Tu Meri Gal Maan Jaa: IshRa TS (Shot#4 on Pg 16) cmpltd on 31st March - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago
As alwz it was super fabulous update..
Love d confession lists.. Lol
Can v get epilogue plz
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: NIDA.ISHRAFAN

Chap 1

Luvly one
Tu meri gaal maan jaa
Haye sirf dance se bachne k liye
Shaadi kro
Let's c simmi k shaadi k saath
Ishra ki luv story kitni track pe aati hai..


Thnk u nida😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kpfan-1

Cute end but y u end itni jaldi

Sweet really woh kya kehte hai ...Tu meri gal maan ja😉


Thnx dear...

Chalo gal maan li...epilogue le aawangi😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Waiting eagerly for unres shambhavi😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Reserving my place ;)


Unres-ing quite early ;)

Pehle meri ek query Raman ko naam to Ishu itni mushkil se pata chala tha.
Ab Ishita kaise pata chala.

That friend of Simi Suroopnakha.. Even I don't like her so clingy
Raman is so nice. Wicked and cutie pie at the same time.
Ishu .. She has seriously some issues.. Khud se sb presume kar Kia that he is only after challenge... He is only flirting.
N I think this one has more scope aapne bahut jaldi finish Kia... :(... At least 3-4 parts or
Ab compensate karo WITH A NEW STORY :D *EVIL_READER*


Chalo query k jawab se shuru karte hain...
Simmi apne bhai k bare me itna kuch bata chuki hai toh obviously uska naam bhi bataya hoga na...der u get ur answer...

Hehehhe...i wanted to show her as clingy...so i guess i am successful...

Yaar ut ws supposed to be a two shot...maine drag karke 4 shot bana liya...phir b nt satisfied???

Chalo koi nai...epilogue aana baki hai...
Aur no new story jab tak mai apne ffs update na karloon...


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: NIDA.ISHRAFAN

Chap 2

Just luv it
Superb job..
Can't wait more
Going fr next part


Thnk u very much nida😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Yumiko

Awesome update dear just love it nice ending dr


Thnx dear😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Maanvir,
First of all thanks for the pm coz I dunno how many would remember someone mentioning regarding the urge to read your stories in some other story of yours..
Welcome back
Hope u r doing good..
I will comment on each part separately..
Part 1
It was mind blowing..
Technically, a stress buster update..
i loved it totally especially their classic banter..
The way they gave competition to each other & how she made him to accept it..
Truly u r an amazing writer coz t was nostalgic...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 2
Awesome update maanvir..
Punjab da puttar rocked...
Munda kukkad kamal da...👏
Ishita impressed..
Their car journey ws superb ...
Flirty raman & his real feelings r nice..
Leg pulling is too good...
Loved it totally!!
Edited by kaa1202 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 3
Superb update Maanvir...
So verdict is he has fallen 4 her
He is so cute...I lilked this raman ...
I took simmi's phnoe & no chura liya...Haha...
Msg convo ws so lovely.
Simmi raman scene ws so hilarious...
He got caught but still he got wat he wanted ...
Nice one..

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