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996541

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: maduragymhasium
outstanding update dear

brilliant written dear 👏

what an update dear

i am unable to control my tears while reading

adi -what i love most best thing you chosen for raman to open up is brilliant dear 👏

excellent take dear moreover this update is not belong to in favor of raman or ishu moreover its about ishra their pain their life fabulous ever dear

while reading i curse both the ishra for giving so much pain to each other dear but feel their love more dear

wish some miracle happen hope cvs also shown like this in yhm dear

bow down of your writing dear 👏

i am happy that ishu is fine hope raman is also fine ( moreover he is alone )

another brilliant take is everyone forget about ishu health condition but raman didn't forget is highlight dear

adi is excellent through out

as a son

as a friend

as a grandson he give best

hope ishra together soon dear

please please continue soon dear

if this happen really kp and dt brilliant in this emotion

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the update especially the writing as well as all the emotions and Raman opening up his emotions to Adi! Happy you liked the update wasn't one sided since I was worried about doing that and Adi's relations with everyone! Now let's see what they will do and whether everything will be okay! Thank you so much for liking and commenting! Will try to update soon!

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996541

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: kaa1202
What a start Prabh...
As usual emotional scenes r cakewalk to you..
U perfectly described about Raman really well...
His pain & agony in hurting her is more but he won't show that..
He is only guy remembered her problem...
Hoping to his side of agony...

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the update especially all the emotions that were shown and how he was the only who remembered her problem! Will try to show his side in the next shot! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

Originally posted by: yashivid
Hey prabh,
First of all thank u for writing this piece. I so desperately needed it as I'm pissed off by the latest olv.

Coming to the update it was awesome.

The way u described both ishu n Raman's pain n despair was just brilliant. It was emotional and realistic as well.

Adi is a darling, I just loved the way he handled his dad n then his mom. He is striving to see them together.

Loved every bit of it.

Update the next part soon can't wait.

Thanks for the PM

Love,
Vidya

Thank you so much Vidya! Glad you liked the update especially Ishita and Raman's emotions as well as Adi trying to handle everything wanting them to come together! Thank you so much for liking and commenting! Will try to update soon!

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996541

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: ...Forever...
Well, this doesn't make any sense at all. Everytime you say that you don't know what you have written, but everytime it turns out to be better than previous. Actually, not better, but best.
Gosh!! How do you manage. Well the only sane character in on duty.
You know what I mean?
Obvio Adi!!
Superb!!

Thank you so much Sonal! I honestly wasn't sure about this one because I got this idea in the morning and I quickly wrote it in 3 hours, so I didn't think it turned out that well! But glad you liked the update so much especially Adi! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

Originally posted by: Dtkp
Nice.

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the update! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

Originally posted by: meghnaghosh
I so wish something like this happens on the show Prabh. It will not only justify Raman's act but we will also get to witness some stupendous acting.However, I know that these are mere dreams and the CVs can never be so sane.
Beautiful and plz update soon..

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the update! I won't say much on the show, but I will say that I do hope everyone's feelings are brought out and everyone's pain is dealt with well! Anyways thank you so much for liking and commenting! Will try to update soon!

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momb24

@momb24

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Brilliant 👏

very well written and we can only dream of something like this happening on the show.

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

awesome

looking forward to read more.

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996541

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: momb24
Brilliant 👏
very well written and we can only dream of something like this happening on the show.

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the update especially the writing! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
awesome
looking forward to read more.

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the update! Thank you so much for liking and commenting! Will try to update soon!

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shreya

@Shre28

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

I was so disappointed with the current Sharam track. This is Raman's way of giving back all the hurt that he has faced since the last 7 years and Ishu does not want to go close to him for the fear of burning herself yet again in his anger. Both fail to understand that in the process of trying to stay away from each other, they are hurting themselves the most. I love how you projected the story. Continue soon!

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Akriti154

@akriti154

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Superb update prabh
raman declared his marriage wid shagun
n ishita gt a relapse
hope both r fyn
continue soon
thnxx 4 pm
srry 4 being late

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Roohachu

@Roohachu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Nice Update Prabh
Raman declared his marriage with Shagun
N jaise Ishita gayi uski ghar ki ander he jerked his hands away from Shagun
Now Ishita is in hospital na?
N Raman is in guilt
He didn't want to face his own daughter
Feels really bad for both
Update soon