came here to talk about Ruhi"


"OH! Is she okay?"

Strangely the panic in her voice no longer surprised him. Raman was beginning to trust Ishitha in matters related to Ruhi. He was absolutely grateful to Ishitha for visiting Ruhi in the hospital, avoiding the displeasure of his family. He was touched when she brought vada and chutney for his daughter and amazed when Ruhi readily ate it.


"She is fine..for now. But she must remain happy, if such unpleasant incidents are to avoided ..."


"I don't know if I am right in suggesting this. But maybe Ruhi should be allowed meet her mother"


"ALLOWED TO MEET HER MOTHER!"


Ishitha expected Raman to begin his temper tantrum . But he started to laugh with no hint of happiness.

"You think I deliberately keep her away from Shagun. I begged her, literally begged her to stay with Ruhi, at least for an year. She did not even feed her properly, let alone love her enough to meet her occasionally."


Ishitha understood that silence is the right srategy to follow right now. She should have never mentioned Shagun in the first place. Raman too remained silent for sometime after his emotional outburst.


"Ruhi has a heart problem, her lack of immunity makes it worse...she gets fits occasionally...it...it scares the shit out of me...she ends up in hospitals and you know we both hate it there...the smell..the white walls...the pain ..the needles..."


Raman was blabbering,tears effortlessly flowed from his eyes. Ishitha just realised how much Raman loves his daughter. She got up from his seat and moved towards Raman. She squeezed his hands gently. She felt anger rising in her heart,Shagun discarded her man's love so easily, broke her own home so ruthlessly. She rejected all those things effortlessly, all those things that Ishitha was never even offered once...


"Please help me ,Ishitha.'Raman pleaded.


In that moment, Ishitha was ready to do anything, absolutely anything to lessen his grief.


"What should I do, Raman?"


Raman looked at her with hopeful eyes.


"Please take ruhi to Chennai."

"What?"

"Yes. Ruhi informed me that both you and Adi go there during the Diwali holidays. Ruhi said she will forgive me only if I convince you to take her to Chennai. Please Ishitha.."


Ishitha burst out laughing.


" You are such a fool Raman."


" Excuse me."


" Your daughter is too smart for her own good. She promised me that she will make me you agree by hook or crook and you fell right into her trap!"

"Whatever"


Raman turned beet red. His daughter should not have inherited his brains after all!


Ishitha bit her lips to control her laughter.


"OK Raman. I have no issues in taking Ruhi, but I don't think your family will be too happy to leave Ruhi in mercy of the 'evil woman', although for a few days."


"They will not mind."


"How can you be so sure?"


"Because I will be there with the three of you in Chennai."


"WHAT THE HELL! Raman have you gone out of your mind?"


"No , I am absolutely sane. I told you about Ruhi's health . She needs me there."


"I am a doctor, she will be fine with me."


"You somehow managed to obtain a dentist' degree, the authenticity of which I doubt very much, but that does not make you a heart specialist for God's sake."


"Raman, stop it. You don't understand anything. We will there for a week. The caretaker of the house will always leave as soon as we reach there, it is the only time he goes to meet his grandchildren. Our house is isolated . There are no other houses nearby, let alone good hotels. It will be just the two of us and does not give out a good picture."


" Why are you fussing over such a small issue? There are no nosy neighbours to be worried about, as far as I know you have no close relatives in Chennai. We need not reveal the caretaker's absence to anyone. You lie to your family and I will do the same with my family. Anyway , if anyone has to be worried about reputation it should be me, C.E.O of the year and all...'


"You arrogant fool, prandh ,muttal ! I could just leave your sorry ass behind". Ishitha screeched.


" OH, Really! Try me. I will follow you to your doorsteps and anyway, for how long can you leave a father out in the cold, that too in the presence of his children!"


" You manipulative..."


"Or is it something else...like maybe you don't trust yourself to stay under the same roof with a very hot and sexy man like me!"


Ishitha turned pink in mortifcation. The nerve of the man !


" You think too highly of yourself, don't you? Even if you are the last man on Earth, I will not be interested in you!"


"Then, why don't you agree?"Raman said with a smile.


"Since you are gatecrashing anyway, you might as well make yourself useful.You should buy all our tickets, that too in the AC Coupe for the entire jorney. Now get out."


Raman left with a smirk. The following days with the Jhansi ki rani ,madrassan will be fun...





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