Tu Meri Gal Maan Jaa: IshRa TS (Shot#4 on Pg 16) cmpltd on 31st March - Page 16

Originally posted by: nahtani88

Superb

Thanks 4 The PM

Originally posted by: agm1998

Really really really cute love story

Totally awesome

Ishita confesses dat she like d him frm d very start nd was just teasing

Awww... Raman's confession was soo adorable

Hope we get an epilogue soon

Originally posted by: asma18

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"Tu meri gal maan jaa " shot 3

Hamesha ki tarha awesome

"I am in love! This Punjabi Sher has fallen for a Madrasi Sherni" he declared happily.
Yay toh aakhir pata chal gaya. .Madrasi sherni k liye kya sonch ta hai...

She could see a figure retreating back in a jiffy, she quickly reached to the switchboard and switched on the lights, only to find her brother sneaking out like a thief.


"Bhai? Aap?" She was shocked.


'Pakda gaya Raman. Ab kuch soch' he began to plot.
Ayyo ye raman simmi k room mein pahunch gaya. ...
Simmi k sawal jawab dene k bajaye. ..
Usse hi pocha ki woh Itni raat ko kis se baat karrahi hai. .hadh hai..ulta chor kutwal ko Dante. .


The passion of your eyes
The purity of your soul
The deep connect within
The wanting of that role
Can't stay far from you my love
Because now you are a part of me
You are a part of my destiny
I love you" he completed reciting.


"I love you too...muah" Raman replied.


"Koun baat kar raha hai?" Param was shocked to hear a male voice from the other side.


"Saala...Tera honewala" Raman replied.
Parmeet k shayari ki band baja di. .. 🤣
Bechara param honewale saale sahab se dar gaya. ..

"Bhai mera phone" Simmi asked for her phone that Raman was taking with him.


"Phone kyun? Mai tujhe achhe se jaanta hoon. Mere jaate hi, tu peeche se Parmeet ko call karne lag jayegi. Isliye aaj rath tera phone mere paas hoga" he cleverly found a reason to take her phone with him.
Chaalo Han. .kaise simmi k pas se phone le aaya
Keh raha woh param se baat kare gi. ..
par khud k irade bhi toh wahi hai

Madrasi Sherni' he typed on the search panel of contacts on Simmi's phone.
'No results found' the phone said.


He then realised that he did not know her real name.
Leh bhains gayi pani mein. ..
Naam pata nahin. ...
Madrasi sherni type kiya
Usse laga simmi bhi wahi bolati hai. .🤣

Issue? Haan Issue! Simmi use Issue Issue kehke bula rahi thi' he recalled.


'Par ye Issue kaisa naam hai?

Jaise ke uske parents uske paidaish pe ye na keh rahe hon ke hamari beti hui, balki ye keh rahe hon humne ek new edition Issue kiya hai.

Aur mai kaise introduce karunga use?
Meet my Current Issue, Mrs. Issue Raman Bhalla!?
Kya banda hai yaar. ..mrs.ishu ooops issue raman bhalla 😆

Finally! He was successful in his mission to find her contact.


He did a victory dance and kissed her picture on the DP.


'Toh Simmi ise ISSUE nahi ISHU bula rahi thi.


"Ishu Raman Bhalla"
Sounds better!
Chalo number toh mil gaya. ..
WhatsApp chat awww superb. ..
Sabse pehle naam pocha. ..sahi kiya
Ishu ka issue banaya diya. .
Bahana achcha hai. .invite karne k liye msg kiya. ..

Ohhh...Ab mai samjha ke itna kyun muskura rahi hai. Tu yahi chahti hai na ke mai Maa ko na bataun kal rath ke baare me?" It was easy to guess for Raman.


"Haan" Simmi nodded hopefully.


"In that case would-be Mrs. Simmi Khurana, mental asylum jaane ki tayyari shuru kardo. Coz I am going to tell Maa everything" he said with an evil smirk patting her cheek and got into the washroom.
Hawww...bechari simmi ko subha subha thang kiya. ..Bhai hote hi aaise hai. ..
Raman ko laga simmi ko blackmail kare ga taki ishita ghar aaye. ..

