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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

Woohooo...
It's good to end something from where we could start
One part is equal to three parts boy... 😉

Plz Na Re For Me Write One More Part.. Mona Darling Plz

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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: -RKB-
Plz Na Re For Me Write One More Part.. Mona Darling Plz

OMG... Boys started showing puppy faces 😲
I'll think 😉

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Mdwst

@Mdwst

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Wth ..Ishu thrown out after her behavior with prof Raman 😲😆😆 she's a student...prof ...student ..relationship ..the forbidden relationship...she called him mr. Dracula🤣 ...Ishu missed him?...finally Ishu wore saree...with the help of YouTube...😆Raman flat.😉.but ran behind her to pacify her...and her " mission court hot professor" on 😳👍🏼...I loved that term..did she tell her father to get her married to raman?😲😉, lol this girl...is just too much...look at him he's frustrated,,,,but you turned down the proposal..and did u expect from her? ...lol Appa..." She's trying to court you again".🤣 ...wish it was that easy for every girl ...father supporting his daughter 😆 And birth deduced to get expelled together 😉😆🤣.bith are cut out if the same cloth ...

Gayu, I loved it absolutely loved it...lighthearted ..n entertaining...

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Sharmin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Amazing dr... I liked the scene in wich Raman touch his lips to feel the kiss was awesome... Isitha changing her dressing style for Raman... The end was superb.. A nice end vth a perfect scene...

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traveller_girl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Awesome update...

Loved it

Perfect ending...

Do write more OSes...

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raksha

@cutieruhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Unresed on pg 7

Sorry for late comment

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SAPNA

@ruhi_ishra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Gaya... I am waiting for your OS these days
Each one is beautiful
Unique from other yet gripping

I m loving yr writing
Please dont stop
Thanks for pm
Enjoyed this teacher student romance

Lovely Os
Waiting for another one... 😉

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janani

@janani_divan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

He he what she addressed him.
ishu changed alot for him,but he not realise.
appa is too nice.

Raman get same medicine at the end,he not tolerate other boys near to her.her ignorance is also a perfect jetka to raman.

ramn called appa to ask about her changed behaviour,kyu bhai seedai kyu nahi bolthe ho...mama sri mai tumara beti se shaadi karunga...

Vandu and ishu are crazy,they learn how to wear saree from youtube,today i have to check video..

Superb os..kanna

p.s:pprincipal punished her for kissing raman..now raman did same mistake,then who will punish him..epilogue dedo yaar..

Edited by janani_divan - 9 years ago

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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: cutieruhi
Sorry I took so long to unres
But it was so sweet I read it like four to five times
Awesome shot
I was so sure after reading the prologue that the girl in skirt is ishu and I was so right
Its so good to see ishra in a new light
A bratty ishu and a seedha saadha Raman
Not so seedha saadha yet 😉
Their first meeting was cute and so were the later one
Oops she kissed him in front of the class and in place of scolding her he was scolding himself 🤣
The saree scene was nice
I felt bad when he rejected her and she went in a shell
Love when it said let's get expelled together
All in all a lovely one

Thank you Raksha...
Glad you enjoyed...

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DivanIshraru

@DivanIshraru

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Posted: 9 years ago

#90

superb os
I loved dis bratty n madly in love Ishita
d only serial so far to hv shown a bratty female lead is "sasural genda phool"
dis ishita reminded me d female lead of dat serial.
a seedha saadha raman in your os is an xception
loved d os
specially d last line "lets get xpelled together"
n m sry to nt comment on your stories
as my xams were going on
nw itz ovr finally