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maanvir

@maanvir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: ..TeriDeewani..
Res for part 2

Sirf Res karegi ya cmnt b karegi...
jinko chap dediacte kiya unme se sirf Hersheys ne reply kiya...

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maanvir

@maanvir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: janani_divan
Brilliant start,actually i drop my idea to read CK ,bcoz of some confussion .i stop to read it,my journey up to half of 2nd thread.after that im busy with some stupidity busy ,not get time to read.

coming to this concept,the way u pen down your concept is undoubtedly brilliant.

As per my view ,it is fan fiction story.if the characters are positive and we read good bound,good chemistry b/w angad and ishu,we will accept it. hey u mentioned ishita name ?i have to read one more time..

i loved hubbibee sweet torture and ishu's daily chors.unique concept.
Y raman and ishu seperated?all will u updated in further story.

continue soon.
We are waiting..

Hi Janani!

Great to c u aftr so long...
oh u quit reading CK? I hope u wil cmplt reading it smday...
thnx fr all tge appreciation

I am glad u decided to read dis one...
u wil knw abt IshRa in the upcoming updates

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maanvir

@maanvir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: asma18
Hmmm jitna bhi padha lagta hai. ..
raman ki entry hone wali hai. .
[:D/]
... full update k baad hi. ..
lamba wala comment mile ga. .

Continue sooon
😊

Sahi samjha...
Lambawala cmnt to chahiye hi...akhir tumhari narazgi door karne ki dawa jo sath lekar ayi hun 😉

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..TeriDeewani..

@..TeriDeewani..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: maanvir

Sirf Res karegi ya cmnt b karegi...
jinko chap dediacte kiya unme se sirf Hersheys ne reply kiya...

Bahut jaldi karungi.. 😳

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pari

@divazfankau

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Posted: 10 years ago

#135

omg kaya hai raman
toh kahi nahi hai
I just this angad plz ishra
moment continue soon waiting early

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Pankhuri

@DivanIsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#136

RES

unres

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Mannu di what do i say...this was such a cute part...out of imagination actually

Ishta ka childhood ❤️

i literally cracked up at ur logic of 8+4 and 7+5 🤣

but i was like aww all this while when i was reading

sweetness and cuteness overloaded

Simmi was cutely irritating...so many kids do that actually in real and it even gets embarrassing for the elder sibling

but aapne aadha kyun chod diya...pura karo na plz jaldi...jeeju ne aake disturb kiya tha kya ki aadha hi chodke bhhaag gaye aap...if thats the case you both can enjoy 😉 we won't mind

P.S. the intro before this part was just too funny 🤣

but you know i don't need all those tips i already accepted Ishita and Angad with a heavy heart though but for you

please please please continue soon

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mannu di what are you doing with this story

this was such a cuteee part i am simply short of words

innocent and pure love it is

i loved Toshi Ji throughout the update...she is so good with kids

and Raman Ishita what do is say...they are so sweet...lovebirds type

i love you bolke kiss 😳 bachpan se hi Raman itna tez hai aage jaake kya karega 😆

i know i am repeating the words again but this was just sooo cute

cuteness at its peak

sach mein kamaal hi kar diya aapne

bas only if it wasn't a broken dream 😭😭😭

khair no complaints i am just moving with the flow

but one thing is sure...yeh story kabhi mere khwabon se jaa na sakegi i am sure of that...this is just so cute and unique

love ya for this part

Edited by DivanIsh - 10 years ago

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sukanksha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#137

Didi pehle kaan pakad kar sorry Mai late hoon. I am sorry was badly caught up in work or Mai apki har update itminan se padhna chahti hoon na k in rush.

This update is dedicated to US... Jiju Ki Deewaanis...
Or I wanna give us a name "jiju Ki pankhiiyaaan".

Di I will start from the end... All this was about Angad????????????????
I want to hate him from first chapter but now I can't... I just can't... This person can only be loved... I give a damn who is the hero of this story but I love Angad Malhotra .
Awww... Jiju is damn cute as u told the whole characterization is based on him. <3 <3
What to pick what to leave each n every line dialogue is the best... But still I will try to find few diamonds .

Habeebi--- the best one.
His love is a gift that I open everyday- the romantic one.
hamare Habeebi thandi chayi peete hain. --- is it with jiju?? Then same pinch me too :P

What am I? An alarm clock? Which snoozes after every 15 minutes? I said wake up"--- cracked me up.. Har maa or biwi ka dialogue ... Sometimes in different versions too.

The easiest way to eat healthy is to write HEALTHY on everything that you eat" -- I m gonna apply this LOL

100 baat Ki ek baat it was stupendously marvellous...

P.s. Have you told jiju about this...

He ought to know about it.. Hum protest karenge

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sukanksha

@sukanksha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#138

Res for part 3

Will read when you will complete

Unres---

I cant believe it. I seriously cant believe it Maine 8 baje chapter padhna shuru Kia n now its 11:30 ab complete Hua. Itni interruptions beech me. God.
Anyway... The cuteness of the chap made me forget everything.

8+4=12 and 7+5=12 I love this logic
Di aap jitna acha romance likhte ho usse b acha bacho Ki cute cute talks likhte ho. Itna observe karte ho bacho KO.
Their relationship is like kachhi Umar ke pakke bandhan.
If both Raman and Ishita were so much in love then how come they got separated. Madhavi?????

Edited by sukanksha - 10 years ago

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sukanksha

@sukanksha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: .Harshita.

I guess am the only exception here..🤣

Harshi... I m accompanying u.
I love angad
Hum dono us group k honge

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maanvir

@maanvir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: sukanksha
Didi pehle kaan pakad kar sorry Mai late hoon. I am sorry was badly caught up in work or Mai apki har update itminan se padhna chahti hoon na k in rush.

This update is dedicated to US... Jiju Ki Deewaanis...
Or I wanna give us a name "jiju Ki pankhiiyaaan".

Di I will start from the end... All this was about Angad????????????????
I want to hate him from first chapter but now I can't... I just can't... This person can only be loved... I give a damn who is the hero of this story but I love Angad Malhotra .
Awww... Jiju is damn cute as u told the whole characterization is based on him. <3 <3
What to pick what to leave each n every line dialogue is the best... But still I will try to find few diamonds .

Habeebi--- the best one.
His love is a gift that I open everyday- the romantic one.
hamare Habeebi thandi chayi peete hain. --- is it with jiju?? Then same pinch me too :P

What am I? An alarm clock? Which snoozes after every 15 minutes? I said wake up"--- cracked me up.. Har maa or biwi ka dialogue ... Sometimes in different versions too.

The easiest way to eat healthy is to write HEALTHY on everything that you eat" -- I m gonna apply this LOL

100 baat Ki ek baat it was stupendously marvellous...

P.s. Have you told jiju about this...

He ought to know about it.. Hum protest karenge

Let me start frm the end too...
I made ur Jiju read dis part...FYI dis is the first tym he read my work...
I hdnt told him just WhatsApped the part when he was asleep & I went to sleep...
dis mrng wen the alarm rang @ 6:15 he said 6:30 and wrapped me tightly in his embrace...
I was lyk wat? The same thing repeating? I doubted if he had read the story as I hadnt seen him wake up bfr dat...
He was acting overtly romantic tdy & smiling at me...
I was lyk wats wrong???
He then said I read it...
And dats it...dats it u knw..
no appreciation nothing...

Ab mujhe lag raha hai ke maine kuch zyada hi tareef kardi tumhare Jiju ki