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996541

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Mdwst
Oh my once again brilliant
You're so good with emotions
Just based on olv's and previous scenes you've created this wonderful piece.
Can't wait for the next shot

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Originally posted by: sririt
OMG, this is amazing piece. Waiting for next update

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996541

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: sweet.Aman
wonderfull!!
fabulous...
very emotional
raman want her back , wnt her attention.thats y he hurt her
ishita in hospital...
raman is emotionally weak from inside...

the dialogue :
"i don't kill her
"Papa..." Adi sat beside him and tried to hold his shoulder only to have Raman move away...
"I didn't...I...I...didn't...kill her...no...I...I just...only wanted...her to...come back..."

was jst heartbreaking😭😭💔

i want this type scene to happen in yhm also...

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Originally posted by: lourel24
It was just beautiful.I would love to have such scenes in the show too.

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996541

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: apoo91
Superbly written...
Raman did all this drama just to get a reaction out of ishita.. wish something like this happen in the show..
Adi is way mature for his age..
Want to see how raman deals with ishita's illness...
Update asap

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Originally posted by: snehaseshan
Osm 👏

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: kingmanu
Beautifully written👍🏼
That would be a perfect moment for ishra to unite.

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Originally posted by: sireesha76
Emotional update
Beautifully written

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: agm1998
Prabh diii
It was soo good
Raman's realisation , his jealousy, his anger r potrayed soo well
Plz update the next shot son

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Originally posted by: ishradivek
Beautifully written 👏

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: ishrasoul
Superb ...

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Originally posted by: maya.leish
This is so lovely...I can feel each and every emotions...I wish if we could enjoy such scenes in the show but anyway...
Dear writer, u have a good skill on expressing emotional feelings intensely...I personally enjoy a lot most of ur works...
Keep updating...
With lots of love
Thank u😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: angeliash
beautiful peace of writing di plz continue story i am waiting for ur next update plz update soon di this story definitely better than current track in show so update soon

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Originally posted by: gargpoo
Omg ..wat an update...
I always bowled over by ur writing...
Every emotion ws palpable...
Wish something like this on screen ..bt no hopes they love only bakwas drama...
Loved it...
Waiting for next
Update soon!!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
awesome..👏

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Originally posted by: -blue16-
It's beautifully written
Continue soon!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: avni_19
Ohhh Goddd how I wish to see the same in yhm! Ufff! Too gooddd yaarr! I tell u, they way u write up the emotions are simply superbbb...! The pain definitely reaches ur reader's hearts!
Im.sorryy for not commenting on previous parts of the SS. I ws in India aur aate aate I feel sick for one full week. Im getting better hence the comments here!

I'm waiting to read the next part! Beautifully presented!

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Originally posted by: fSharm
Awesome...
Raman & his ego...
He z again & again hurt ishu...
Though he love her unconditionally...
His ego doesnt giv up...

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