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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 3

Nahi ishita ehsa nahi kar sakti .vo mujse pyar karti h .maana mene gusse mein bohut kuch kaha par vo to humesa meri dil ki baat samajti h na...phir aaj kyu nahi...kya mene use for granted to nahi liya na...nahi nahi ehsa nahi h ...i kn that ...i m sure abt that ...ya phir kya sach me mene...jo bi ho me use abhi baat karta hu
Saying that he went to iyer house...
There ishita was still lost in her thoughts after talking to appa she was lightheaded
Esha kyu lag raha h ki mene raman se sari baat share ki ..ehsa lag raha h jese mene apni dil me chupi baat unne kah di ho ...nahi me raman ye sabkahke une kabi hurt nahi karugi
Ishita...
Raman app yaha ...kya hua app tik to hona ...app roh rahe te kya...ankhe laal h
Nahi ehsa kuch nahi bas apni madaras ko miss kar rahata uski lec ki adat jo hogayi...din acha nahi jata uske bina.
Acha to app muje ayaha tana marne aye h muje laga biwi rut ke chali gayi to shayad une manae ka koshish to karte par nahi ...akir me kon hu apaka...koi nahi na ...
Ishita ...kaisi bate kar rahi ho ...
Acha me kuch bi bate kar rahi hu aur jo app sabke samane kaha vo sab teek ya ye kahu vo sab sach h na raman jawab dijiye
Ishita mene sirf gusse me aakar kaha mere majbori kobi to samajo
Raman plz majbori ka naam mat lijeye
Kabi adi ko lekar majboor to kabi kisi aur ke naam par...insab me kaha hu ...jab man kiya to chilaya ...chika ...apne muje samaj ke kya rakha h ...ye zindagi hum dono se judi huwi h ...apko nahi lagata ki majbori ka naam lete lete apne muje 4granted leyeya
Ishita...
Haan raman me sach kah rahi hu ...tak gayi me ...ek achi bahu , babi , ma aur khas kar ke ek patni ke rup me mein haar gayi .aur app janate ho muje kisne hararya...
Aap ne raman aap ne ..
Har waqt muje ye ehsas diyala ki me kitna galat hu ...mein ye bikul nahi kahati ki mein humesha sahi hu par raman mein humesha galat bi nahi hu...jab bi koi achi baat ho to meri patni meri bahu aur kuch bi galat hoto ...humara aap ka koi rishta nahi ...apki sabse badi bhul humari shaadi...
Nahi ishita ehsa mein kabi soch nahi sakta...haan mein manta hu gusse me kuch kaha...(vutting in b\w)
Raman gusse mein inhsaan sach kahte h

