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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: riYa09guPta
Emotional and Heart touching OS Prabh...
It was so so so beautiful...I had tears in
my eyes while reading this...
Brilliant concept...written very well...

Loved Ishita and Adi's scene...how
beautifully she made him understand...

Loved Adi's apology and Raman & Adi's
convo...it was so emotional...
Loved their Qsnt and Ansr session...
Mostly these two...

"What is the first thing I do when I come
home?"
"Look for Ishima." His son giggled while
Raman looked away hiding his smile and
blushing face."

"Since when have I loved you?"
"When I was just a few grams and you
first saw me in the ultrasound."

Aww...He knows his father and his family
really Very well...

Thank you for this sweet OS prabh...
Keep writing like this...

Thank you so much Riya! Glad you liked the OS so much and could connect to the emotions of it! Glad you liked the scene between Ishita and Adi especially how she explained everything him! Happy you liked Adi's apology and his conversation with Raman especially the question on Ishita and then how long Raman has loved him! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

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996541

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: samrash27
This is the first time I m posting comment on your story.. Bt I have read all your stories... Every os, ss, ff... And they all are wonderful... But this is one of the best OS I have ever read.. I m love with this os... How beautifully u have understood each of the yhm character and in this os especially raman... Thank you so much for writing this... This is one of the scene I always wanted in YHM..

Please write some more such one shots...

Thank you so much Samrash! I'm so glad you chose this one to comment on my writing! Thank you so much for loving all my story and glad you enjoy my writing especially in this one! I'm touched that you think I have an understanding of these characters especially Raman! I also wished to see something on Adi and Raman, but didn't get that hence this OS! Anyways thank you so much for liking and commenting!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: cutekhusboo
Awesome os...loved it

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the OS! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

Originally posted by: akriti154
Superb os yaar
luvd it
thnxx 4 d pm

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996541

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: desire_nikki
superb yet so emotional os

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the OS especially all the emotions! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

Originally posted by: sush_rddt
aweosme amazing!
loved it a lot prabh!
this is what is needed to make a relationship simple!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: sririt
It's a wonderful piece dear
P.S. Apologies for being late was out of town

Thank you so much! Glad you liked the this one! Thank you so much for liking and commenting!

Originally posted by: rufana10
it was amazing Prabh 👏
too good!
beautifully written...
loved it
thanks for such an awesome OS dear 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: traveller_girl
Beautiful os
Nicely written

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Originally posted by: sukanksha
Lovely and heart touching

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: ...Forever...
lovely os

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Originally posted by: traveller_girl
Beautifully written
The lines are just the perfect ones for this
Awesome os

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: abhilasha_dream
Can we have an epilogue for such a beautiful OS. Would love to read how Raman rejoiced and cheered in the party after this talk.

Thank you so much for loving this OS so much, but I don't have an epilogue planned for this one and I don't have much time either to write anything besides my two ongoing SSes, so if I get a good idea that will be good enough to be an epilogue, I will write one for sure! But thank you so much for liking this OS so much, it means a lot!

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