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Aani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: arooshee
Nice os...per phir se ruhi ke liye...

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Aani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: MissRight
I wish you were the writer of the actual Show...!!!!!! This was just phenomenal!!!

Thanks dear 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Veeann
So so beautifully written Aani. Something like this is what we need in the show - an outpouring of emotions, a chance to talk, a reunion of souls before Ruhi is found.

Wish you wrote for the show instead of the CVs who are forcing Sharam marriage down our throats.

Thank you so much Vee 😃

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Aani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: kaa1202
Wah!! Aani 🤗

Plz send this to CVs.. Instead of killing Raman they could show like this...

It was absolutely beautiful re..
CVs r making him as villain by not showing his POV..
U have written it bang on from his POV..
His inner turmoil is so much that he couldn't voice it out to anyone..
The one who listen him & whom he listens is not there now with him..
The Guilty & agony he faced in his wrath is expressed neatly.
Wish they show like this in YHM, at least half as good as this..
As I said earlier U r impeccable in using words which is soothing to ears...
Kudos to you woman...

Thanks a lot Kaartik 🤗

CVs arent doing justice to him cause they arent writing that conflict as well as they should IMO which is the problem here if they could like when they did when he made Ishita say sorry to Ishita or when he was saving Adi during the accident track it could have been amazing

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Aani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: gargpoo
This is called perfection.. 👏
Loved his thoughts
Cvs really need to read this..
I want raman to stop marriage not bcs of ruhi or nidhi's truth
Loved it!

Thanks dear 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: lerinim
Wow..superb..very well written. Thnk you very much for the pm

Thanks dear 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Zoyamalik2005
Beautiful 👏

Thanks Zoya 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Anuhyaa
Awww Aani, What a picture of married bliss you painted...
It was heart-warming and heart-wrenching at the same time..

I loved loved the OS, Iam so happy that Raman stopped the marriage himself before all the tamasha descends..& the way Ishita made him listen to her this time around is beautifully penned..

Thanks a lot Anoo 😃 🤗

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Aani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: -K.13-
omg Aani this was beautiful & would be so wonderful if shown on screen! From the realization to the confrontation & reveal of Ruhi's truth...this was such a nice read! ❤️

Thanks Krishy 😊