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yashivid

@yashivid

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Hey prabh,

First of all thank u for writing this piece. I so desperately needed it as I'm pissed off by the latest olv.

Coming to the update it was awesome.

The way u described both ishu n Raman's pain n despair was just brilliant. It was emotional and realistic as well.

Adi is a darling, I just loved the way he handled his dad n then his mom. He is striving to see them together.

Loved every bit of it.

Update the next part soon can't wait.

Thanks for the PM

Love,

Vidya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Well, this doesn't make any sense at all. Everytime you say that you don't know what you have written, but everytime it turns out to be better than previous. Actually, not better, but best.
Gosh!! How do you manage. Well the only sane character in on duty.
You know what I mean?
Obvio Adi!!
Superb!!

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MG_Inactive

@MG_Inactive

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

I so wish something like this happens on the show Prabh. It will not only justify Raman's act but we will also get to witness some stupendous acting.However, I know that these are mere dreams and the CVs can never be so sane.

Beautiful and plz update soon..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Badtameez_Dil_1
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The whole while reading this; my heartbeat was so fast ... I could feel it all happening right in front of my eyes ... I was transported to the golden YHM. I'm too consumed by the nervousness of it all to write ANY further

Update soon ... cos I loved it 😃

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the update especially how you were able to imagine it all in front of you! Thank you so much for liking it so much and commenting! Will try to update soon!

Originally posted by: sarunholic_arhi
This is so beautiful
lovely piece of writing
loved it
waiting for next part eagerly
continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: florine_20
Res

Unres soon!😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: mayasundar
Hi Prabh,
You are dam good with emotions.

Waiting for the next part

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the update especially all the emotions! Thank you so much for liking and commenting! Will try to update soon!

Originally posted by: monikagoel088
Lovely piece of writing.
Every emotion you portrait so perfectly.
Loved it.
Update next part soon.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: arooshee
Beautifully written...u captured the emotions very well

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the update especially the writing and the emotions! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

Originally posted by: ishra_bestluv
Fab... waiting for next part

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: swatica
It ws so nyc.
relived d moment of her in hospital b4..
at dat tym he didnt knew anythgn
bt ds tym he ws d first actauly d only one to knw..
nt even her paretns remembered bout it..
nyc pick of d incident..

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Originally posted by: Noteworthy
Absolutely loved it! Can't wait for the next part!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: peg_pionne
Great and interesting start waiting to know what adi gonna do😊

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Originally posted by: Divya5377
Something to cool down..thanks for creating a story based on current storyline..I wish they show Ramans emotion instead of making it worst..it would be tough to relate his character now

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the update! I don't want say anything on the show because I have no expectations from it, but am happy you are looking forward to this story! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: rnarayan
Lovely

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Originally posted by: shravsss
Lovely...
You have described the broken man very well... How I wish to see kp enacting the same. He would rock...
Eagerly waiting for the next now...

Ishita is also equally loosing it, but as you said an already broken soul can't be tortured more to break down again...

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the update especially how Raman's state was show as well as Ishita's emotions and that line about her state! Thank you so much for liking and commenting! Will try to update soon!