IshRa TS: I see you, I see you not. (Final Pt 3 - Pg 10 - 10/05)

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Vijaya Priyadarshini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

fab...

pm me if possible when you update

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Nidoo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: traveller_girl
Very interesting
Continue really soon

Thanks 😊

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Nidoo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: mayasundar
Hi Nids,
interesting

Hey Maya 🤗

Thanks 😳

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Nidoo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: -K.13-
Omg Nids! ❤️

This is so so good! I loved the mental dialog of Raman!

Can't wait for the next part of this surprise! 😳

Thank you Krishy 😳 ❤️ 🤗

Mental dialogue was something I wanted to try out for some time, butdidn't get any inspiration 😛 Also, now that I read it again, I think it could have been better, will improve 😊

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Nidoo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: ishra_bestluv
fab...
pm me if possible when you update

Thanks 😳

Sure, will PM 😊

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nahtani88

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Superb

Update Soon

Thanks 4 The PM

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Sharmin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Tahanx for the pm...
Fabilous update...
I loved it..

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kavya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Nidz 🤗

Wohoo finally something from you Nidz... and as always it was awesome... i was curious to know about next moment while reading each line of this update... it was thrilling i can say ... oh man you stopped where i wanted to read more ... and now i have to wait ... Welcome to hell part - 2 ... that's interesting 😉 will be waiting eagerly continue soon ... and once again it was AWESOME update 👍🏼 👏

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kaa1202

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Oh It was awesome write up Nidoo..

More that the story the first para which u wrote as the reason to write this FF is beautiful..

RKB's self talk is epic..

I wish CVs show this at least as a small scene..

Such a beautiful scene it turns out to be..

My fav line is this "7 years! 7 bloody years and you can still read her eyes like an open book, Raman Kumar Bhalla. Congratulations on your feat!"

Do cont soon...

Wanna see his reaction now..

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Pasoori

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

I'm not gonna lie Nidoo I really envy you for being able to write so well yet at the same time I feel ecstatic cos writers like yourself keep these two crazy people alive

I'm literally craving these two and watching old episodes won't help either

Thanks for writing this one; though I'm yet to read it

😃 RES

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Ah welcome to hell is it then? 😉

Bring it on then cos the way you're gonna shape it up is gonna be worth reading for. This was so damn perfect! Wow 👏

Edited by Badtameez_Dil_1 - 9 years ago