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Posted: 10 years ago
@shalz,
i loved dis line:

Raman chuckled thinking Adi's punajbi nautanki genes seem to have woken up finally thanks to his full dramebaaz family. 😆😆

i loved this confession, especially him telling her abt his feelings for her in the past..how dose feelings developed n all d emotions he went through.. i missed this on the show! great job, something unique! 😃


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Posted: 10 years ago
All the OSes on the thread i havent reviewed so far, will do it by tonight! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aarohi's TS in below post. 😊
Edited by peace.. - 10 years ago
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TERI MERI KAHAANI

hi forumwaasiyo!! pehle toh lots of thanx to pallavi di for allowing me to write on this thon. I know I already res 2 songs and didn't write any one of them but kya karoon, we can't avoid somethings na, that's why... anyway, now no more bakwass and let's start with the story, this story is based on 2 very beautiful songs, aae ajnabi from dil se and another one bheegi si bhaagi si... so I hope you guys will like this story. .

Ho Paakhi Paakhi Pardesi
Paakhi Paakhi Pardesi
Paakhi Paakhi Pardesi
Paakhi Paakhi Pardesi

Paakhi Paakhi Pardesi
Paakhi Paakhi Pardesi

she was sitting in her room, in balcony. her face was resting on the railing of the balcony. the roads of chennai was as usual like everyday, e peoples was going to their homes from their workplaces, small kids were going to park with their mothers, the old ladies were standing on their doors and chatting with their neighbours, everyone was busy in their own world. she looked inside her home and found the situation was also same there. her appa came from office now and busy with her amma. he was taking his evening tea and amma was serving him snacks. she looked at opposite flat of their building, it was flat now, no more a home now. the peoples who was full of lives,who used to entertain whole society with their chirpiness was not here and she was !missing them badly, " kahan ho tum? jab vaada todna hi that toh kiya
kyon??? khud toh..." she was lost in his thoughts when her amma called her, " ishu. come kanna. tumhare French fries ready hai. aakar khaa lo"

ishita came in drawing room and sit beside her appa and greeted him. her amma bring her snacks and joined them. the father daughter duo started to talk on daily schedules, about her college, her studies and ishita asked about his office. there was a silence again on table. ishita took a deep breath and asked her father," appa. bhalla uncle ke baare mein kuch pata chala? ab kahan hai woh log?"

" no ishu. him logo be try kiya that but kuch pata nahi chalo. beete dino itna kuch achaanak ho gaya na ki ab samajh mein hi bahi aa raha hai ki kya kare but I have faith on god, woh log theek hi honge"

" haan kanna, tumhaare appa sahi keh rahe hai, Jo hua usko hum badal toh nahi sakte bas pray hi kar sakte hai. tum tension mat lo, jaakar padhaai kar lo"

ishita nodded in positive and went towards her room. she bolted her room's door and went towards book shelf and took out the photo hidden in between the books. she sat on the bed and pressed the photo near her heart, it was his last thing which she have, " I miss you Raman... please please phone us Raman. I want to know about your well being. kaash woh din humaare life mein nahi aata toh aaj sab kuch alag hota" she kissed his phota and recalled that day

Aye Ajnabi Tu Bhi Kabhi Aawaaz De Kahin Se
Aye Ajnabi Tu Bhi Kabhi Aawaaz De Kahin Se
Main Yahan Tukdon Mein Jee Raha Hoon
Main Yahan Tukdon Mein Jee Raha Hoon
Tu Kahin Tukdone Mein Jeen Rahi Hai

Aye Ajnabi Tu Bhi Kabhi Aawaaz De Kahin Se
Aye Ajnabi Tu Bhi Kabhi Aawaaz De Kahin Se

Iyyers and Bhallas were neighbours, who was living in chennai from past 18 years. being the employees of same firm, Mr bhalla and Mr iyyer became best friends and slowly slowly their wives also became good friends. their flats was on same floor. every evening was full of happiness for them and after birth of Raman, Mr bhalla elder son, the things became more beautiful. Raman was apple of eye between both the families. and the void of daughter was fulfilled by ishita, who was born after 2 years of Raman's birth.

Raman and ishita both were childhood friends. they shared their toys and games with each other. the 12 years of schools bring them more close. Raman was always protective for her. he used to take care her during their lunch break,while playing and going tutions. slowly the time passed. both started to grown up. where Raman got the sharp features,fair tonnes body and a good height, ishita got beautiful features of a girl, big black eyes, slim body, fair tonnes skin her black silky hairs can made anyone's knees weak.

in age of 18&16, they both felt, they were not just friends. the things went beyond now.the protectiveness is now converted into possiveness, the care is not only remain care now, it is much more then it. they knew, that it was not feelings of teenagers life, it was much more then it. was it love??

they both were living in same confusion. their friends used to tease them, push them to confess but they used to brushed them and their feelings but their doubts also confirmed when he saw a boy of her class was following her and approaching her for becoming her girlfriend. that was the limit for Raman. she remembers how Raman warned that boy to stay apart from her and in future never try to follow her again.

ishita laughed loudly on her fond memories of school. how Raman beat that boy and warn him to stay apart from her. she went towards her closet and took a card,it was the confession card, which Raman gave her on Valentine day and confessed his love for her. she closed her eyes again to recall that day

they went together on beach after their respective tuition classes. Ishita was observing him throughout the ride. nervousness was clearly visible on his face, she knew that why he was nervous. they were now sitting on beach with e folded knees, their bags was on their 2-wheelers. they both were staring the beautiful sunset.

