Amore Nihil Mollius, Nihil Violentius - IshRa OS - Page 6

Originally posted by: -Nidoo-

You're more than welcome 🤗

44th? I'll need to find all others and read them 😳 😆

Originally posted by: -Anku-

Aani trust you to write down such a beautiful one shot on a clip seen on TV. 😳 I've barely read any work of any writer who understands human emotions so delicately. You are beautiful with words but even more amazing when it comes to understanding every character.

It's hard to write down what a woman in Ishita's position goes through. Especially when she has a loving and understanding husband excited for a prospect that had little hope earlier. You transformed Ishita's pain and turmoil into passion. She wanted a distraction, she wanted solace and she seeked it from her husband.. rather demanded it with full right.

Sometimes your pain is too much handle, too much to restrain and escapism is the only option left. And you inculcated that into the story SO beautifully.

I love the one shot, read it over a few times since yesterday. Sometimes it's hard to explain in the right words, why something written touched you so deeply. Thanks so so much for this 😃

Originally posted by: whitelily

awesome os☺️

Originally posted by: ATTITUDEBABY

Hi,

The name is Shreya!

I shall wait for you to continue this and I hope you do so too. I have read all your works and the kind words that you are talking about is a reflection of your own work!

And, thanks for explaining the title. I somehow skipped the translation in the main post. It aptly suits the story though. A very good pick!

P.S. I also love how you add quotes before your story. They aptly suit the plot as if tailor-made for you:)

Originally posted by: Metamorphmagus

Your stories are my time pass during my night shifts. I was going through them and wondering when you'll write another and I got a PM with the link to your new one. Telepathy much?😉😆

Great emotions in the story. You brought out Ishita's conflict out really well.

I don't like the premise of the entire track, though. I don't understand the big deal about Ishita's pregnancy. It seems pretty stupid to me when the CVs have taken a whole year to make people try to accept that it is okay to not being able to give birth. Motherhood is more of an emotional experience than physical. And suddenly, shift the whole thing to her inability to conceive. I understand that she would want to experience pregnancy but it was really silly to put so much hope. And why can't they just have sex like normal couples and not for the sake of having children?

Originally posted by: meenu_taarey

just one word

BEAUTIFUL❤️

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

I have an index so no need to search 😳

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Originally posted by: DTKP100

firstly i would like to say i have become a huge huge huge fan of ur writings..

i have read most of them but never commented..

but after reading this i felt like good no great work should be appreciated..

the way u bring out the emotions in ur writings is just amazing..

u need grt skills to bring up such raw emotions in ur writing nd u have just blended it perfectly with ur language..i actually need a dictionary at times to refer to ur words..nd i am just amazed by ur writing..

seriously yaar u r just too good..jitni tareef karo kam ha..u can actually write gr8 novels i feel nd u can explore dat side also..

coming to this piece of work..amazing portray of ishita's emotions..one can actually feel it in ur work..