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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hana_y

lovely updt janani


thank you hana
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Posted: 10 years ago
Good morning Janni I say hello to you in DT and you are here. Ok hello again. 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey jaanu... finally i read all 6 updates..awesome writing nd good way of building suspense.. so many questns u hav to answer..nd most imp shabhu affair..lol..loving it.. so u changed iyers to reddies..ah..so u hav to change chitti nd chittappa to babai nd chinnama/pinni.. waiting fr next update.. p.s: nenu asalu ilanti writings chadavanu..os lu oka 2 or 3 chadivuntanu anthe...but i wanna read urs..lov ur writing..nd jaanu nuvu undedi ekada??
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: manan09

Hey jaanu...finally i read all 6 updates..awesome writing nd good way of building suspense..so many questns u hav to answer..nd most imp shabhu affair..lol..loving it..so u changed iyers to reddies..ah..so u hav to change chitti nd chittappa to babai nd chinnama/pinni..waiting fr next update..p.s: nenu asalu ilanti writings chadavanu..os lu oka 2 or 3 chadivuntanu anthe...but i wanna read urs..lov ur writing..nd jaanu nuvu undedi ekada??



hey shravs thanks for reading re..
Sugun e pair nenu plan chesindi..and andharu iyer iyers ante naku bore kottindi,mana side vere kada..
neku nachindha..story ,enko story plan chesthunna adhi koncham differentga untadi neku nachudi anukuntunna..

hmm ma proper vachaise warangal dhagara,but na studies almost hyderabad lo ayyaye..eppudu kuda hyderabadlo ne untanu...
Amma vallu akkada untaru...

P.s..me proper ekkada shravs.. Haa manan story ekkada varaku vachindi?trending inka avuthundha?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: usaonly

Good morning Janni I say hello to you in DT and you are here. Ok hello again.🤗


hey jum..i want to give my feeback to readers ,so i came here..
hello jum..and you already gone na..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Naku super ga nachindi jaanu..chala baga rastunav...nd maadi secunderabad...memu hanamkonda lo 3yrs unam na chinnapudu.. ivala tho 25days trending start ayi..things maku anuklangane unayi..nenu trend cheyatle dear..but im supprting dem nd retweeting some tweets..monna 2million tweets datayi..first time fr a fictional couple..inka richa intv undi..waitinh fr dat..may b she wwil calm us down..d new cv hell bent on ruining our memories..i cried a lot..
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Originally posted by: manan09

Naku super ga nachindi jaanu..chala baga rastunav...nd maadi secunderabad...memu hanamkonda lo 3yrs unam na chinnapudu..ivala tho 25days trending start ayi..things maku anuklangane unayi..nenu trend cheyatle dear..but im supprting dem nd retweeting some tweets..monna 2million tweets datayi..first time fr a fictional couple..inka richa intv undi..waitinh fr dat..may b she wwil calm us down..d new cv hell bent on ruining our memories..i cried a lot..



wow shravs meru hanamkondalo unnara and nuv eppudu scb'd lo unnava great yaar..richa is pregnent kada..thanaku papam burden ayethademo kada...thana health kuda important kada but e pillodu em reply evale malli fans ke?hey sad ga undaku shravu..may be maan vasthademo chudham.

ekkada yhm lo motham finish aindi telusa..shaguniya surrogate mother aethadi eppudu ..so neku na story nachindi,thanks ra..ekkada naku evaru support cheyatle ,naku a group kuda ledu spam cheyadanike...andhuke na thread slowga undi...nenu eroju new ts try chestha present cheyadanike..nuv dull ga undaku...antha okay ayethadi,old videos chudu yt lo .it will help to refresh your mood..

telusa , episode 9 is my favourite ..no.of times chusa aa episode ne inka chala episodes ala chusanu up to 192 after that eka chudale...
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Posted: 10 years ago
parth reply ichadu..shw ki vadamanukuntunadu..but mtv nd ph chetilo undi..hmm..old videos chustuna..i dwnloaded all..yhm daily chustuna..ma mumi daily chustadi..but mumi kuda apesindi..nanu chudodantindi..but adoka shw ne intlo chustam..leka pothe news..yhm poorthiga nashanam ayindi..9th epi super asalu..inka 87kuda..87nannu malli lagindi shw ki..finally oka FL ki voice undi shw lo...ade maku nachindi..vadiki reality chupichidi..192 tarvata journey chala baguntadi..mananAt chudu..akada chala baga describe chestaru shw nd chars gurinchi..192 tarvata chudu yt lo..baguntadi..vala lovstry inko level ki cheridi..nd nandu propose baguntundi.. evaru supprt cheyatleda..enduku..em kadu actually forum lo andaru upset ga unaru kada anduko..dnt wry..keep writing..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: manan09

