IshRa TS: I see you, I see you not. (Final Pt 3 - Pg 10 - 10/05) - Page 3

Originally posted by: lourel24

Beautifully written

Originally posted by: s_kavya

Nidz 🤗

Wohoo finally something from you Nidz... and as always it was awesome... i was curious to know about next moment while reading each line of this update... it was thrilling i can say ... oh man you stopped where i wanted to read more ... and now i have to wait ... Welcome to hell part - 2 ... that's interesting 😉 will be waiting eagerly continue soon ... and once again it was AWESOME update 👍🏼 👏

Originally posted by: kaa1202

Oh It was awesome write up Nidoo..

More that the story the first para which u wrote as the reason to write this FF is beautiful..

RKB's self talk is epic..

I wish CVs show this at least as a small scene..

Such a beautiful scene it turns out to be..

My fav line is this "7 years! 7 bloody years and you can still read her eyes like an open book, Raman Kumar Bhalla. Congratulations on your feat!"

Do cont soon...

Wanna see his reaction now..

Originally posted by: Badtameez_Dil_1

I'm not gonna lie Nidoo I really envy you for being able to write so well yet at the same time I feel ecstatic cos writers like yourself keep these two crazy people alive

I'm literally craving these two and watching old episodes won't help either

Thanks for writing this one; though I'm yet to read it

😃 RES

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Ah welcome to hell is it then? 😉

Bring it on then cos the way you're gonna shape it up is gonna be worth reading for. This was so damn perfect! Wow 👏

Originally posted by: agm1998

Awesome start

I loved ur way of writing

Plz pm me d updates of ur stories now on

Originally posted by: Mdwst

Wow ... Amazing
His monologue .. His pov
His reactions after seeing her, the conflict on his mind
Girl you rocked it
Love to see this on screen and I can see the leads killing it.., beautiful.

" 7 bloody years and you can read her like a book"... In love with that line .
Waiting for the next part

Originally posted by: nafnaf

Nidoo - wow that was amazing and out of this world!!!!

You absolutely nailed it !!!!

The way you captured Raman's thoughts - unbelievable!!!!

I love your style of writing!!!!!

Raman's monologue was just mind blowing - the way you describe Raman's state at this wedding and his changed feelings for Romie and Mihika and the rest of his family!!!!

The only two people he still loves are Adi and I am assuming Pihu??!?!?!?!!??! (I have stopped watching the show for a long time so not a hundred percent on what is going on but do kind of have a gist from all the OSs some spoilers - I have dared not to read any show updates as I am not so sure that I will be able to handle it!!!)

Anyway back to your TS - the way you make him realise her presence - I could actually feel his feelings myself!!!!!

And then when he sees her - the argument with himself (heart and mind I assume) was just incredible: love, hate, happiness, sadness, hurt, trust, belief, anger, sorrow, remorse, guilt all rolled together in that heart - mind argument!!!!!

I am not very good at describing and expressing my feelings like you and Anku and other brilliant writers in this forum but I cannot wait for the next shot soon please!!!!

And thank you so much for the pm!!!!!!!!

And thank yo