Raman mene rinki aur miku ke bich koi diff nahi dekha dono meri behan hi h ...jab rinki ki shaadi tot gayi ti to kahina kahi mein apne appko zemedar manti ti jab ki meri koi galti hi nahi ti
Rishta pami aunty leke ayi ti aur papaji ne pura background check kiya ..par jab ladka bura nakala to vo ishita ki galati ...phir bi mein chup baiti ...aur socha agar mihir se rinki ki shaadi karavo to sab teek ho jayega ...par raman mene sirf ek advice di ti ek suggestion ...kisi ko force to nahi kiya na ...rinki ho ya mihir dono bade h apna faisala kud le sakte h sahi aur galat ki pehchaan h to unki shaadi mein kuch prob hua to mein kaisa zimedaar
Ishita plz ek baar meri baat to suno
Nahi raman aaj mein bholugi aur aap sunege ...
Ishi...
Plz raman ise phele mein kamrooz hojavo ...plz
Hmmm
Raman har rishita sirf pyar se nahi banata ...vishwas ,self respect , mutual understanding yeh sab bi utni hi imp h jitna pyar ka ...par raman humare rishte me muje insab ki kami mahsoos hoti h ...jab phele humara rishta sirf ruhi keliye ta tab bi vishwas to ta kyuki hum dono apne past se kuch sikha h ...par aaj jab hum dono ek dorse se pyar karte h to ye vishwas , understanding main imp self respect to h nahi
Ish...
Plz raman ab ye mat kahiye ki aap muje ...is rishte ki respect karte h agar karte h to vo sari baate aap kabi karte h nahi ...saath sirf ache waqt me nahi balki bure waqt me bi dene chayiye..aur hum dono ke bich kuch bi kadwahat ho to aapas me solve karna chaye h nahi pure ghar walo ke saamne is tar muje sarminda kare...
Is leye raman mene phaisal liya h ki me abse sirf ruhi ki ishima aur adi ki ishita aunty banke jeena chati hu...atleast mere character par baar baar sawal to nahi utegena ...mein aapki patni badme aur bachoki ma baneke kush hu ...plz vo hak mujseab mat cheena varna adhi to mar hi chuki hu par puri nahi marna chati...plz mein haath jodke req karti hu...
Saying that she brke down completely
Ishita bas ...bohut bol diya . ...mein manta hu mene bohut galati ki h par uska saza tum muje de sakti ho par mujse meri zindagi ...meri kushi...meri sase ho mat cheno ...
Ishita muje bas ek moka do mein sab teek kar dunga
Raman kya aap apni kahi hui baate phirse le sakto h kya...nahi na ...to mujse aur ummedbi mat karna ...plz aap ayase chale jayiye ...kahi ehsa na ho ki mein gusse mein kuch galat kahu...plz ...
Ishita...
Plz...go...raman ek baat humesha yaad rako rishte, vishwas glass ki tarah hoti h usebohut sambaal ke , pyar se rakna chaiye ...agar vo tut jaye to bohut mushikse doobara jod to dege hum usme humesa darare rahti h
(Raman always remember one thing a realtionship or trust is just like a pice of glass its very fragile we should always tke care of it properly ...r one mistake can brke the glass into pieces yes v cn join it with great diff bt the crack will always remain there)
Raman was staring her frm door frame he promised himself
Ishita mein janta hu ki mene tume bohut jyada hurt kiya par me vada karta hu ki mein tume apna khoya hua vishwas dilauga is rishte par bharosa dilauga
Aur ye RAMAN KUMAR BHALA yani ki tumara Ravan kumar ka wada h uski jansi ki rani se ...ab ise jansi ki rani ko usko jansi pura hak samaan aur ijat se hi duga
Saying that he left the room with nw plan to win her back in his own style

THANK YOU guys for all ur support n encouragement .
When i thought abt this os i thought of only 1 part bt bez of u guys 3 parts ...
I kn this part is too boring n maybe nt upto ur expectation bt plz bear with it n next part is the last part hope u ll be still interested in it
N keep gussing what he might hv planned n if u guys hv any sugg or advice plz do tell its always welcome

There will be lots of spelling mistakes too as i hv nt recheck it
sorry for that


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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Hey dear That was a nice one continue soon 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu

Hey dear That was a nice one continue soon😛




Thank you
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Loved this part dear
ishu was right

translations wi'll be given later dear as I can't do that on phone
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good move in story..raman 1 minute mai promise kartha hai,1 minute mai esai broke be kartha hai.never trust in his promises.lovely update.ishita should protect her self respect.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: vidya_prasad

Loved this part dear
ishu was right

translations wi'll be given later dear as I can't do that on phone



Thank you dear
i cnt thank you enough for helping me in translating
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Best update.
Continue sooonish..
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

well written..👍🏼



Thank you
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: swathin

ishu...

Haan appa [Yes appa]

Tum tik to ho na [Are you all right?]

Haan appa mein bikul teek hu app ehse kyu puch rah he [Yes Appa I'm alright.Why are you asking it?]

Acha ab meri ishu mujse hi baat chupane lagegi [Oh now is ishu is hiding things from me]

Nahi appa vo mein... [No appa I ]

N she broke down

Appa mein tak gayi ..ek achi maa, bahu , bhabi , aur kas kar ke ek patni [Appa I'm tired of becoming a mother,DIL,SIL and especially a wife]

Banar me haar gayi [But I lost]

Sab mujse naraz h .kuch acha karne ki koshish mein me sab kuch barbad kar di [Everybody is sad with me. For doing something good,everyhting got spoilt]

Kya me itna buri hu kya muje kush hone ka koi hak nahi [Am I so bad? Do I have no right to be happy?]

