My first ss# FROZEN LOVE,part-7, updated on pg.49

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Hi to every one ,I'm presenting my first storyin forum. I'm very nervous so, friends please support me and bear with me. I would like to thank My baby sis Prabh (smilesforever98) who encouraged me a lot. Big huggiešŸ¤—to my baby sis . Nitu who trust me .Jaya my sweet heart, ā¤ļøwho instruct me how to post pic.

FROZEN LOVE

Tired from a hectic day,šŸ˜• she looked at her watch that showed 10'clock.she started to take her belongings and got ready to go home. suddenly, she heard her cabin door being opened...

she didn't know who it could be. who was there?😲



"At this time😳, who would come without informing me?" she murmured under her breath.




Turning to look at the door, she was left dumb stuckto see the person in front of her. Numerous emotions ran through her mind.she saw him standing there.🤢




she gathered herself and got up from her seat.Her emotions all rushed through her again as she found herself angry ,hurt, confused and scared that their love is no more, all at the same time. But before she would step forward, she realized he was drunk. she couldn't believe😲he was in such a state and was left shocked at what she saw.






And then suddenly a pair of two strong hands started to drag her . she was going to speak up when he closed her mouth pressing his palm against it and tightly gripped on to her waist with her another hand.😔









It was becoming hard forherbreath...😭she felt as if shewas suffocating. she begged and pleaded with her eyes for him to let her go😭,but he just wouldn't listen . Finally he understand , she couldn't breath and he warned her to stop resisting...😔









"Shut up damn it. only your ears should work when I'm speaking. DON'T USE YOUR BRAIN..."






But she tried to free herself from him again...only to make him more furious😔






"Listen!" he shouted making her jump in her spot with fear.šŸ˜•










credit goes to saher 😊and yhm creation gallery.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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RESšŸ¤—
will unres by evng😃

ayyo i forgot..😃
congrats rey...New Dazzler on town..🄳
you better change ur name into Dazzler_Divan..it's more apt now sisšŸ˜†
will join the party later😃





Edited by nitii - 10 years ago
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FROZEN LOVE INDEX:Prologue

PART-1

TEASER

PART-2

TEASER


PART-3

PART-4

Part-5

Part-6
Edited by janani_divan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yaay,...
res...

btw congrats u too a dazzler🄳
go green...
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Amazing start..
why so much anger😲...
but then anger bring passion...
pehle part se hi mystery...
obviously i need to wait for first part...
update soonish...
jaldi jaldi...
pm me...
Edited by --abha-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats for your first ff and new dazzler 🄳
Interesting prologue
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww... U r here with new SS... Welcome on board to new writer...

I lov the prolouge...

Its an amazng start...

I hop no dramatic torture fr ishu... Pls be kind on her...

Waiting fr next...

Congratulation fr becoming dazzaler...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting prologue Janani dear.

Am excited for the 1st part.

Congrats for becoming a greeny dazzler and first SS🄳.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nitii

<font color="#0000ff" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">RESšŸ¤—
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<font color="#0000ff" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">will unres by evng😃</font>

<font color="#0000ff" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">ayyo i forgot..😃</font>
<font color="#0000ff" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">congrats rey...New Dazzler on town..🄳</font>
<font color="#0000ff" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">you better change ur name into Dazzler_Divan..it's more apt now sisšŸ˜†</font>
<font color="#0000ff" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">will join the party later😃</font>

<img src="http://i.imgur.com/VAl887w.gif" alt="" />





omg nitu big thanks for gif..
Blushing blushing behana..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sri1091

Nice prologue continue soon...


thank u dear..
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Originally posted by: shravani_2311

Aww... U r here with new SS... Welcome on board to new writer...

I lov the prolouge...

Its an amazng start...

I hop no dramatic torture fr ishu... Pls be kind on her...

Waiting fr next...

Congratulation fr becoming dazzaler...


awwe shravu so sweet of u.thanks dear..i tried to pm all,but server is down here.
No torture in story shrav,just 3 ,4 updates are serious..
After that some masti..

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