Tu Meri Gal Maan Jaa: IshRa TS (Shot#4 on Pg 16) cmpltd on 31st March - Page 17

Originally posted by: SuryaIshraholic

As alwz it was super fabulous update..

Love d confession lists.. Lol

Can v get epilogue plz

Originally posted by: fSharm

Awesome ending...
Finally they confessed...

Originally posted by: kaa1202

Hey Maanvir,

First of all thanks for the pm coz I dunno how many would remember someone mentioning regarding the urge to read your stories in some other story of yours..

Welcome back

Hope u r doing good..

I will comment on each part separately..

Part 1

It was mind blowing..

Technically, a stress buster update..

i loved it totally especially their classic banter..

The way they gave competition to each other & how she made him to accept it..

Truly u r an amazing writer coz t was nostalgic...

Hii mannu di
kaise ho.. ..
sorry bahut late ho gayi... na

"tu meri gal maan jaa " shot 4

beautiful part '"

"Haww! Bhai ki itni himmat? Ruko abhi unki class leti hoon" Simmi faked and got up from her place to go out and call her brother.


"Arey nahi! Jaane do abhi. Tum hamare sath baitho. Unke liye hum apna time kyun waste karein. Tum ruko yahan" Ishita held Simmi's hand.
Ha ha simmi se raman ki complaint ki. ...
Lekin ishu ko kya pata...simmi ramam k sath hai. ..bechari ishu. .

Aapne hamari friend ko cheda?" Simmi asked strongly and sneakily winked at him.


"Maine? Kab? Kahan? Kise?" Raman acted innocent.
Hawww! Shareef bachcha kuch pata hi nahin. .

"Dance ki hi baat hai toh hum hain na Ramanjeee. Zara hum par bhi ho nigah-e-karam" Ashlesha came forward running her finger on his chest seductively.


"Of course! Why not? Akhir saali bhi toh aadhi gharwaali hoti hai. Aapke sath bhi karlenge dance, pehle poori gharwali toh haan karde" Raman came up with a witty reply.
Hayee khule aam flirt karraha hai. ..

"Itni raat ko akele auto me jaana is unsafe, Raman tumhe chod dega" Mr.Bhalla said.


"Mai?" Raman was overjoyed at this sudden announcement while Ishita went numb hearing the same.
Ha Han woh toh khushi khushi ishita k sath chala jaye. ..
Lekin ishita kuch kehna nahin sakti. .

Raman ne promise kiya ki woh ishita k ghar pahunch ne tak baat kuch nahin kahe ga. ..
"Dekhiye! Parson jo bhi hua woh ek mazaak tha, aur mai uske liye aap se maafi bhi maang chuki hoon. Ab please aap us baat ko lekar mujhe tang karna chod dijiye"
Yaar ye wahi challenge ki baat par aati hoyi hai. .

"Ishita! Ab jo mai kehne jaa raha hoon it is very serious. Please ise flirting ya challenge ya mazak mat samajhna. I beg you" he requested.
Aww ...
He held her hands in his and began looking into her eyes
"Mujhe nahi pata ye kaise hua, kab hua aur kyun hua.
Bas mai itna jaanta hoon ke jabse tumse mila hoon, bas tumhare baare me hi sochta hoon.
Sirf ek din hai jo maine tumhare sath guzara aur mujhe har din aise hi guzarne ki chahat ho rahi hai.
I don't know tum meri baaton ko, mere ehsas ko samajh paaogi bhi ya nahi, jaisa mai feel kar raha hun, waisa hi tum mere liye feel karogi ya nahi.
Phir bhi I want to tell you that...I love you"he confessed.
Aww soo sweet yaar. .. ❤️
Kudi bhi maan gayi. ..
IshRa cute convo. .Haye. .
Akhir dono ek dusre ki gal maan gaye. .

"Ab ye haath maine kabhi na chodne keliye thaama hai.
Ab isi hath me mujhe apne naam ki anghoti pehnani hai,
ab isi hath ko apne hath me leke mujhe sath phere lene hain,
ab isi hath ko thaamke mujhe grihpravesh karna hai,
ab isi hath se bana hua khana mujhe khaana hai,
ab isi hath ki taqat bankar mujhe apne ansh ko is duniya me aate hue dekhna hai,
ab isi hath ke sahare mujhe apni zindagi ka har kadam chalna hai aur har mod se guzarna hai.
Ab ye hath usi waqt chootega jab is jism se jaan ka naata tootega" he let his emotions and his dreams flow freely in the form of words as he looked deeply into her eyes.
Aaye Hayee. .. ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
tere sang hi bita ne hai mujhe ko mere sare janam re
sanam re sanam re
tu mera sanam hoa re

"Let's hear it now for the most awaited performance of the night by Ladki ke bhai and his honewali lugayi" the compere announced at the Sangeet function.
Issi performance ka intezar tha. .
Toh aakhir ishita ne uss would be husband k sath hi dance kiya.

IshRa ki shadi ka kya. .?
Epilogue chahiye. ..

Waise iss post k sath mere 1000 post complete hogaye. .Yeyyy
Pehla bhi aap ka 1000th post bhi aapka. ...😊

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