IshRa OS - When it hurts, even to cry

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ishra123

@ishra123

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Heart wrenching update
Emotional
Brilliantly written
Thanks for pm

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kaa1202

@kaa1202

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Nice Nidhi. All r making us cry😭

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Aru.Divan

@Aru.Divan

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Res

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First of all its indeed one emotional OS and it can be real draining to be honest. Plus you have done a great job with this OS and thanks for the mention.

Just loved the way you portrayed Raman's emotion in the park and at the same time showing ishitha crying over the same fact. We will get to see her reaction today.

Oh yea I did not mind shagun and I loved seeing her burning in jealousy when she saw Raman crying his heart out for Ishitha and the baby, something we will never get to watch in the show cos she is so saint like and worrying for them 😡.

Loved it is the only word. Also not in a position to comment in detail and you know why 😭.

Edited by Aru.Divan - 9 years ago

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Anju.s

@Anju.s

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

emotionally draining OS..nothing more i can write😭😭

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Nidoo

@-Silencia-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Thank you guys for crying with me 😭 🤗

Reeling in from the after-effects of the surrogacy promo, shall reply individually later in the day.

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Pankhuri

@DivanIsh

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

RES

UNRES

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ever since i received the PM of yours, i was restless to read and yet i didn't want to read

having a slight idea of what it could be about i kept myself engaged with things leaving this bookmarked but i know i cannot sleep leaving anything coming from you bookmarked

and so when now it is the end of the day i sat to read because i knew it was going to be gloomy

after i have read it i just don't know what i have to say

i mean i don't know how to comment on pain, how to praise pain

it is so tough to type but i would just say i felt my heart aching even though i knew it was all fictional

so many attempts have been made for this particular track...i myself wrote something on same grounds long time back but this was the most painful write up i read

i cannot even imagine what all must have gone in it when you wrote this because i as a first time reader is unable to take it in and obviously writer has a much deeper connect

your words leave an impact and i always say that repeatedly but i think this Os's impact will such that it will never fade out...it was that strong

you surely did something to me which i will never overcome

rest i don't know what i have to say...i cannot comment on what i liked what part was my fav etc. etc

i cried with your characters crying, i broke down with your Ishra breaking down and i just felt too much pain inside

we always use the word top notch for KP and DT and being the fans we know how deeply impressed we are when we use such words

TOP NOTCH is probably the right and only word i can use to describe this

thank you for undergoing the feel of that pain and then coming up with this because until you feel you cannot deliver what you have delivered

i know i have blabbered too much but i had to

you are UNIQUE and like i always say we are lucky to have you back

Edited by DivanIsh - 9 years ago

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kavya

@s_kavya

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Beautiful Beautiful... at the same time very emotional and heartbreaking... wonderful write up Nidoo 👏

I was very frustrated with the rushed pregnancy but somehow accepted it because we got beautiful ishra moments Raman pampering ishu taking care of her talking to baby etc... but but CV 's really can't see ishra fans happy so miscarriage... it was heartbreaking to see Raman like this blaming himself for not able to save his child... Here you portrayed Raman's plight beautifully... KP nailed that scen in Epi 👏

Awesome update... Thanks for the PM Nidoo 🤗

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Sakshi

@sakshi.ekansh

Sparkler

+ 16

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Hey Nidhi..

What a wonderful piece of writing.. Raman's pain is endless and you displayed every sight of him.. From a brave Raman to the helpless one.. From the Raman who could not think twice risking his life to save his family to the Raman who was in such a miserable and weak condition..

I liked how you still have kept Shagun's character intact instead of her shedding tears for Ishita as if she is her soul sister or so..

Ishita.. Oh mine.. She has lost their baby.. Her pain and her pat to the hollow stomach brought tears to my eyes..

This time they need to be there for each other..

Wonderfully written and beautifully expressed dear.. Hope to read some more of your works..

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anisha960

@anisha960

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

firstly thanku for not making that shagun saint
breakdown of raman just bought tears +!!
n ishita pattng her bare stomach 😭
u r a fab writter !!!

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Nidoo

@-Silencia-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: mayasundar
Hi Nidhi,
Beautiful OS

Sad but you have captured everybody emotions beautifully especially Shagun I could relate to this one. Only thing I missed is after their silent crying you should have made them cry together.

Thank you Maya 🤗

I did not have it in me to imagine how the emotional confrontation between them should be. So, left it at their individual plight only.

Edited by -Nidoo- - 9 years ago