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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Mdwst
A beautiful, awesome OS...feeling beautifully portrayed...you are a brilliant writer

Thank you so much! Glad you liked this one especially the portrayal of all the feelings and the writing! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

Originally posted by: ranisa123
it's really emotional os dr.loved raman Adi convo. we never paid our attention to like this topic.it's really nice dr.thanks for this lovely os.

Thank you so much! Glad you liked this one even though the topic was slightly different! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

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#32

Originally posted by: usaonly
Happy New year Prabh and this one I not miss it. Lovely OS between man and man talk love it. Can even say two boys talking 😆😆 cause Raman also a big boy when come to love and affection. He have unconditional love or what say un limited love for his love one especially for his kids. I am glad Adi no his mistake and now he had change for better and try to make thing better. His talk and opologise to his dad can make him happy and forget all his miserable feeling in the past.the question and answer prove that he understand his dad and his family so well and make his Dad proud of him on his Birthday his new beginning of his completed family. Tahnk you Prabh for awesome OS my dear. I have little surprise post something for you pleas have a look if you read my comment here that present for you as well from me. Love you my little girl 🤗🤗

Thank you so much Jum! Glad you liked the update especially the talk between the two boys and how much love Raman has for the people he cares for! Happy you liked Adi realizing his mistakes and apologizing to his dad to make him happy opposite to what he had always done! Glad you liked how he passed the test and gave his dad a completed family! Thank you so much for liking and commenting Jum!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: kras
Thank u thank u thank u sooo much
Really u grant my wish
I m so happy
I m so thankful to u
This is amazing yaar
Thanks a lot
And about is
Omg it's amazing
Everything which I wanted
Thanks a lot yaar
Raman hurt
Adi apology
Raman cute questions
So amazing yaar
Thank u

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the update Reethika! I only wrote this one for you and didn't tink it was that well done, but glad you liked it especially the way Adi apologized and Raman tested his love! I'm happy this was what you wanted! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

Originally posted by: fSharm
Its just awesome...
The way ishita made adi to understand & the way raman forgivn his son... Was amazing..

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the update especially how Ishita made Adi understand while Raman easily forgave Adi for everything! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

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#34

Originally posted by: janani_divan
Asusual you amazed me with your brilliant writing.excellence with emotional touch prabh baby.

i cried when i reading radhi..conversation.i remembered ruman conversation ,LOVE TEST...bhallas take copy writes re.

Adi knows every person like and dislike ,he missed this bonding and loud family when he stay with apshagun.hmm cv's always fail to show beautiful things like you wrote.our IF writers are fabulous to pull emotions.

Radhi conversation mostly filled about relationship value.ishita understand adi and raman situation,she realised adhi..

I like the part ,ishru argue about make up and raman search for ishita when he enter the house after his work. And the last lines its touched me ,both are same to complain about dust enter in their eyes.

Keep writing like this and take care.

p.s:thanks to kras aka chutki,asked you for this plot..

Thank you so much Di! Glad you liked the update especially the writing and the emotions! I did take the Love Test idea from my favourite RuMan conversation, but glad you liked it especially how Adi knew so much about his family and Ishita had taught him about his relationship with Raman! Happy you liked Adi's answer to some questions and the ending lines! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

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#35

Originally posted by: DTKP100
Wow..such an emotional OS..almost had tears in my eyes...loved adi nd Raman's convo..wonderful

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the update especially all the emotions and Raman & Adi's conversation! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

Originally posted by: kaa1202
Awesome OS Prabh..
Probably one of the most potential tracks of YHM thrown away just like that..
Raman deserved this kinda conversation at least with Adi..
CVs failed miserably but as usual u scored re..
U once again proved that emotional write ups r cakewalk for you..
Thanks & Congrats for writing this beautiful piece..

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the OS! This was one track and one relationship that deserved much more attention than it was given, however I'm glad you enjoyed this OS and the emotion writing! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

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#36

Originally posted by: snehaseshan
Osm 👏

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Originally posted by: yhmmylife
This is so good prabh.

Missed this angle in the show. Loved the way Raman asked adi to prove his love 😆.

Thank you for writing it

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the update especially how Raman tested Adi's love! I wish something on these two would have been on the show, anyways thank you so much for liking and commenting!

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#37

Originally posted by: ruhi_ishra
Its just too good
Out of the world
Seriously I had tears...And nothing went into my eyes
You actually made me cry
Bang on...
Just loved it
Cvs where are you..read this once
They have left this part still covered...untouched part of yhm
But this OS ...its exceptionally well written
I have saved it
Ishita Adi talk..even they have come long way
Then the most beautiful part
Raman Adi convo...His questions and his reply
He loved him when he was just few grams...
You made me remember old yhm
11 pm slot...its beauty lost now
What to say...Fell in love with it
Well done...
👏

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the update and connected so much to the emotions! I have always wished this relationship was explored further in the show, however it was left a wish so I wrote an OS on the same! Glad you liked this one so much that you have saved it! Happy oyou enjoyed the conversation between Ishita and Adi followed by the one with Raman and Adi! Glad you liked the little bits from the 11pm YHM! Thank you so much for liking and such a lovely comment!