Lo Siento: IshRa TS | FINAL: Page 11 [04/09] (Sht 1: Pg 1,Sht 2: Pg 5)

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: nahtani88
Superb
Continue Soon

Thank you 😳

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: ..ishra..
amazing start u discribe ishitas turmoil , pain very beautifully continue soon...thanks for the pm

Thank you 😳 Will update today 😊

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nishaani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

How did I miss this one,after watching yesterday's episode.
I definitely wanted something like this,beautiful one
nidoo.
You have described her aguish,pain so beautifully.
Wish we had something similar in the show 😊
P.s.plss do continue soon,and pm me 😃

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: DivanIsh
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what do i say...this was perfection and perfection is not meant to be praised by small words

i am literally speechless and will ever be when it will come to this piece of writing

there is nobody else who can bring it the way you brought out and that is the reason i say and will always keep repeating that YHM forum is lucky to have you back

we were missing something priceless

cannot wait for the next...please update soon

Pankhuri 🤗

You're so adorable, I wait for your comments 😃 😳 Thank you so much 🤗

Feels like I was missing something too, not being a part of this story and the talent in the forum such as your 😳

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: ATTITUDEBABY
Lovely piece. Ishu's anguish, her broken dreams and her concern for Raman was beautifully written down!

Thank you so much 😳 Just wrote about the emotional turmoil I believe she was going through at the moment 😳

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: mayasundar

Hi Nidhi,
You have brought out Ishita pain on behalf of Raman beautifully waiting for Raman turn tomorrow.
Thanks for the pm

Thanks Maya 🤗

Will update today 😳

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: ishra123
Beautifully written.
You have portrait Ishita's emotions beautifully.
Heart wrenching update.
Thanks for pm

Thank you so much 😳

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: ..Mehak..
Amazingly written. You well protrayed Ishita's pain.

Thank you Mehak 🤗 Glad you liked it so 😳

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: pcnsb
Hey... this is beautiful.. I am speechless...truly.!
Amazing work...
The way you penned down ishita's feelings...awesome man!
loved it...
Try to PM me next part...😊
Thanks
Nandini

Thanks a lot 😳 😃

Nice to meet you Nandini 😃 Sent a Buddy request, shall PM for the upcoming parts 😳

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: rutu83
oh that's just ... 😭 the sheer hopelessness and agony of ishita is beautifully captured
wonderful start- continue soon

thanks for the pm :)

IshRa themselves were 😭 at that point in time 😔

Thank you rutu 😳 Glad you liked it 😊