Ishra OS: Sapna Jahan - Page 3

Originally posted by: smilesforever98

Res😆

I'm first! And will be last to unres😆

-Edited-

Oh wow! Such an early unres from me! What a surprise!

But I love surprise ❤️

Anyways the OS, the beginning line was a perfect start, a true and beautiful line, I loved it. Then the way you describe him looking at the photos and then at Ishita was nicely written. I was smilingly throughout.

Yes actually I started to weave this os when I heard this song. Actually I love to write present and past connections and yes that part is actually beautiful. We can also connect this wit us. When we ho through old pics, I think such kind of feeling s also came in our mind

And then I read about Raman's past. It was so saddening to read about his parents death and then him losing the brother he had raised with so much love. He always tried to be happy, but it was never genuine until his madrasan came into his life!

Sorry for killing them but kya karoon!!! Song lyrics was like that so I killed them 😉

Ishita is so chirpy and cute! The way she was mentally talking to herself about not being dominated by men and their first meeting was so cute. And now she's Miss. Fighter Plane! What a name, I loved it! He kept on noticing her as she was hungry and wasn't speaking up, so he got her pizza, so sweet! I love this Raman! By the way, I'm reading this OS in the morning and now I want cheese pizza, you chose my weakness right there!

Are yaar tum sab na sabko mere post padhke pata nahi khane ka Mann karta hai but thanks for this cute comment there. Raman is actually sweet and you know what, your raman is more sweet then mine. 😆

Back to the OS, poor Raman he really loved her and couldn't tell with the fear of losing her. She made him happy and he couldn't stay happy with the fear that she would be taken away from him! Finally Ishita found out about his parents and she felt his pain...true love!

Fears always overcame your happiness and same was happening with Raman. I was little nervous while writing this part actually for me Hindi is more convenient when it comes for emotions but already this one was so long and adding Hindi dialogue and English subtitles... ...ufff!!!!! But I am really hapy that you AL are able to connect emotions

I loved their proposal! Ishita is really so cute and I'm glad she made confess his feelings for her as well as his fears. I liked the way she tried to assure him that they would stay together forever no matter what. And finally he confessed and proposed...with her ring of course!

Ha ha this one was really uniques but she is also uniques in herself na 😉

And the ending was simply beautiful like the whole OS! Can I tell you something? I had a similar photo frame idea for my FF! But you wrote it out before me, but I love it here! And their last lines were so touching. His happiness on being a father and getting a family because of Ishita and her happiness on carrying his baby was so touching! A lovely and sweet OS! I loved it!

What???? U have similar one??? It is damn adorable and I wanted to read that one. I know this will be cute. Yes I wanted a such kind of end for this os. Calm, sweet and full of hopes. Thanks for this beautiful review prabh. Love u for that😊

Originally posted by: nitii

awesome story dear..

i loved reading it..i was thinking what to give in comment and wasted 2 hrs😆

" LIFE " is not less then a mysterious box for you. a box which is full of surprises, some surprises are brought tears and some brought smile on your face ...so true...i loved these lines👏 what a way to begin a story

he always feels like heaven whenever she is with him, his life, his breath Ishita..

he is lucky to found her as his companion. " I Love You Madrasan "...aww..he loves her so much..

" oh hello. can't you see I came here. so I will park my car here not you..."...🤣

guard tried to explain her that the parking spot was for dept heads but she was in no mood to listen. ..ayyo ishita 🤣 raman is so cute rey..he let her park even-though she is wrong at the first place😳

" good ishita. always do like this. you ha no need to be dominated by mens of this office " she mentally patted herself..yep you are so right dear..i imagined this rey🤣🤣their first meeting is awesome

" ummm...no actually to...apologize to you. I...I am so sorry for my behavior in morning..

" its OK fighter plane. it happens. I hope your first day went well "...fighter plane..🤣 it suits her thou..😆

then what followed in their life was very common..

i guess the last option suits their story...forever

" shutup Raman. nothing is going to happen like this. its our life, not you only you Raman. trust me no one can separate us Raman. "..

ishita offered him her new ring and told him to propose her and they confessed their love to each other...this is favorite moment inthis story rey..❤️

" ishita I never thought that you will make my dream true. I am going to be dad...my own child... this is the most beautiful experience ishita. today you gave a family to a orphan ishita. thanks for that. "..it was emotional rey😭..i think im the only one who felt like that😆

they are just waiting for moment now when they will took their baby in their arms and made every dream true which they weaved for her...awesome ending

there is nothing greater than having your loved ones close by your side

Originally posted by: Akshatha19

aarohi❤️❤️

see finally commenting😳...

