Raman - Adi OS || The Present of Forgiveness || COMPLETED

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Sharmin

@fSharm

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Its just awesome...
The way ishita made adi to understand & the way raman forgivn his son... Was amazing..

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DTKP100

@DTKP100

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Wow..such an emotional OS..almost had tears in my eyes...loved adi nd Raman's convo..wonderful

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kaa1202

@kaa1202

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Awesome OS Prabh..

Probably one of the most potential tracks of YHM thrown away just like that..

Raman deserved this kinda conversation at least with Adi..

CVs failed miserably but as usual u scored re..

U once again proved that emotional write ups r cakewalk for you..

Thanks & Congrats for writing this beautiful piece..

Edited by kaa1202 - 9 years ago

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SAPNA

@ruhi_ishra

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Its just too good
Out of the world
Seriously I had tears...And nothing went into my eyes
You actually made me cry
Bang on...
Just loved it
Cvs where are you..read this once
They have left this part still covered...untouched part of yhm
But this OS ...its exceptionally well written
I have saved it
Ishita Adi talk..even they have come long way
Then the most beautiful part
Raman Adi convo...His questions and his reply
He loved him when he was just few grams...
You made me remember old yhm
11 pm slot...its beauty lost now
What to say...Fell in love with it
Well done...
👏

Edited by ruhi_ishra - 9 years ago

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Anju.s

@Anju.s

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

This is so good prabh.

Missed this angle in the show. Loved the way Raman asked adi to prove his love 😆.

Thank you for writing it

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

This is definitely beautiful OS! I loved how u brought out their relationship. Tooo goooddd!

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Rkchinju

@Rkchinju

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Superb os

emotional one

nice concept

keep writing😛

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--S.Divan--

@--S.Divan--

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Emotional and Heart touching OS Prabh...
It was so so so beautiful...I had tears in
my eyes while reading this...
Brilliant concept...written very well...

Loved Ishita and Adi's scene...how
beautifully she made him understand...

Loved Adi's apology and Raman & Adi's
convo...it was so emotional...
Loved their Qsnt and Ansr session...
Mostly these two...

"What is the first thing I do when I come
home?"
"Look for Ishima." His son giggled while
Raman looked away hiding his smile and
blushing face."

"Since when have I loved you?"
"When I was just a few grams and you
first saw me in the ultrasound."

Aww...He knows his father and his family
really Very well...

Thank you for this sweet OS prabh...
Keep writing like this...

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samrash27

@samrash27

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

This is the first time I m posting comment on your story.. Bt I have read all your stories... Every os, ss, ff... And they all are wonderful... But this is one of the best OS I have ever read.. I m love with this os... How beautifully u have understood each of the yhm character and in this os especially raman... Thank you so much for writing this... This is one of the scene I always wanted in YHM..

Please write some more such one shots...

Edited by samrash27 - 9 years ago