Lo Siento: IshRa TS | FINAL: Page 11 [04/09] (Sht 1: Pg 1,Sht 2: Pg 5) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully written.
You have portrait Ishita's emotions beautifully.
Heart wrenching update.
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Beautiful. Please update soonish.
Thanks for the PM girl.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Amazingly written. You well protrayed Ishita's pain.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Hey... this is beautiful.. I am speechless...truly.!
Amazing work...
The way you penned down ishita's feelings...awesome man!
loved it...
Try to PM me next part...😊
Thanks
Nandini

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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh that's just ... 😭 the sheer hopelessness and agony of ishita is beautifully captured
wonderful start- continue soon

thanks for the pm :)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nidoo That was an Awesomely emotional update.. The way you described ishu's pain.. Her hurt.. her helplessness .. wonderful 👏 👏

I really wish CV 's could have shown something like this.. yes ishu has already gone through this pain in past when she got to know she can't conciev and after Ruhi and Raman came into her life she felt complete... but then still i totally understand how vulnerable she must be feeling ... her helplessness as she can't fulfill her husband's her daughter.. her family's wish.. the pain of disappointing them .. though we know Raman Ruhi bhalla family loves ishita but for ishita its like breaking there dreams.. really felt bad for ishu.. hope everything gets fine soon.. i will be waiting for next part eagerly continue soon 😳

Thanks for the PM Nidoo 🤗 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: kaa1202

Nice Nidoo..Her agony & anguish portrayed beautifully by you..

She knew he would never leave her like it happened in her past relationship & it hurts her more for the same reason... Do cont soon...


Thanks Kaarthik 😃 Unlike the show's Ishita, I feel she feels for Raman too, and not just 'Ruhi ke liye' 😳 Glad you liked it 😊
Edited by -Nidoo- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Very Emotional And Hard-Hitting...Please Continue...


Thank you so much 😊 Will be putting up the 2nd part today 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayraa

It's was heart wrenching...u very beautifully describe ishita's emmosion...

Continue soon nidoo..


Thank you Mayraa 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Anku-

Reserved.


I was myself writing a One shot on this whole scenario. Now I think it won't be good enough. No matter how hard I try 😆 Yours is so so amazing.


Take your time Anku 😳

And you should post your OS. You write amazingly well and it'd be great to see your perspective on this 😃 Pretty please 😳

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