Poison And Wine - IshRa OS

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kaa1202

@kaa1202

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Wah!! Aani 🤗

Plz send this to CVs.. Instead of killing Raman they could show like this...

It was absolutely beautiful re..

CVs r making him as villain by not showing his POV..

U have written it bang on from his POV..

His inner turmoil is so much that he couldn't voice it out to anyone..

The one who listen him & whom he listens is not there now with him..

The Guilty & agony he faced in his wrath is expressed neatly.

Wish they show like this in YHM, at least half as good as this..

As I said earlier U r impeccable in using words which is soothing to ears...

Kudos to you woman...

Edited by kaa1202 - 9 years ago

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gargpoo

@gargpoo

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

This is called perfection.. 👏
Loved his thoughts
Cvs really need to read this..
I want raman to stop marriage not bcs of ruhi or nidhi's truth
Loved it!

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lerinim

@lerinim

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Wow..superb..very well written. Thnk you very much for the pm

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-Atii-

@-Atii-

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Absolutely amazing!! Loved it!!

Edited by -Atii- - 9 years ago

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Anuhyaa

@Anuhyaa

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Awww Aani, What a picture of married bliss you painted...

It was heart-warming and heart-wrenching at the same time..

I loved loved the OS, Iam so happy that Raman stopped the marriage himself before all the tamasha descends..& the way Ishita made him listen to her this time around is beautifully penned..

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-K.13-

@-K.13-

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

omg Aani this was beautiful & would be so wonderful if shown on screen! From the realization to the confrontation & reveal of Ruhi's truth...this was such a nice read! ❤️

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ANU

@banksii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Beautifully Written Aani...

wish something like this happens in the show also...

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ANU

@banksii

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Beautifully written AANI...

Wish something like this happens in our show also...

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Balasri

@Sri1091

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Wonderful take loved it wen Raman himself stopped d marriage without any other person influence Itz sirf ishita keliye not Ruhi or Pihu keliye and d way he blasted Shagun Itz lovely Totaly loved d stry

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misavelon789

@misavelon789

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

👏Wow...you made my day...amazing OS as usual.

love the way Raman struggled with his emotions and memories of his most precious two angels.

his thoughts about future with Ishita was wonderful.I was picturing every moment in my mind.i got a smile when Ishita harassing Raman.it's kinda cute .

felt bad for shagun but it's ok she deserved it.

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