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Mannu first of all welcome back 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
the day you made this post with the title of the story i was just so excited...the title in itself is just so beautiful and today when i read part 1 i was amazed
this is going to be such a beautiful and different story i m sure
the way you started it was more like a mystery...to know whose words are those whom she is waiting for...the whole build up was beautiful
his dialogs were so poetic...i just loved them so i would say brilliant writing it was plus how you incorporated the song
most of my stories have songs incorporated as i just love doing that and so when i saw something similar here, i toh loved it
"Hum to aye the ye sochkar ke aaj us khoobsurat pari ko apne baahon me panaah denge, par wo to humse door jane ki koshish me hai"
Seene se lag jaa tu
Balkhaake meri jaana
Seene se lag jaa tu
Balkhaake meri jaana
"Ye gumsum rath, ye gupchup badal, ye khamosh fizaein, ye madhosh kar dene wali hawaein. Ye sama bhi hamare milan ke intezar me hai"
Gumsum sa hai
Gupchup sa hai
Khamosh hai
Madhosh hai
Ye sama haan ye sama
Kuch aur hai
Gumsum sa hai
Gupchup sa hai
Khamosh hai
Madhosh hai
Ye sama haan ye sama
Kuch aur hai
all the lines above were just so beautiful and romantic
it was like a dream...sorry not like it was a dream actually...as i read ahead it came out that she was dreaming...now she is married to not him but someone else but he could not go from her thoughts, her dreams
i feel this is the crux of the story...just eager to know how you take it ahead
this was lovely and i totally loved it
please continue soon and do PM me
P.S. I read about your mother...i will say you are really lucky to have got the chance to live with your mother even after marriage...it is very rare and i know the pain of living without your mother...i know it is tough but i would just say just cherish the beautiful time you spent with her and let her go happily...ofcourse you can visit her whenever possible and phone is obviously there to keep you connected...be strong girl
Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon
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