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-K.13-

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Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#41

I waited to read this until I had ample time.

This was seriously beautiful & I really liked your inclusion of Shagun. For the Shagun you portrayed, the fact Raman had found his true love really hit home & it was so well pieced.

I love the open ended conclusion, but my selfish self wants to read about how they comfort each other bc the fact each is so broken & lifeless on the behalf of the other is beautiful (bc I can't think of a better word right now).

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Mehak Ashraf

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

It's sad but beautiful at a same time.

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Nidoo

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Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: .TIA.
Beautiful Piece of work Nids 😳
The emotions written so well.
I could feel their pain 😭
This was really good

Thank you so much Tia 🤗

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Nidoo

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Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: -K.13-
I waited to read this until I had ample time.

This was seriously beautiful & I really liked your inclusion of Shagun. For the Shagun you portrayed, the fact Raman had found his true love really hit home & it was so well pieced.

I love the open ended conclusion, but my selfish self wants to read about how they comfort each other bc the fact each is so broken & lifeless on the behalf of the other is beautiful (bc I can't think of a better word right now).

Thank you Krishy 🤗

@bold - I have always felt that Shagun's character had a lot more potential as Raman's ex-wife. They could have utilized it well in a number of situations 😳

Honestly, I tried to think about how they would comfort each other, but I could not in that moment, and after that the show's staggeringly fast pace & the treatment of this grief made me a li'l disjointed. Hence, left it open-ended 😳

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Nidoo

@-Silencia-

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: ..Mehak..
It's sad but beautiful at a same time.

Thank you Mehak 😳 😃

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SA1234

@SA1234

Navigator

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Not surprised Nidoo..

Another beautiful piece of writing from you..!

Ur version of Shagun is more acceptable and believable.

And Raman's breakdown..man...u have a flair for writing emotional stuff..it always gets to me so bad!!

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Nidoo

@-Silencia-

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: SA1234
Not surprised Nidoo..
Another beautiful piece of writing from you..!
Ur version of Shagun is more acceptable and believable.
And Raman's breakdown..man...u have a flair for writing emotional stuff..it always gets to me so bad!!

Thanks a lot Anju 🤗

Means a lot that you read it and shared your views, while doing your disappearing act from the forum 😛 😳

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Nidoo

@-Silencia-

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: -Atii-
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Take your time Ati 😳

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#49

WOW Nidoo, you excel at writing the emotions of characters so so well. It's been one thing that just pulls me to your work because the show in particular is very inconsistent in putting forth the feelings of the leads. Sometimes they're bang on and sometimes just lazy.

Particularly this pregnancy and miscarriage track was highly butchered with. But your piece of work at least makes up for that.

What I love is that Shagun's character here is way more believable than how its shown on tv. There it's played with to an extent that it's nothing but a burden to watch.

Raman's tears and agony and Ishita's silent pain written so well by you. A small, sad one shot, but it completes so much the show couldn't

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Nidoo

@-Silencia-

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: -Anku-
WOW Nidoo, you excel at writing the emotions of characters so so well. It's been one thing that just pulls me to your work because the show in particular is very inconsistent in putting forth the feelings of the leads. Sometimes they're bang on and sometimes just lazy.
Particularly this pregnancy and miscarriage track was highly butchered with. But your piece of work at least makes up for that.

What I love is that Shagun's character here is way more believable than how its shown on tv. There it's played with to an extent that it's nothing but a burden to watch.

Raman's tears and agony and Ishita's silent pain written so well by you. A small, sad one shot, but it completes so much the show couldn't

@red - Word, Anku! I just makes me cringe to see the writers doing a sloppy work, when they have the capacity to give the story meaningful turns - like the Adi insecurity issue, the recent intense rain hug. What makes me cry is that they CAN put forth the feelings, and they have a brilliant star cast to support such scenes, and they CHOOSE NOT TO

Ishita's pregnancy was the most anticipated sequence, and it was done in a rush. One day she cannot be a mother, the next day she's pregnant. Similarly, her miscarriage should have been an emotional high-point for the show, considering all the build up about her being infertile, and the speed sequence justified the reasons behind the miscarriage well, but the handling of this situation's after-effects on their lives has been treated very poorly.

Thank you so much Anku 🤗 Its always a pleasure to read your comments 😳

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