Nahi beta ehsa nahi kahte...jis ishu ko hum jante h vo bohut strong h .meri beti ehse weak nahi ho sakti ...beta raman ne jo kuch kaha vo sirf gusse me kaha [No you shouldn't speak like that. the ishu we know is very strong. my daughter can't grow weak like this. Whatever Rsman told was when he was angry]

Apni behan ka ghar toote hue konsa bhai bear karga ...so just he reacted to the situation .uske man me ya dil me ehsa kuch nahi h.. . [Which brother will bear seeing his sister's house break?So he just reacted that way.He doesn't mean it ]

Par appa kya me unka kuch nsho lagti humesha gussa ...humesha tana ...me bi to insaan hu muje bi to hurt hoti h kya uska kuch nahi [But Don't I mean anything to mean always angry... Even i'm a human even I get hurt.Doesn't that mean anything to him]

Beta humesha ek baat yaad rak jinse hum bohut jyada pyaar karte h na unse hi hum naraz hote h aur hum bindaaz koi baat bhale vo kitni buri ya takleef bhari ho hum kahte .kyuki hume pata h vo humari baat zaroor samjege. [Always remember we are only hurt to the person whom we love a lot. We know they'll understand us]

Nahi appa ...me samaj sakti hu bas baat h ki dorso ko samajte samajte me kud apne app ko kahi kho rahi hu ...me ye nahi karahi hu ki raman ke saath me kush nahi hu balki me bohut kush hu par kabi lagta h ki me kisi aur ki zindagi udar me jee rahi hu [No aapa. I'm thinking I have spent lot of time thinking and making understand others. I thought I was happy wiht Raman not only happy but very happy.But someimes I think I'm living in some other's place]

Ishu...

Haan appa kabi kabi soch ne me majboor hu ki agar shagun raman ki zindagi me na aye aur is ghar ko ruhi aur adi na dete kya hum kabi kushi se jee pate ...bikul nahi appa bikul bi nahi [sometimes I think if shagun and raman had not married and no got adi and ruhi.Would we be happy?]

Jab adi ka custody case chal raha ta to mene dekha h mummyji ka tadap ghar ke chirag ke liye [When adi's custody case was going on.I have seen mummyji dying for hte ghar ke chirag]

Ruhi hote hu bi unone bar bar har bar adi ke leye pareshan te unke ghar ke chirag ke liye ..kya apko lagta h vo muje meri kamiyo ko apnayege [Even though ruhi was with them she was crying for Adi.Do you think she'll accept my negatives]

Me agar kuch acha karu to meri bahu meri patni ...agar kuch galat to muje shaadi karna sabse badi galti .[If i do something good it is my DIL and my wife. but if i do something wrong it's my mistake by marrying]

Appa mene ek simple si life ki dreams dekha h aaj kal vo bi ek dundalasa sapna jese lagta h ..mene rinki ki shaadi mihir se isleye kiya ta kyuki sirfmuje nahi balki poore parivaar valo ko uske upar vishwas ta .aur me rinki ko ise bahtar konsa heera desakti hu [I have only seen simple dremas but even that is looking blurr now. I made mihir marry rinki becuse whole family trusted him and which diamond can i give to rinki better than this]

Shaadi ke baad undono ki jemedari h apna ghar sambalana isme me kaise bich me aa sakti hu [After marriage they have to compromise and look after the needs.What can i do this?]

Aur miku appa vo bichari kud apni zindagi savaar rahi h vo bhala undono ke bich kyu aye gi [ Miku she couldn't control her ow life what will she do]

Nahi beta ehsa nahi bolte tum raman se baat karo sab tik ho jayega [No don't speak like that.Talk to raman everything will sort out]

Haan appa baat to me karugi ...pyar imp h ek relation mein par use bi imp self respect h understanding between two people [I will speak to him. ]

Mene kuch decide kiya h appa ... [I have decided something]

Kya decide kiya h ishu [What have you decided?]

Appa mene... [I..]

N suddenly d ph get disconnected when tried again ph was switched off

Kya ishita mujse chod ke to nahi jayegi na... [Will ishita leave me ]

Nahi ehsa nahi ho sakta mein use abhi jake baat karta hu [No I can't let this happen.I'll speak with her now]

Here ends the second part

As I said before I m nt a writer...i kn its long n boring

If u guys feel I should stop do tell me...criticism are always welcome.



Translations for second part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 4 coming soon
Edited by swathin - 10 years ago

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