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Posted: 10 years ago

#211

Vee this has been such a respite story for me ...as it delves so much into the mohabbat of Ishra...and while we're having such an emotional track in YHM...the happy times of marriage and the families together celebrating their union, in the traditional way just felt so comforting. And darling I always get awed by your details in creating the environment...I was transported to their wedding scene just the way your described each little thing and could visualize everything...

Love it! 👏

Can't wait for Raman to live up to his silent promise to her about not letting her sleep on their 1st night in their nuptial bed,☺️😉

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Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#212

Wow well done😊

wonderfully written update. So nice so heart touching ❤️

just loved it a lot.

Loved the last dialogue of raman to ask ishu to rest now and won't be able to rest in the night🤣

so cute😃

please update soon yaar

can't wait to read the next part

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lakshmi

@maduragymhasium

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#213

romantic update dear

continue soon cant wait

i pray adi didnt create any problem between ishra

please make ishra live a happy married life before storm came dear

ishra in so much love dear

i am in ishra world

waiting for our ishra marriage

you pen it well

simply lovable excellent update

update soon dear

congrats for thread 3 dear

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Veeann

@Veeann

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: sush_rddt
Omg the update...
superb at last married..
so happy. ..

Baki res

Thank you Sush

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Veeann

@Veeann

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: rk654
simply awesome...very beautifully written.as usual...
Griha Pravesh must be done in punjabi rituals..but you did with tamilian rituals and song😆

Well Aru had given me such beautiful Tamil songs I had to use them - besides no one told me about Punjabi rituals so it was just a generic griha pravesh 😆 😆

Edited by Veeann - 10 years ago

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Veeann

@Veeann

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: fugitives123
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Veee 🤗 sooo good...loved it!!! loved every bit of this update...the description was lovely!!
you had everything covered including her head bowed down because she was shy. The songs were beautiful and fit really well.👏

I had this sad feeling that in the show, that IshRa were not happy at the time of their wedding. I feel so happy after reading your update. Your update made me so happy. Not only were they happy, they also did it for each other and not just Ruhi ke liye.👏

The last line was killer .Haaye...yeh raat kab aayega?😳

Thank you Ann and thanks for all the help darling. The video really helped. 😃

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Veeann

@Veeann

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#217

Originally posted by: vidya.anand
☺️❤️
finally their second marriage in full traditional style...loved it

as always I am in awe of the way you describe and detail it Vee...loved her bridal look and could visualize it all

sighhh I miss such cuteness on the show yaar...the song is my fav and you used it so perfectly!

cont soon...cant wait for naughty putthar! 😆

Thanks Vids. Yaar the song is all Aru's - I would have had no idea whatsoever!!!!!

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Veeann

@Veeann

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#218

Originally posted by: avni_19
yayayayayay!! Finallyy Shaadii hogaiii!!! Awesomeee updateee!!! Loved it soo muchh!!
I loved the way how u described the love warmth and affection pouring from both the sides.. The chemistry of the jodi is simplyy burning with mere looks! I could imagine that! Just beautifulll Veee... :D :D

The last line by Raman... Bwhahaha*evil smirk*.. All the best Ishuuu kannaaa! :P ;)

Hey thanks so much Sunita 😃

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Veeann

@Veeann

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#219

Originally posted by: EkPaheli
Lovely update Vee.

Absolutely adored how you wrote Ishita feelings regarding leaving her parents and wanting to be with Raman and Ruhi at the same time. Sigh always so tough being a woman. And the cute moment post marriage between Ru and Ishu as she says she would take her parents with her, so sweet.

Now, am excited for what happens as Adi comes home, cause that would be another challenge.

Thanks Aani.

Yeah Adi - see thats another whole story and I dont know whether I want to get into that or just do a One Year later epilogue after Raman brings him home. Will need to see how my schedule is!!!!!

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Veeann

@Veeann

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#220

Originally posted by: ABBY92
I must say the temple wedding was described beautifully and it really feels complete now that Raman and Ishita have also taken their wedding vows in the temple, in front of their families. Finally, she's in Raman's house as his wife and Ruhi's mother.

Thanks you Abby. Thank you for reading

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