parth reply ichadu..shw ki vadamanukuntunadu..but mtv nd ph chetilo undi..hmm..old videos chustuna..i dwnloaded all..yhm daily chustuna..ma mumi daily chustadi..but mumi kuda apesindi..nanu chudodantindi..but adoka shw ne intlo chustam..leka pothe news..yhm poorthiga nashanam ayindi..9th epi super asalu..inka 87kuda..87nannu malli lagindi shw ki..finally oka FL ki voice undi shw lo...ade maku nachindi..vadiki reality chupichidi..192 tarvata journey chala baguntadi..mananAt chudu..akada chala baga describe chestaru shw nd chars gurinchi..192 tarvata chudu yt lo..baguntadi..vala lovstry inko level ki cheridi..nd nandu propose baguntundi..evaru supprt cheyatleda..enduku..em kadu actually forum lo andaru upset ga unaru kada anduko..dnt wry..keep writing..


oh he replied,he want to come,next epi chusthanu..ma amma ku inka teliyadhu yhm ne nashanam chesaru ani,thanu akka valla intike poyindi,telusthe nannu kuda chudadhu antadi...
Nenu next epi chudadanike try chestha..thanks for encouraging re..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey my lovely buddies...

Thanks a ton for your sweet comments and encouragement..

Not proofread, please over look spellings/grammatical mistakes..

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Part-7

After reaching reddy's mansion..morning at 8.15 am

Agar main vishwa aur subbu sai bath nahi kari toh,baat bahoot agai baad jayengi,it will effect shagun and subbu relationship..amma thought to her self..(if I didn't talk about it to vishwa and subbu,then the matter will get serious)

amma called vishwa and subbu..

Vishwa ,subbu main apko ek baat batana chahithu hu..vo kya haina na..ishu ne mujhe bathaya,raman ne kuch nahi kiya hain.vo sab hamari mu hain,pehel main be yehi sochatha ishu ko uss taraha dek kar,par ab ishu ne meri doubt clear kiya hain..(vishwa I wanna tell u something, ishu told me that Raman is innocent

,he didn't do anything, I thought so after seeing ishu in that condition but now my doubt is clear)

Appa: tum kahana kya chati ho madhu?(what do u wanna say)

Amma: iss sab ke vajhe sai subbu aur shagun ka rishta toruble na hojaye..iss sab main shagun ka kya galthi hain..(I don't want any trouble for sugun relationship, what's shagun's fault)

appa: baat toh sahi kaha raho ho madhu,iss sab main shagun ka kya galthi hain,main kabhi shagun ka boora nahi chaha,vo be kisika beti hain,mere be eka beti hain...acha yeh bathavo tum kahana kya chahiti hoo?(yes u r right,I never wanted bad for shagun,she is also someone's daughter, OK tell what do u wanna say)

Amma: main nai socha ki,kyu na hum bhalla's ko pooja ke invite kare aur saare misunderstand dhoor kare?(I have decided we will call bhalla's to the Pooja and clear all mu)

Hopefully waited for appa answer...

appa: tike madhu,jaise tum socha ,sab kuch acha he hoga na..hmm make sure raman meri beti ishu ka ass pass nahi hona chahiya..samjhe?(OK as u say ,I hope everything will be fine,but Raman should not be near ishu)

Subbu: appa app chinta maat karo,i will make sure raman ,ishu ka pass nahi aye..(don't worry appa,I will make sure Raman will not be near ishu)

amma:kya vishwa ,app aesa baat maat karo,vo hamara rishta daar hone wala hain,raman acha ladka hain.tum usse kyu itna nafrath karte ho?(don't say like this,Raman is going to be our relative ,he is a good boy,why u hate him)

Appa: I don't know madhu,jabhi main usse dekthu hoona,mujhe acha nahi lagtha hain, vo subbu aur shagun ka engagement din yaad haina ,vo kaisa misbehave kiya hai ishu ka saath.koye meri beti ke saath ise kare, mujhe bardash nahi hota.(whenever I see him I don't feel good,u remember sugun engagement, how he was behaving with ishu,I don't like someone behave with my daughter badly)

amma: vishwa vo sab misunderstand hain,raman shagun ka bhai hain,koi bhi bhai esa hi karega.subbu ko deko vo be uss din kaisa react kiya,choda na vishwa.(that all is a mu,Raman is shagun's brother, every brother will do that,subbu also behave like that day)

Appa :okay,but i hate that raman.