OMG ur just awesome dear really what an OS just so beautiful,

it was so dreamy and the story raman being alone the way ishita revolves around it was just wow dear...

u hv portrait characters so perfectly that only option is to love it dear, i am so happy that i finally read...

their love, passion , feelings every emotions is just too good...

song is so beautiful, so title is❤️ ❤️ ...

the story starts simple definition of life ⭐️⭐️and the the pics description so nice...

Raman love for her like anything...

hayee ❤️❤️

he always feels like heaven whenever she is with him, his life, his breath Ishita, the love and possessiveness😉 and saying I Love You Madrasan,...

wow 2nd annivversary actually first came to mind was ishra's baby should be mentioned, u do it👏👏, may be because in show they are dragging baby thing so i felt at least u writers can write about it, u wrote i am happy...

passionate love ride ☺️☺️☺️☺️

raman's story, really he has suffered alot😭😭...

Mihir and bala good friends, ray of hope has come, perfectly shown the ray wow👏...

oh madarasan aatehi shernai bangayi😆😆, raman is chup surprising fact😆, but he is falling for her so cute😉...

arreh wah fighter plane a new name...

🤣🤣

Raman is back in taunting form😆 -" yes miss fighterplane. why you came here? for another car parking? "

from first encounter only special place mind😉, mind se dil tak aane mei der nahi lage gi...

raman such a sweetheart ❤️❤️❤️ ❤️...

first unofficial lunch and he got her details not bad😆😆...

raman's self talk in cabin poor raman 😭, - I felt something special with you but I knew, I knew you can't be a part of my life otherwise he will also snatch you from me like he snatched maa papa and romi " a tear formed its way from his eyes.

ishita maan me ladoo phoota😆, when he called for coffee, hawwah ishita's concern and care towards him lovely ,

balcony ke memories beautifully shown, first step to their relation and new found bonding started❤️❤️❤️

MY rude kumar so cute, kissing the photo - his smile, how much smile looks beautiful on his face. and how her lips automatically curved when she saw happiness on his face, so simple words dear but wonderful meaning...

she never realised when his tears became her, when she started to feel his pain...

ishita got to know her feelings nice yaar, she wanted to be with him, she wanted to heal his pain and give his smile back, so ishita is all set...

firstly as colleague, after that as friends and they never knew when they fell for each other⭐️⭐️ - the one sentence how their journey went on...

In beach side hotel confession was so nice dear, the convo his fear her confidence just amazing, i loved the part ishita herself gave her ring, unique one👍🏼...

and he cupping her and she kissing his cheek ☺️

Balcony Romance

ramu awwwah so cute

" ishita. thankyou for coming in my life. for teaching me to smile, for make me alive. thank you for giving me my family ishita. thank you for everything. I can't even imagine my life without you ishita. please never left me aloneun"- beautiful👏👏...

in a few words u have presented their 2 years of togetherness just so nicely👍🏼,

yayy

finally i loved the last part - esp ishita lines -its a desired moment for every girl to became a mother, to gave a new life to a baby. to became a mother of a baby of man to whom she loves so much. thanks for giving me this blessing Raman⭐️⭐️ ...

dear i dnt what i wrote seriouly it was brilliant with full of happiness, lastly gives a happy feelings, thank u so much for writing it making us happy really i fully enjoyed reading it...

i dnt knw whether ur satisfied by my comment 😆😆, let me know

a very well written OS aarohi

good job

Originally posted by: DivanIsh

RES

unres 😊😊😊

Aarohi what do i say about this OS...i just wanna hug you 🤗

you know what...i was sleeping peacefully and then it started raining achanak...i woke up feeling cold and lost my sleep...timepass ke liye IF check kiya and saw a post made by you...my excitement was high that very moment...pehle res kiya phir padha...mann toh ho raha tha tabhi comment kar dun...par pata nahi kaise control kiya and slept...the song kept playing again and again in my sub-conscious mind all the time though...toh i can say ek raat ke liye tune meri neend chura li 😆

And u know what???? I posted this OS after 12 and immediately slept after that. I thought ki ab toh subah uthke hi comments cheak karoongi but meri sleep night main around 3 phir khuli and I thought sone se pehle comments hicheak karoo and guess what I started dancing after reading your res 😛

waise plz next time se din mein post kariyo...no late nights...meri neend pe taras khaa...aisi cheezen padhke neend nahi aati...jaagte hue hi i land up in dreamworld

Are uss din na mera net pack renew hua tha toh maine excitement main post kar diya

What???? I stole your sleep 😲

Haayo rabba...yeh kaisa ilzaam lagaya mujhpe😆 but I loved this ilzaam

this was the most beautiful OS i read in recent times...forum ko kuch ho gaya tha maybe...koi bhi ek happy romantic OS nahi likh raha tha...actually OS hi bahut kam aa rahe hain aajkal...toh achanak se yeh padhke itna refreshing laga ki kya bolun...i feel happy from inside 😊

