ishra os heartbroken last part pg 9

Hey i m swathi
i m silent reader n i m nt a writer
after seeing yest ep i cnt stop myself frm writing a small story
i hope u ll accept n like it

I ll be writing it in hindi its completely based on ishu pov

Ishita was diting siting in her room lost in thoughts about yest events. Suddenly her thoughts was interupted by ringing of phone n caller was shown as raman .A small smile appreared muje pata h raman app mujse naraz nahi rah sakte
hello ...
hello ishima app kaise ho
ru...
haan me ...app mujse bina bole patti ke ghar kyu chali gayi
haan ishita aunty hum app se bohut naraz h..
ishu here was crying hearing her two angels speavking bt her heratbroke thinking raman even didnt mind calling once ..
Me teek too beta bas patti ki yaad aa rahi ti to socha kuch din yehi ruk jaavo
ishima no telling lies mujse pata h papa aur apka katti hui h na ...
no beta aise koi baat nahi h
to app ro kyu rahi ho...papa bi bohut sad h

Ishu...

Appa andar avona
ruhi ishima apse badme baat karege
ok bete tk care
aur adi app bi

Ok ishima ok ishita aunty

She kept the ph aside nt kng the ph was still on n a person was holding it
to hear her voice


Its just a starting i really wanted to kn whether i need to
continue it
i need ur sugg n feedback

Hey its very plz continue it soon

Wow...
Please continue sooonish..
Ishu is really hurt...

nice Start plz continue soon
waiting

nice starting..

ishu...

Haan appa

Tum tik to ho na

Haan appa mein bikul teek hu app ehse kyu puch rah he

Acha ab meri ishu mujse hi baat chupane lagegi

Nahi appa vo mein...

N she broke down

Appa mein tak gayi ..ek achi maa, bahu , bhabi , aur kas kar ke ek patni

Banar me haar gayi

Sab mujse naraz h .kuch acha karne ki koshish mein me sab kuch barbad kar di

Kya me itnaburi hu kya muje kush hone ka koi hak nahi

Nahi beta ehsa nahi kahte...jis ishu ko hum jante h vo bohut strong h .meri beti ehse weak nahi ho sakti ...beta raman ne jo kuch kaha vo sirf gusse me kaha

Apni behan ka ghar toote hue konsa bhai bear karga ...so just he reacted to the situation .uske man me ya dil me ehsa kuch nahi h...

Par appa kya me unka kuch nsho lagti humesha gussa ...humesha tana ...me bi to insaan hu muje bi to hurt hoti h kya uska kuch nahi

Beta humesha ek baat yaad rak jinse hum bohut jyada pyaar karte h na unse hi hum naraz hote h aur hum bindaaz koi baat bhale vo kitni buri ya takleef bhari ho hum kahte .kyuki hume pata h vo humari baat zaroor samjege.

Nahi appa ...me samaj sakti hu bas baat h ki dorso ko samajte samajte me kud apne app ko kahi kho rahi hu ...me ye nahi karahi hu ki raman ke saath me kush nahi hu balki me bohut kush hu par kabi lagta h ki me kisi aur ki zindagi udar me jee rahi hu

Ishu...

Haan appa kabi kabi soch ne me majboor hu ki agar shagun raman ki zindagi me na aye aur is ghar ko ruhi aur adi na dete kya hum kabi kushi se jee pate ...bikul nahi appa bikul bi nahi

Jab adi ka custody case chal raha ta to mene dekha h mummyji ka tadap ghar ke chirag ke liye

Ruhi hote hu bi unone bar bar har bar adi ke leye pareshan te unke ghar ke chirag ke liye ..kya apko lagta h vo muje meri kamiyo ko apnayege

Me agar kuch acha karu to meri bahu meri patni ...agar kuch galat to muje shaadi karna sabse badi galti .

Appa mene ek simple si life ki dreams dekha h aaj kal vo bi ek dundalasa sapna jese lagta h ..mene rinki ki shaadi mihir se isleye kiya ta kyuki sirfmuje nahi balki poore parivaar valo ko uske upar vishwas ta .aur me rinki ko ise bahtar konsa heera desakti hu

Shaadi ke baad undono ki jemedari h apna ghar sambalana isme me kaise bich me aa sakti hu

Aur miku appa vo bichari kud apni zindagi savaar rahi h vo bhala undono ke bich kyu aye gi

Nahi beta ehsa nahi bolte tum raman se baat karo sab tik ho jayega

Haan appa baat to me karugi ...pyar imp h ek relation mein par use bi imp self respect h understanding between two people

Mene kuch decide kiya h appa ...

Kya decide kiya h ishu

Appa mene...

N suddenly d ph get disconnected when tried again ph was switched off

Kya ishita mujse chod ke to nahi jayegi na...

Nahi ehsa nahi ho sakta mein use abhi jake baat karta hu

Here ends the second part

As I said before I m nt a writer...i kn its long n boring

If u guys feel I should stop do tell me...criticism are always welcome.

plzz plzz continue soon

Originally posted by: abcz123456

awesome very well written

plzz plzz continue soon

thank you so much dear

Ravan Kumar ab jayega apni Madrasan ko manane...
Raman ne sab sunlia..
Yay..
Continue sooonish...