Amma: vishwa ,that is not fair.

Appa:okay i will try to avoid him,panditji sai baat karuga pooja kailiye.(will ask to priest for Pooja)

mean time appa called panditji for shanti pooja.

morning at 8:50am

Appa comes to living room ,call madhu and subbu.

Appa : madhu maine panditji sai baat kiya,vo two days ke baat shanti pooja rakenge.(I talked to panditji,he will do Pooja after two days)

Amma:vo toh acha news hain vishwa,tab tak ishu be puri taraha teek hojayengi.(that will be good,ishu will be alright till then)

subbu:haa amma yeh toh acha huwa.main bhallas ko buladhi..subbu asked excitedly.(this is good amma,I will call the bhallas)

Amma:tum kyu subbu,main bula dunga use phone karke..tumarah excitement ko kabo main rako.(why u I will call,keep ur excitement under control)

Appa left duo .

subbu hugged amma ,and said,amma im so happy now.ab sab kuch achai taraha hogana?koyi gaad baad hona chahiya,iss bar hum thoda careful rahana hai amma..(now everything should be alright no problem should happen. We have to be careful)

Amma broke the hug,slightly patted his cheek with her hand

amma:abh tum kush hona subbu?tum shagun sai baat karo,usko be acha lagaiga.main pooja ka din tum loganka engagement ke baremain bhallas sai baat karuga..tab tak tumarah appa ko bhi set karunga...(now u r happy naa,u should talk to shagun she will feel good,I will talk to bhallas about ur engagement with shagun,I will talk to appa also.)

subbu: thank you so much,main abhi shagun ko call karunga aur,usko yeh good news dedunga..by saying this he left the living room..(I am going to call shagun to give this good news)

Amma prayed for lord shiva for her family happiness...

Hey shiva,sab kuch acha sai hone dena,iss bar koyi gaad baad na hojaye..(hey Shiva,please make everything alright, don't let anything happen)

In hospital...morning 11:00 am

A small tear trickled down from corner of her eyes,just then her room door flung open and raman strode in to her room. she jumped from her bed and glanced up.

Raman saw a glint of ache mingled with tears in her eyes and it unsettled him for a moment. ishita glanced away abruptly to wipe it.

It didn't go unnoticed by him..

She heard him walking towards her,he stopped near her bed and asked..

"how are you ishita"he finding words to ask her,he dont know how she will react, seeing him..

why would that bother you.."she said carelessly"

Because I LOVE YOU, and no matter how hard to you to accept my love..

But you have a terrible way of showing it right?she said..

Why you want a grand date with me, he said teasingly.

My foot...grand romantic date with you mr.bhalla,she screamed on him.

Oh your foot is paining, let me check, he touched her foot,she take back her legs with a jerk..

Wait..no i'm okay ,she said..

oh, you are ready to come with me, let me know ,when you are free, he asked her..

What do you mean ..she asked..

I mean, i know what i did but it's like i did some thing else, that i'm do not even know that i have terrible behaved with you at night,but my intension is not to hurt you in that way, you know what i mean...i just want to scare you..that's it..he said in one go...

well then what is it..you are trying to scare me ?right ? she asked..

Well i'm sorry ..he apologies her.

Will you please leave me alone, i don't want to talk with you or else i will leave ,saying this she going to get up from bed...

ishita wait..he grabbed her hand and make her sit on the bed, and said please just calm down ..

Why? what is bad that you cant just talk, he asked her

Because ,she said but kept quiet..

Come on tell me, what it is stopping you, he insisted ..

Raman ..please do not make this hard for me, let us just go back to normal way, she said..

come on ishita,do you really think, what ever happen b/w us ,i will behave normal with you, its never going to happen...