Haina????? Mere bhi kuch yahin thoughts hain. Aajkal koi dhang ke acche se I mean happy ending type wale os hi nahi aa rahe hain, tabhi toh I wrote this

this OS was just so beautifully penned down...the synchronization was perfect...ek achi story ki pehchaan hoti hai perfect opening and equally perfect ending...ismein dono hi the 👏

Dhanyawaad Didi😊

U know iski starting maine probably 3-4 times change kari and then I finalized this one and glad that u liked it.

revealing of the past was executed very nicely

and the song 😳 i love it and soch hi rahi thi ki koi ispe OS likhe and tu haazir ho gayi...i love you for this...mujhe ek acha khaasa surprise mil gaya

Dekha...that's why I am your chotu sis😛

Main khud ispe ek story likhna chahati thi so I penned.

fighterplane was unique name 🤣

I know

ok i know this comment would not make much sense bcoz i am just blabbering anything but thats what i do when i am too happy...shabd kam pad rahe hain taareef ke liye

Yaar maine aisa bhi kuch nahi likha. Aap aiwae hi bol rahi ho

Already fabulous writers bhare pade hain forum pe. ek toh wahi hai jisko main reply kar rahi hoon 😉

waise toh yeh OS itna sunder hai ki pura copy paste kar dun but still kuch points hain jo behad sunder hain...copying below...bear my spamming plz

Will love your spamming

he glanced at their room and found she was sleeping peacefully in between white sheets and was cuddling with his pillows 😳 bachi ka dimaag jyada hi chal raha hai aajkal

Are yaar kyon meri leg pulling kar rahi ho?

It is a simple piece of imagination. And bacchi is as usual innocent😆

they both were standing in his balcony, her hand was still clutching his hand and other hand is clutching railings. the cool breeze was caressing their faces. they were not looking at each other but silently shedding tears. that was the first day when they cane closer to each other. he came at balcony and caressed that spot where they both were stood with other. her first step for their relation was also took by her on that day. he smiled again and closed his eyes 👏

Mera bhi favourite hai yeh 😊

she rolled on her stomach and pick Raman photo which was on side table. " happy marriage anniversary my rude Kumar " 😳

" I will always with you Raman. even after my death." she kissed his photo ❤️

we were meant to be tied for one another and trust me no one will separate us maine tere OS mein khud ko dhund liya 😊😊😊

Yeh line toh likhi hi maine aapko dhaayn main rakhke hai 😊

" oh no...it means you will eat my head in every birth ? " 🤣 i am telling you har pati ki typical line hai yeh...hum aurten pata nahi kitni baar sunti hai 🤣

Hain???? Aap bhi sunti ho???

These men's are na terrible 😡

Biwiyon ke bina chalti nahi hai but inse lade bina banti bhi nahi hai😆

she said nothing but pointed towards a set of 3 pictures photo frame this particular section stole my heart...you did this section so beautifully that i am out of words

Are this was completely random. Bas aise hi socho and likh diya. Actually uss waqt main apne newly gifted photoframe ko dekh rahi thi. Tph socho kyon na include kar loon I mean usko hi dekh ke mujhko yeh idea aaya, so chipka diya 😆

Raman...its a desired moment for every girl to becamse a mother, to gave a new life to a baby. to became a mother of a baby otf man to whom she loves so much. thanks for giving me this blessing Raman so true...i am amazed ki tu yeh saare emotions likhti kaise hai being so young 👏

Are baba. Sab aiwae type hi hai. Ismein mera koi haath nahi hai. I am innocent here.

Hum pe sitaaron ka ehsaan ho

Poora, adhoora har armaan hko

Ek dusre se jo baandhe humein

Baahon mein nanhi si ik jaan ho

Aabaad ho chota sa ghar

Lag na sake kisi ke nazar

Mere dil mein jagah Khuda ki khaali thi

Dekha wahan pe aaj tera chehra hai

Main bhatakta huaa sa ek badal hoon

Jo tere aasmaan pe aake thehra hai

beautiful lines these are...my fav from the song

Mine also. Inhi ko sun ke toh baby wala point ghusane ka idea aaya.

Aarohi this was ur best OS...you rock...this was a perfect combination of love, romance, pain, passion, cuteness and again love...👏

Aapko pasand aaya na, bas. Main ismein hi khush hoon. Aapko yeh wala best lagta hai??? I know this one is beautiful but still mine fav one is suhana har dard hai...

keep writing more and surprising me like this

Okkk boss. Ur wish and my command😃

lots of love to you

Originally posted by: ss_divan

Amazing👏

Well written😊