Tum Mere Khwabon Se Jaa Na Sake: FF (Created New Thread) - Page 16

Originally posted by: --abha--

Part 2

Itna pyar ANGAD Malhotra ke liye...I am confused hmmm...

Obviously i love ishra but this angad is confusing me...

All convos very beautiful , the way she described him, his antics but then i want Raman...

Next update mein pakka milega...

I want to know mystery ...
Where is Raman, Why in her dream not with her...

Waiting for next...

Update sooniah...

Update not seen????
Yes.. Sorry i opened page no 21.. And commented instantly... Then realized my mistake...
Ohh now you want my cmments...
What do you want to know from me that this story is so different and indeed it is..
That you write brilliantly.. Off course you do...
You are an expert in throwing bombs... Soon the scientists from the world over will invite you for a special conference seeking knowledge about how get the readers hooked on a plot and leave them guessing update and update over.. This was my actual state when i read the part 1. The love chit chat was going on between ishita and raman and suddenly you conclude the chapter by introducing some angad malhotra.. This time made him much more than that ajnabi who was still tolerable(when ishita thought she loved him) and poor souls like me kept praying ajnabi and raman to be one person.. But this time angad malhotra direct husband... And raman in dreams... Boo hooo...
Part 2... Usual routine of household going on... Every wife somewgat faces it on routine basis... Ishita happily in love with her husband and dreaming about raman.. Now i have issues.. I personally dont like unrequitted love stories.. I mean ishita and raman should be together but when they are not its like an emptiness engulfing the mind and soul... U think about the person, dream as much as you can about him/her... But the reality us you cannot live with that person.. Share your life with that one.. That is what my heart never accepts and the story becomes a sad one... And not a love story anymore...
I continued reading coz i wanted to know certain whys and hows...
Its like saying she loved him and he loved her but it was but it was not that simple...
Now part 3.. Simply love bachpan ki mohabbat... Innocent si.. Woh unharmed possessiveness.. It is something i die for literally... And to know bachpan ki mohabbat adhoori reh gayi as far as the story has progressed till now i am still with a sad face..
But the loyal reader will not leave this story coz i still wanna know Why and How could you do this to the characters who were in love right from their bachpan...
Now that u r writin it.. Its your story.. U only will decide how to make it a perfect imperfect story.. And make that khwab a haqeqat...

Originally posted by: Richajin

Update not seen????

its on pg 18

OMG Manooo .

I just Loved it .these two are adorable.waiting to see how the story continues.plz update soon!and pm me.

I just loved it
So adorable

Originally posted by: Wings-of-Fire

You're cruel.😭

😲 Aisa kyun? 😭

Originally posted by: maanvir

😲 Aisa kyun? 😭

Awww such a cute update Di...

awww such a cute update
they were so cute
bahu dhundli was awesome
then y d hell they separated