She stopped him in mid way by showing her hand, and show the direction to door way ..and said

leave mr.bhalla ,she said angrily..

without uttering any word, he went near the door..

she heard him walking towards the door, he stopped near the door and shook his head, if he'd not known her better, he would known her,she didn't know that...

she heard the door opened and closed, she let out a long breath that she was holding from so long...

He come back to her and he spoke..

I promise you i can be a good man ishita ,just please give me a chance to prove myself. Am asking for one chance ishita please.he took her hand and sat near to her, he put his hand on hers and when she looked in to his eyes, she could see his honesty and love for her, her heart telling her accept him ishita, he pulled her close, he put his hand on her waist, while other hand held nape of her neck as he leaned near to her ear and whispered "I love you" then he kissed her..

His lips were soft as he gently kissed her, their lips met with such passion that she felt there was no tomorrow. The kiss gradually got harder ,deeper..

When they finally pulled away, he tenderly place his for forehead on her shoulder and let it rest there, as he whispered..

"I WANT THIS DELICIOUS DESERT TILL MY LAST BREATH" he said huskily.

NO...

NO,NO IT NEVER HAPPEN...saying this ishitha whipped the beads of sweat ,which was formed on her for head.

calm down ishitha ,it's JUST A DREAM...

ayyo shiva,yeh kya horaha hain mera saat...main uss devil ke saath .kabhi nahi hoga(what is happening with me,I am with that devil, no way) ..she biting her nails with tension..

Ishu !kya huwa hain? tum itna kyu tension lera hi ho main hoon na,a voice break her chain of thoughts.(what happened ishu,why u r so tensed)

she shook her head to right side first, no one is there and next she turn to her left side...there he is...ishu's favourite god shiva...

Hey ishu how are you? lord shiva asked her, he know what actually she thinking.

pocho maat shiva,uss rakshas ne meri dream main be araha hain..(don't ask Shiva, that devil is coming in my dreams)

haa toh kya kuwa?dream hai vo?asal main nahi ayya na?(so what its just a dream not reality)

hey prabhu, apka matlab kya hain vo asala main aye yeha par?(what do u mean, he is coming in real)

Shiva : mainai kab kah vo asal main aye, i'm just confused with your question.(I didn't say that)

ishu : hain na mai be confused huu,is im in love with him? im in love? Vo be uss rakshas se?(yes I am confused,I love that devil?)

Shiva: How could I know ishu, its your personal life. I don't want to interfare in your love of life...by saying this he smiled on her.

.

Listening Lord shiva words, she widened her eyes.

Ishu: kya app kya bol rahi ho shiva,mera personal life kab hogaya?app sab kuch jaante ho lekin phir be mujhe nahi help kar rahi ho,she pouted

(what r u telling, this isn't my personal life.you know everything but not helping me)

Shiva: main tumaraha amma,appa nahi hoo tumaraha baata main nahi ani vali hoon,dont act smart with me.(I am not your amma appa,don't make me a fool)

Ishu : okay sorry ,baata vo na,did i love him?

Shiva:i think u should ask your heart.

Ishu : kaisai?(how)

Shiva : tumarahai akkai baand karo,tumarah dil pai haat rako aur tum kisko pheli dekte hoo na,tum use pyaar karti hou(just close your eyes and keep ur hand on ur heart,the person who came infront of your eyes,..he is the man of your life)

Ishu:yeh kis movie ka dialogue hain shiva(which movie dialogue is this)

shiva : what do you mean by kis movie ka dialogue. main yeh par tumarah saddness ko reduce karne keliye ayatha,tum mujhe tease kar rahiho,this is not fair ishu, you insulting me, he faked angry on her.(what do u mean, I came here to reduce your sadness but u r insulting me)

Ishu: ayyo shiva ,please solve my problem. I'm sorry please stay with me..

Shiva: No ishu I'm going, by saying this shiva gone to his kailas.

Ishu: ayyo shiva,tum bhi chodkar chali gayeho,ab main bore hojoungi.(u also gone ,now I will be bore)

Shiva : Don't worry ishu,tumaraha zindagi ka tsunami araha hain tumko dekne keliye,have a time pass buttani with him..(don't worry ishu, a tsunami is coming to u)

Iyer mansion: morning at 10:00 am

Amma, called toshiji and invite them for pooja.

That's all for now..

TO BE CONTINUED..

FOR PM'S BUDDY ME...

Edited by janani_divan - 9 years ago

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