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Aani 🤗 sooo glad to see an OS from you .. I always keep waiting for your work and to see one when I am so disappointed by the show in reality is such a welcome change.
Ishita and Raman are not very easy characters to write on. They are complex and the situation where your story picked up from is also not an easy one. Raman was embarrassed by his antics, Ishita was probably going through her own turmoil hiding her own pain while she shared his. But inspite of whatever happens they needed to be around each other to heal the wounds, the scars destiny had given them. I simply loved how you've shown Raman admit he's a handful to cope with as a husband. Because as a character he realizes he is difficult and openly admits of being guilty of causing her pain and inconvenience. So it's beautiful to see that through your writing, and the characters actions here you showed Ishits console him, convince him and soothe him. She wasn't running away from him.. she didn't flinch from the proximity and also not the romantic sly hints he was giving her. ☺️Romance is not only about getting intimate and physically close. That has been proven by IshRa always. And here you described an intimate moment that was in normal terms HOT.. But it expressed all the love, adoration, attraction and devotion these two people have for each other. It's hard to write scenes that not just depict the physical attraction between a couple but even the emotional dependency and connect all at the SAME time 😳Small moments like Ishita scared of Raman being too cold, him protecting her from the scalding water, his guilt for causing her trouble, her need to hug him and touch him.. to assure him of her love inspite of everything that happens.Coming back to the end of the part.. where Ishita thinks about the lost baby.. if it was the time to go ahead with what they were doing or if she ready.. And how she finally submits to her need for him, to feel his love.. I don't have a better word than classy here (apologizing for being unable to describe better) but the way you wrote the scene was classy, exclusive..This part, every word, every moment you described spells of their love and need for each other. It's brilliant Aani.. and I think there's no need for me to tell you that I am a fan of your writing. 🤗Can't wait for you to continue 😳
Anku thank you so much for this comment 🤗
Its readers like you who keep me going and I am so thankful for all you guys 🤗
The Raman I know or knew, more like it, knew he was a handful - he could admit to being an ass and even being a wise ass...which is why I connected with him...and somehow with the way the show is going I dont know if I can write anymore on him and them because its just too damn disillusioning right now and so if this is my swan song, I am so happy to know that my readers could see the glimpse of the Raman we all came to love in this piece which might just be my last one
And I am so happy that the emotional aspect of the piece isnt lost in the physical ones 😳
Love to me is so encompassing that it transcends every barrier and sometimes...sometimes though you need to protect the one you love by holding yourself back in one form, you cant help but reach out and connect to them in some other - here Ishita and to some extent are trying to bottle their emotions so as to not tax the other even more but they need to feel each other and the love between them in a form thats palpable...and so they make love 😳
Kabhi Neem Neem Kabhi Shahad Shahad
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