DESIRE III 26/9/18 - UPDATED ON WATTPAD - Page 23

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Posted: 10 years ago
cute story looking forward to more!
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Beautiful update Vee Ishu wedding follow all ritual that made her family happy. And follow by Raman family too.ishu or may be all the girls will feel sad that they have to leave their house and parents since they stay with them since they was born. Raman let Ishu to slee fully cause he had a plan for the night naughty RKB? Thank s Vee for the treat at the weekend we did not get YHM But we can read your story. Have a wonderful start for new week dear. By the way the other Mini short story thread are rocking too.😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Those songs are my favs😊 awesome update.. his last promise was 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Veee...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yeh kya kar diya tu ne ☺️ ❤️

This update had just too many pheels !! So many love pheels that I kept singing while reading and even now I am singing all these songs. Ufff ...!!!!! RKB in Veshti and I can drool all day. Eeekkksss, biwi in Madisar..!!!! one sexy sexy saree that is. Maybe I should have briefed you about the saree and you would have give a hatke romance at the wedding hall. Our mistake 😆. But Oh my my .. !! Vee I am grinnning and IshRa in your story gives so many pheels to me ❤️

Their wedding was fun but Mandir mein romancing had all the love you mentioned 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Gan-

Vee this has been such a respite story for me ...as it delves so much into the mohabbat of Ishra...and while we're having such an emotional track in YHM...the happy times of marriage and the families together celebrating their union, in the traditional way just felt so comforting. And darling I always get awed by your details in creating the environment...I was transported to their wedding scene just the way your described each little thing and could visualize everything...

Love it! 👏

Can't wait for Raman to live up to his silent promise to her about not letting her sleep on their 1st night in their nuptial bed,☺️😉


Thanks you Gan. I have to say that I was all at sea about describing a Tamil wedding but Aru n Anusha rescued me.

I have to think of something romantic for him to do for their wedding night - he already gave her a suhaag raat in Rajasthan 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: maduragymhasium

romantic update dear

continue soon cant wait

i pray adi didnt create any problem between ishra

please make ishra live a happy married life before storm came dear

ishra in so much love dear

i am in ishra world

waiting for our ishra marriage

you pen it well

simply lovable excellent update

update soon dear

congrats for thread 3 dear



Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Appreciate it 😃
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Originally posted by: usaonly

Beautiful update Vee Ishu wedding follow all ritual that made her family happy. And follow by Raman family too.ishu or may be all the girls will feel sad that they have to leave their house and parents since they stay with them since they was born. Raman let Ishu to slee fully cause he had a plan for the night naughty RKB? Thank s Vee for the treat at the weekend we did not get YHM But we can read your story. Have a wonderful start for new week dear. By the way the other Mini short story thread are rocking too.😉


Thank you so much Jum. 😃
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Originally posted by: Aru.Divan

Veee...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yeh kya kar diya tu ne ☺️ ❤️

This update had just too many pheels !! So many love pheels that I kept singing while reading and even now I am singing all these songs. Ufff ...!!!!! RKB in Veshti and I can drool all day. Eeekkksss, biwi in Madisar..!!!! one sexy sexy saree that is. Maybe I should have briefed you about the saree and you would have give a hatke romance at the wedding hall. Our mistake 😆. But Oh my my .. !! Vee I am grinnning and IshRa in your story gives so many pheels to me ❤️

Their wedding was fun but Mandir mein romancing had all the love you mentioned 😳



Aru, OMG those gifs just took me back to Ishra dreamland 😳

The songs - well they are yours yaar. I wouldn't have a clue if you hadn't helped. The madisaar - I know it shows leg, that's why I mentioned it just a bit 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Let me start with an apology for not commenting for the last 2 parts. I confess that I have read them on my mobile in between the never ending thing called AD but it is so hard to type in mobile so... Hope you will look past my lack of commenting...


Loved the updates... (Well nothing new there, is it 😃). Specially the last update and love you for making sure that Isitha wore a Madisar. Being Brahmins I could not understand why she did not wear a madisar in the serial and thank you, thank you, thank you for fulfilling that part in this FF. These small attention to detail you are incorporating in every update make this FF that much better.,.

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Posted: 10 years ago
It is very nice to see that you have returned to writing stories on IF. I just love to read your stories! Reading your beautiful writing just brightens up my day!

The story is progressing very nice so far. I am eagerly waiting for the entry of Adi in this tory. I know you will make that part interesting as well. I am all excited for the romantic parts that you have hinted at. [Please give us one more major romantic section before the entry of Adi. I just wish Adi turns out to be a vulnerable kid who has a hard exterior but just wishes for affectionI want Ishita to be more of his friend rather than a mother. However, I know that you will do this part justice as well, just like you have done for all other parts..]

Continue the very good work!
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