Aani, how could I tell you how this work is...
Beautiful...simply beautiful. Sometimes you have so much to tell and express but couldn't find any means to, and just end up with simple words. This has happened to me Aani.
First of all, a big sorry for being late...
The writing is so dipped in emotions and I love that. That too many emotions at a time. When we say writers play with words, i tell you Aani, you play with emotions.The correct stroke of emotion at the correct time. Its all seems to be blended still showing its individual presence. Its so connected that you don't actually realise that when did the tears in your eyes have turned to a smile on your lips.
Awesome!!!
This particular scene that you have created was much wanted. Thank you for this. My story of Raman and Ishita ends here.
When people write such scenes, often it becomes vulgar or would be cliche. But yours was far far far away,on another level, far beyond from the rest. For me, this took me to a peaceful land, travelling through the emotions that you have created. It seemed so pure. Like always i say, Aani, your writings are healers...peacemaker, i would call your writings.
While reading, a line had struck on my mind from The God of Small Things," her body existed only where he touched. The rest was all smoke...pulling her hips against his,to let her know how much he wanted her."
Aani, i would pray that you soon get out of the writer's block that you are facing and pen down some beautiful beautiful writings. Writers are not to be forced to write and i would never do that. But truly wish that you write soon😊 .
But when you write your new work, in any of the forum, please leave a message.
Once again thank you for this wonderful piece and a big big hug for you.
Really sorry for the late reply, was stuck with exams.
Always stay blessed Aani.
With lots of love Remya.
Edited by remya1990 - 9 years ago
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