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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#91

that was perfect!

there was humor and love- perfect ishra

this is exactly how it would be, except for the vomiting 🤢

lovely update

thanks for the pm :)

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Pasoori

@ChanChanMan

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#92

How perfectly you weaved a world and captured my heart! This is par excellence, I tell you!

I've a request Niddo ... could you pen a work on Ishu's struggle to get pregnant... Honestly, I'm dying to read something about Ishu's internal struggle and low self esteem and her discussing it with Raman!

I know that it doesn't bother Raman whether Ishu will give him their love child... cos she herself completes him but I wanna read something along those lines!

I don't think I make any sense .. hope you understand what I'm saying!

P.S. You're genuinely the finest writer I've read... so intricate!

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usaonly

@usaonly

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Beautiful update hoW Raman thinking his swimming is super fast, it was like they undo all the excuse they had weave all of that from first meet together and now they can't live without each other. Hope you will come up with new story and new concept again. Thank you for writing this story.😊

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sidivyapall

@sidivyapall

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Thanks for the PM, Nidoo!!

omg, he actually asked about his swimmers and even referred to them as such??🤣 🤣 Very RKB ☺️ Now my mind is wandering to how a scene like that could play out on the screen, when/if Ishu is preggers for real

Nidoo, prefect end to an awesome story! I LOVE how you incorporated their earlier convos into their present situation... reminiscing about IshRa's journey makes me go weak in my knees. You write about feelings quite well and hope you continue to write other such pieces, but now what about "pheelings"... 😆 if you catch my drift ☺️ I'm waiting to read some hardcore (or softcore 🤣... sorry, one track mind is still going strong from the LU discussions, I'll stop now 😆😳) romance from you, yaar!

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nafnaf

@nafnaf

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#95

That was exactly right - this is how the show should have handled it! You have done a great job - so loving and romantic and rounded the whole track so beautifully!!!!❤️

You even tackled the 2 out of 10 issue - very cutely☺️

On the show the actual night was great loved it - and the morning started off beautifully but should have been extended and the 2 out of 10 issue should have been cleared then and there!! There should have been a little bit more romance before he had to go to work and just as you have continued it the day after so it should have been done on the show!

Anyway you have now made up for it - thank you so much!!!👍🏼⭐️

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SA1234

@SA1234

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Nidoo Nidoo Nidoo !!! Just perfect!!

Thanks for that much needed conversation after the deed.

Quite recently I started watching the old episodes again and this particular convo is still fresh in my mind..the hate and venom they spewed at each other...so getting to read this now is like wow!!

Needless to say you are an amazingly talented writer..!! Do write more!

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Malvika

@mayraa

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#97

Wow perfect ending niddo...loved it...👍🏼

It's ishraliscious update every essences of ishra was there in update... And of course ishra's humour...

"Just wondering, how fast are my swimmers?! You've already stared vomiting!"

This line crack me up🤣

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#98

wow amazing job! thanks for the pm!

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kaa1202

@kaa1202

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#99

Hi Niddo,

How perfectly u penned the story. This last part is my fav of all. U emulated both their emotions & feelings beautifully.

P.S:-If u try to write something in future write about Ishu's struggle to get pregnant. This line has got greater potential.

With Regards-Kaarthikk.

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Pankhuri

@DivanIsh

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#100

as soon as i saw ur PM i was dying to read it but something or the other kept coming my way

now finally when i have read it i am speechless

it was beautiful bas

i know i have blabbered this and that in my previous comments but today i really have nothing to say

i am glad you came back to this forum warna now i realize what we all were missing

it was perfect and i am in love with it

P.S. You didn't forget to add KP/Raman's guttery touch here 😳

his swimmers 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 when he can think of having a baby out in 6 months then surely his swimmers are capable of such a fast action ok i will shutup here only 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

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