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kaa1202

@kaa1202

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

I think Raman's POV is even better.. U said that u dont write often. Do write more stories😊

With Regards-kaarthikk.

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

aww this was beautiful
i jst loved it

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ishra123

@ishra123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Beautiful
Awesome update
Thanks for pm

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kavya

@s_kavya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Wonderful... Amazing... Awesome update Nidoo 👏

Nidoo... You have described Raman's POV Amazingly here.. it was like a complete journey of ishra from there marriage which was "sirf Ruhi ke liye" and now till they are now "ek dujhe ke liye"and as you written "do jism ek jaan" ❤️ really loved how you described how ishu has become Raman's life his strength... and how they are just made for each other perfect for each other .. 😳

Lovely update Nidoo Thanks for the PM dear 🤗

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

awesome update with raman's pov. him pulling back after confession thinking she wasn't ready and her surprising him by being bashful but not shy morning after were perfectly described

i loved that little touch of raman putting up the towel

lovely update

thanks for the pm :)

let me know if you write anything else :D

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Mehak Ashraf

@Mehak_KPian

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

It's beautiful. Loved both IshRa's different POV's. 😳

Edited by ..Mehak.. - 10 years ago

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Maya

@mayasun

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Hi Nidhi,

Beautifully written piece on Raman POV. I liked the small change in Raman of hanging the towel it showed even when she is not near him she affects him.

Thanks for the PM.

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nafnaf

@nafnaf

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

That was amazing - I had a smile on my face throughout reading that!!!👏 I don't know why you said you are not too happy with writing Raman's pov - I think you have done a beautiful job - well done!!!!!!!👍🏼

I wish we could hear their thoughts on the show as well!!!!

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Anju.s

@Anju.s

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Nidhi awesome 👏

Hanging of the towel cute ...the line which for summarized the whole thing was 'with herself she brought trust into this marriage... I think that is what changed everything.

Anjali

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SA1234

@SA1234

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Nidoo many thanks for the PM.

Haaye phir se maar diya!! Loved loved the way u have described Ishita's character from Raman's POV.

Loved the whole thing but quoting my fav lines below.

He was never more wrong about anyone as he was about her. She entered his protected bubble that he had put up to save his own self from the cruel world, and burst it inside out, drenching him with her love and more.

Looking forward to more stories from you.

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