Tum Mere Khwabon Se Jaa Na Sake: FF (Created New Thread) - Page 15

Originally posted by: maanvir

Hey Roshnee! Thanks fr the cmnt...

I guessed dat cud b d reason...So I am just gonna assure u dat dis story too is unique lik CK & u wont regret reading it...(ermmm fingers crossd)

Raman dead???? I am nt so cruel...Am I? But I can be if u gv auch wonderful ideas 😉

Originally posted by: maanvir

Let me start frm the end too...
I made ur Jiju read dis part...FYI dis is the first tym he read my work...
I hdnt told him just WhatsApped the part when he was asleep & I went to sleep...
dis mrng wen the alarm rang @ 6:15 he said 6:30 and wrapped me tightly in his embrace...
I was lyk wat? The same thing repeating? I doubted if he had read the story as I hadnt seen him wake up bfr dat...
He was acting overtly romantic tdy & smiling at me...
I was lyk wats wrong???
He then said I read it...
And dats it...dats it u knw..
no appreciation nothing...

Ab mujhe lag raha hai ke maine kuch zyada hi tareef kardi tumhare Jiju ki

Originally posted by: Wings-of-Fire

Oh, I've got no doubt that it's gonna be unique and interesting!

Raman's not dead? Ok, forget I said anything about it!

Originally posted by: aarohi26

oye Manny Di...dil khush kar diya
aaj toh aap pakka jalogi as aapko zyada privilege nahi milegi as u know fan moment hai na yahan 😉

Patha hai patha hai...Waise bhi tum log mujhse zyad Jiju ko pyar karte ho😕

but haan thanks to u for introducing with your little and beautiful world. i am sure that ur each day start with smile and ends with smile also and credit goes to our jiju 😆

Isme bhi Jiju ko credit?😲 Meri to koi qadar hi nahi😭

he is really so sweet yaar and ur nich name for him habeebi is sho shweet... 😳 an samjhi ki hum Jiju ka naam lete hain toh aap jalofy hoin hoti ho 😃

Oye wo ter Jiju hain...But pati mere hain...Samjhi na😉

actually mere pass na sacchi words nahi hai is part ke liye. i don't know what u planned but yes this part is my favourite now and will always remain favourite

Finally ek to positive review😃

but main aapse sahi main angry hoon.

Haayin? Pehle itni tareef ki ab mujhpe gussa?

u portrayed angad so much beautifully. and i don't know whether my heart will able to accept Raman or not.

Iske liye hi to sabko tayyar kar rahi hun😉

angad itna sweet hai. aapko lagta hau ki iss pyaari so duniya main an raman ki koi jagah hai?, mujhe nahi lagta. an yeah mera angad me liye soft corner kyon hai yeh aap samjh gayi hogi 😉

didn't have much to say but yes waiting for next part and yeah. now Raman also can't replace angad 😳

Chal badhiya...To tu Angad ko rakh le aur ter Jiju ko mere liye chod de😳

PS: agar Jiju mera yeh comment padh rahe ho toh i want to say him that u are really so sweet and our Manny Di loves u alot. itna ki hum virtual saaliyo se bhi jakofy ho jaati hai. lots of wishes from me to this beautiful couple. god bless u always.

Thanks Arohi...dats really sweet...

PSS: jiju ke baare mein sab bata diya but u havent tell his name and u promised me on CK thread that u will share ur love story with us. kab karogi???? we alll are waiting 😊

Isi story me kuch kuch apni story ki jhalkiyaan de dungi...Itna tym nahi hai ke poori story bataun

Originally posted by: --abha--

Part 1...

Sryyy i am late...

AMAZING START!!!!! Vandu dont like her meeting him...She sees him with someone and then choise side to cry😭😭...Then he came and such a beautiful dialogues and chand chupa song...He said all things she wanted to hear😳😳...

Till then all mystery were killing me...why this happening, why he is behaving like that and then bam...seriously she is married 😲😔😭...

Angad Mahlotra...so she is married and dreaming about him her Raman...

Obviously i need to read part 2...

Will be going to read now...