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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

I was really unsure about this part, but thank you everyone for appreciating it so much 😳 🤗

Will post individual replies later 😳

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-Anku-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Nidoo I am in awe of your writing,and the thought you put in writing from both their point of views 😳 It's hard to decipher both their feelings to be honest. Because both have had a complex past and are layered human's. But you got down to the deepest core of their feelings. And what you penned down is amazing.

Even in the show I would have loved if they had shown Raman and Ishita thinking about the night spent and reeling under the thoughts of how their life changed. Or I would have loved if they had a conversation. I didn't get it there, but I got a more than beautiful version of that here.

Thanks so much for writing this 🤗 Please do write more stories.

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Pankhuri

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

-RES

finally UNRES

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a big sorry for this delay but was just stuck

coming to the update...i am speechless

last time i remember i had mentioned how much i had loved Ishita's POV...that time i didnt know if anything could get better

but you are here with Raman's POV...i am seriously short of words to praise you enough

i dont know which part i liked more and i dont even want to compare because i know i would never get an answer

this was beautiful bas

i usually copy my favorite bits in my comments but if i start here i will copy the whole update so it is better i dont

i hope i was able to convey how much i liked it

totally in love with it and cannot wait for the 3rd and the final part already

Please update soon or no...take as much time as you want because when you come back taking a little longer the results are just out of the world

totally loved it

Edited by DivanIsh - 10 years ago

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: kaa1202
I think Raman's POV is even better.. U said that u dont write often. Do write more stories😊

With Regards-kaarthikk.

Thanks for the appreciation Kaarthikk 😳 I'm glad you liked it 😃

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: mayraa
Awesome...

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
aww this was beautiful
i jst loved it

Originally posted by: divazfankau
beautiful update

Originally posted by: ishra123
Beautiful
Awesome update
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: dundumol96
Love it...

Maayra, Prachi, divazfankau, ishra123, dundunmol96 - Thank you all so much 🤗

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: s_kavya
Wonderful... Amazing... Awesome update Nidoo 👏

Nidoo... You have described Raman's POV Amazingly here.. it was like a complete journey of ishra from there marriage which was "sirf Ruhi ke liye" and now till they are now "ek dujhe ke liye"and as you written "do jism ek jaan" ❤️ really loved how you described how ishu has become Raman's life his strength... and how they are just made for each other perfect for each other .. 😳

Lovely update Nidoo Thanks for the PM dear 🤗

Thank you Kavya 🤗

They have surpassed all the boundaries and conditions that they had in the beginning of this relationship, and have truly become one soul 😳 That's what I tried to reflect in here 😳

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: rutu83
awesome update with raman's pov. him pulling back after confession thinking she wasn't ready and her surprising him by being bashful but not shy morning after were perfectly described
i loved that little touch of raman putting up the towel
lovely update
thanks for the pm :)
let me know if you write anything else :D

Thank you so much 😳 I feel over time, both Raman & Ishita have imbibed each other's habits, hence the part with the towel 😊

You're in my list now, so will send a PM in the future 😳

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: ..Mehak..
It's beautiful. Loved both IshRa's different POV's. 😳

Thank you Mehak 😳

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: mayasundar
Hi Nidhi,
Beautifully written piece on Raman POV. I liked the small change in Raman of hanging the towel it showed even when she is not near him she affects him.

Thanks for the PM.

Thanks Maya 🤗

True that! She affects him even when she is not near, he has imbibed her habits now 😳

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Nidoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: nafnaf
That was amazing - I had a smile on my face throughout reading that!!!👏 I don't know why you said you are not too happy with writing Raman's pov - I think you have done a beautiful job - well done!!!!!!!👍🏼
I wish we could hear their thoughts on the show as well!!!!

Thank you for the kind words nafnaf 😃 (Sorry don't know your name 😳)

It took me longer to write this part, and I was unsure about it until the moment I posted, hence the slight unhappiness 😊