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vaishnavi

@..Honeydukes..

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Awesome update dear

loved it loads

loved adi a lot

he understand them soo well

they just needed to be left alone and rest everything will happen on their own

and thats wat happened...loved ishra convo a lot

and at last a beautiful end with a new beginning

thanks for pm

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yashivid

@yashivid

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Hey prabh,

I loved the update so much dear... it was just fabulous.

We all are pissed of with the current track so much that we r satisfying our selves by writing n reading such beautiful updates.

Both the work written by u today were so beautiful though both were contrasting.

I loved adi in this ts soo much...he is a darling.

The talk between ishra was so beautiful... they had longing, anger, fear, love and hesitancy to get back together...u wrote n portrayed each n every emotions so well.

Write n epilogue soon n thanks for the PM

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Mukphu

@maya.leish

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#73

So lovely and emotional, thank you very much for this lovely TS...its very beautiful...one says "people cry not coz they r weak, its coz they ve been strong for too long"... Both Raman and ishita cry n cry...coz they hv been strong for too long...and finally their hearts won their minds.❤️..

With lots of love😊

Thank u

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kaa1202

@kaa1202

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Prabh u beauty!!!

wish CVs r half as good as you...

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Ufff tht was one beautiful storyyy dearrr! I sooo loveddd itt! A beautiful portrayal of emotions of a husband wife as well as two individuals. I seriously hope cvs create this kind of creativity n im sure divan will crackkk itt!

Beautiful babaaa!

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Svati12

@svati12

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

jst prfect portrayal of ishra feelings..

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Mdwst

@Mdwst

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Omg

It was emotional...loved their convo...a simple heart felt talk...their decision to give it a chance...was good...

The best line " the dream we shared, but never got to live"... BeUtiful .

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#78

That was one hell of an emotional ride, kept me on the edge and moved me. I wish again if this was shown in YHM too. But thank you so much for writing such a beautiful alternative to the ugliness we witness daily. Raman is the only one who realizes Ishita's true feelings even when she masks them and similarly for her...she knows him best. Also loved how Adi stood his ground, and kept fighting for both his parents.

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Akriti154

@akriti154

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Superb update prabh
luvd hw adi supported raman
n let them meet
luvd hw ishra had a talk n sort it out
d end ws perfect
thnxx 4 pm

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Rkchinju

@Rkchinju

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#80

Part 1and 2 such a heart touching and emotional roller coaster...
Ishra's emotions were just so heart wrenching 😭
Ishra are both so beautifuly portrayed in your story... 👏
And Adi such a sweetheart
What a wonderful writer you are... 👏
Keep rocking 👍🏼