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Aarohi Talegoankar

@Albeli26

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: rk654
Amazing OS dear...very wonderfully written👏👏👏

thanks Buddy. I was nervous while writing this but glad that u liked it

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Aarohi Talegoankar

@Albeli26

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Badtameez_Dil_1
Pehle toh I'm really very sorry Aarohi that I wasn't able to read the chapters for "Muskhurane Ki..."

Coming onto this one! It's amazing how you're able to conceptualize and also pen down a story based on a song! Truly, phenomenal!

I felt terrible when I read about Romi being dead!

Raman... crazy! Actually, tujhe ek baat bataon... I'd written the same story... cosmic connection boss!

Awww... Ishu pregnant... bas I hope YHM mein bhi hume aisa hi dekhne mile!

P.S. Sorry yaar "Muskhurane Ki..." nahi padh paayi... ek toh laziness upar se mere Nanaji ko 2nd time stroke hua.. bas I hope hi recovers! I'm upset yaar! 🥱

hello umeirah Didi. first of all so sorry for late reply. I am almost replying after one month 😆 but was actually busy and moreover I forgot that I had to reply for this story. but koi na " der aae durust aae " 😉 I am glad that u enjoyed this story. I was actually nervous while writing this story. chalo meri mehnat toh safal hui.
yaah!!!!! ishu is preggy. everyone wants to see her preggy but not this way which they are showing now. I hope they will show us some meaningful track with proper treatment
I hope ur nanu is fine now. and ab toh woh ghar bhi aa gaye honge. as unki naatin itni cute hai na, unko recover hona hi padega 😊

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Aarohi Talegoankar

@Albeli26

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Badtameez_Dil_1
Pehle toh I'm really very sorry Aarohi that I wasn't able to read the chapters for "Muskhurane Ki..."

Coming onto this one! It's amazing how you're able to conceptualize and also pen down a story based on a song! Truly, phenomenal!

I felt terrible when I read about Romi being dead!

Raman... crazy! Actually, tujhe ek baat bataon... I'd written the same story... cosmic connection boss!

Awww... Ishu pregnant... bas I hope YHM mein bhi hume aisa hi dekhne mile!

P.S. Sorry yaar "Muskhurane Ki..." nahi padh paayi... ek toh laziness upar se mere Nanaji ko 2nd time stroke hua.. bas I hope hi recovers! I'm upset yaar! 🥱

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-RKB-

@-RKB-

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Kya Baat hai Kya Khubsurti Se Likha hai Apne
Dil Ko Chhu Gaya Ye Os
Aise Os Aur Bhi Likhte raho

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Pasoori

@ChanChanMan

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Aarohi this is one beautiful shot you've penned!

Raman's journey from being a broken soul to feeling completeness... the entire OS was oh so beautifully and delicately written.

Raman and Ishu's happiness at becoming parents... so palpable 😳

Brilliantly done Aarohi 👏

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maanvir

@maanvir

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Seriously! YOu surprise me betu!!!

People say that u read the writer's mind thru his writings ... but in ur case its completely the opposite...

If I had nt known u personally I wud hv concluded that u r a die hard romantic person who has a special place for love in her life...

But now that I know you I also know wat ur opinion about love is...Aaah our never ending debates about love and the need of a partner in lyf shall continue for years may be...

And dat surprises me...bcz ur worls r completely opposite of wat u thnk about love...

How do u do it re...seriously I am just nt getting it...

This was such a beautiful love story one wud actually fall for it...n people who don't believe in love wid start believing in it if dey get the actual feel of dis story...

Raman's painful past...Ishita's arrival in his life...Ishita's naivety...Raman's resistance...ishu's determination were all beautifully portrayed...

I liked those simple yet meaningful nuances of the story that emphasised the depth of love & bonding...

Love increses with tym...rightly said...i hv experienced it...

Even after years of marraige having goosebumps just at the thought of ur beloved...might sound exaggerated...but if u r truly in love den u wud experience dis...

Raman teaching Ishu to make parathas n deir efforts to settle into each other's life...

I loved dose small moments...

And the 3 picture holder frame idea was bang on...

Lovely...

The lyrics synced perfectly with the story...

I hvnt heard the song yet...

I am going to here it right away...

Gud one betu...keep writing 👏👏👏