Miss ishu ne pehle hi pareshan khadi kar di
Simmi ko sab bata diya woh bhi SABUT k sath 😆 toh Mr raman bhalla ki halat kal simmi jaisi hogayi. ...raman ka plan ussi par bhari pad gaya. . 🤣 Toh Simmi ne raman ka sath diya aur ishita k bare mein bata ya Aur usse ghar bolaya. ..aaisi hoti hai bahen bhai k liye kuch bhi. .

"Oh great!" She said.


"Toh kab kar rahe hain?" He asked.


"Kya?" She was confused.


"Sagayi" he replied.


"Kiski?" She was even more confused.


"Meri aur tumhari" he replied with a huge smile. Kya baat hai pehli bar mein hi. .Sagayi keliye poch liya. .fast Han. ..dance kare ga toh ishu k sath hi ...par ye kya iss chakkar mein ishita ko rula diya. ..

Abhi toh chod diya. Bas tum thoda intezaar karna. Phir aise haath maangunga ke tum mana nahi kar paaogi" he thought aloud.
Dekhte hai kaise kahe ga. .Tu Meri Gal Maan Jaa..

Originally posted by: maakk

Will there be an epilogue?

Originally posted by: Divanii

Superb ending
Pls Give epilogue

Originally posted by: nafnaf

I just found this story and read all the parts together!!!!

An absolutely beautiful story!!!!

I loved it all!!!

Simmi and Ishita best friends!!!

It was great how Ishita teased Raman to a challenge to make him dance to bring a smile to Simmi's face!!!!!

Raman does an MJ dance so beautifully and Ishita is impressed!!!

Raman gives her a lift and afterwards cannot stop thinking about her and gives himself 24 hours - if he does not stop thinking about her then that means he has fallen in love with her!!!

But does not need to wait as he knows he has fallen for her!!!

Cute Whats App messages and she thinks he may be flirting with her!!!

Simmi finds out and black mails him"!!!!

Finally Ishita confesses as well and both are in love with each other!!!!

Please continue writing light hearted stories like this - I love them!!!!

Please pm me when you do as I cannot wait to read them!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: nafnaf

Oh I forgot to mention - an epilogue would be brilliant pleeese!!!!

Originally posted by: Roohachu

Nice update Di
Waise ab Ishita ki har gal maan jaane ka waada jo diya Mr. Raman Bhalla ne
N their talk n confession was awesome
Loved it Di
Ab toh last part hai yeh update soon bhi nahin bol sakti
Aur kya bolun?
Waise kisiki jealousy ki wajah se usne bahut kuch natak kiya
That was sweet

Originally posted by: JDTKP

amazing story yaar.give an epilogue plz.

Originally posted by: Badtameez_Dil_1

This is exactly what I miss Maanvir! This forum is a dud now; no life. You're TS arrived like a breather. Gaane ke alfaazon mein kahoon toh "aap aaye bahaar aayi"

The whole piece was such great fun to read. Gosh I can't even tell you how much I loved this one... understand my feelings cos I'm terrible with words. Haan magar I'll just say this was blissful, bas!!

❤️ My most favourite ...



"Ab ye haath maine kabhi na chodne keliye thaama hai.

Ab isi hath me mujhe apne naam ki anghoti pehnani hai,

ab isi hath ko apne hath me leke mujhe sath phere lene hain,

ab isi hath ko thaamke mujhe grihpravesh karna hai,

ab isi hath se bana hua khana mujhe khaana hai,

ab isi hath ki taqat bankar mujhe apne ansh ko is duniya me aate hue dekhna hai,

ab isi hath ke sahare mujhe apni zindagi ka har kadam chalna hai aur har mod se guzarna hai.

Ab ye hath usi waqt chootega jab is jism se jaan ka naata tootega" he let his emotions and his dreams flow freely in the form of words as he looked deeply into her eyes."

You stole my heart