The night after - IshRa OS | Final Part: Page 13 [23/08]

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: yhmmylife
Nidhi awesome 👏

Hanging of the towel cute ...the line which for summarized the whole thing was 'with herself she brought trust into this marriage... I think that is what changed everything.

Anjali

Thank you so much Anjali 🤗

Isn't it true? The only thing Ishita & Raman had when they got married was trust, which made them move ahead together through all the hiccups 😳 😃

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: SA1234
Nidoo many thanks for the PM.
Haaye phir se maar diya!! Loved loved the way u have described Ishita's character from Raman's POV.

Loved the whole thing but quoting my fav lines below.

He was never more wrong about anyone as he was about her. She entered his protected bubble that he had put up to save his own self from the cruel world, and burst it inside out, drenching him with her love and more.

Looking forward to more stories from you.

Awww.. I'm so glad you loved it Anju 🤗

Throughout their journey, one thing that I have constantly noticed is how taken aback he is at everything she does, because she never does the expected 😃 And she did break his bubble, and good that she did, otherwise how would we have all survived 😳 😛

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ashni0905

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

as beautiful as the first one

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: -Anku-
Nidoo I am in awe of your writing,and the thought you put in writing from both their point of views 😳 It's hard to decipher both their feelings to be honest. Because both have had a complex past and are layered human's. But you got down to the deepest core of their feelings. And what you penned down is amazing.

Even in the show I would have loved if they had shown Raman and Ishita thinking about the night spent and reeling under the thoughts of how their life changed. Or I would have loved if they had a conversation. I didn't get it there, but I got a more than beautiful version of that here.

Thanks so much for writing this 🤗 Please do write more stories.

Thank you so much Anku 🤗

Coming from you, that's a huge thing, because its usually you who puts sane thoughts into the everyday humdrums of YHM 😳 while we're all busy bashing sometimes 😛

Throughout the entire build-up for the consummation, I was more in tune with Ishita, her thoughts, her pain, maybe because being a girl I could identify with her sentiments 😳 Hence, it was easier for me to pen down her emotions 😊

That said, I could feel for Raman too, but he, however, for this track, proved much more difficult to get hold of. I had to go back to his initial state and then the gradual transformation to the man he was that night to be able to capture his line of thought 😳

I'm glad you liked it 😳

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: ashni0905
as beautiful as the first one

Thank you dear 😳

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nahtani88

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Superb update

Thank u for the pm

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: nahtani88
Superb update
Thank u for the pm

Thank you 😳

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momb24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

This is beautiful, very well written👏

I think ishra fans needed this today😊

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usaonly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Nidoo sorry late reading but read both story . I love Raman POV more cause can feel from his heart and mind what he thinking about his wife and his life. We always see Ishu and her insecurity but it hard for the man to show more like the women. But I am glad to have chance to read both story and their view of thinking you write it so well. Hope in future can have chance to read new story from you again and please PM me as well.🤗🤗