" Raman! tum mujhe yahan sunset dikhaane ke liye laaye ho kya?"

" no ishi...ishita. woh main toh..."

" bolo na kya baat hai. mujhe phir ghar bhi jaana hai. studies bhi karni hai. jaldi bolo"

" haan woh..."

" Raman!!!!! you are impossible. Choti se baat kehne mein itna tym???? mein jaa rahi hoon"

she grabbed her scooty keys and started to walk. her heart was disappointed again. she was waiting for that day and finally when the day is came,her raavan was not confessing his feelings for her. " paaytham!muttal! gadha! itni Choti so baat toh bol nahi paa raha mujhse. pata nahi CEO kaise banega. murgun. mujhe bhi poori duniya mein yahi mila tha pyar karne ko?"

she went near her scooty and about to turn it when she heard, " I love you madrasan. pyar karta hoon tujhse. kya tu Dr.ishita iyyer banne ke baad, Dr. iahita ramam bhalla banegi?"

she turned her back side and stare him with her big eyes. he was standing in front of her, with a rose and a card in his hand, his eyes was tightly shut because of the fear of rejection. she laughed on his raavan cuteness, she moved towards him and kissed him happily on his cheeks and said, " Abe ladki ko koi kaise propose karta hai? aanke toh khuli rakhta."

Raman opened his eyes and found, she was standing in front of him, with her smiling face and said, " kabse isss din ka wait karne rahi this main, aur tumne ab jaakar bola. I love you too buddhu" she said and hugged him tightly. Raman happiness was on cloud nine today. his childhood friend will also became his companion in his future life.

she recalled how he hugged her tightly and twirled her. that was the happiest day in their life,the most blessful day, she can't forget that day. they made lots of promises on that day. they will always I've with each other, will support each other and always give priorities to their careers and after that will got married.

she wiped her tears on recalling that day. everyone was perfect in their life. Raman was studying in IIM for his business studies while ishita WS preparing for medical entrance exams. their views were cleared for their future. ishita remembered how Raman became excited opwhen she broke the news that she is selected in medical entrance exam. he was the happiest person on that day. they both,their parents everyone was happy with their children progress. happiness was around them but that day,changed everything.

it was the incident of 6 months before. the elections time was near. every political party was trying their level best to win elections. whether it was conspiracy or their destiny, the political and regional riots started in their city and started to harm peoples who was not tamilian by religion. many peoples died in that riots and the few who was live, decided to left city. Bhalla family was one of them. being one of the government officer, office provided them security and in few minutes only, her love departed from her. she recalled how his eyes was moist, while sitting in police van, they left chennai that night only with their money and with some important things.
no one know where they went, their phone no are also not connecting. she tried her level best to contact him through his school, his friends but every time only disappointment came as result

she wiped her tears and kissed Raman's photo and again clutched his photo tightly, " na jaane tum mujhse doobaara kab miloge but Raman mein tumhaare bina nahi reh sakti. 18 saalo mein aadat pad gayi hai tumhaari, bhale hi him door hai but phir bhi mein roz murgun se tumhaari safety aur humaare Milne ke liye prayer karoongi. I miss u and I love you raavan Kumar"

Roz Roz Resham Si Hawa Aate Jaate Kehti Hai Bata
Resham Si Hawa Kehti Hai Bata
Vo Jo Doodh Dhuli Masoom Kali
Vo Hai Kahan Kahan Hai
Vo Roshni Kahan Hai Vo Jaansi Kahan Hai
Main Adhoora Tu Adhoori Jee Rahein Hain

" Abe raavan Kumar, ruk ja. I am warning you. agar tu mere haath aaya na, I promise tu meri hockey stick se marga"

" oye moti bhaisa!! maarne ke liye pehle pakadna padta hai. oehle pakad ke toh bata.waise tera yeh part time kaam hai kya mujhse ladne ka? isse accha toh mein shagun ka hi proposal accept kar leta kam se kam woh mujhe bhaav toh deti"

by the time,Raman was in ishita clutches. she grabbed his coller tightly and warned him," don't you dare to look here and there. agar agli baar aisa bola na toh dekh Lena" she warned him and turned other side. Raman smiled on his cute madrasan possiveness and placed his hand on her shoulder and said, " itni jalan madrasan?? waise itna pyaar karti hai mujhse?"

there was no reply from her. her face was on other side. Raman tried to gain his attention but she avoided him. he finally turned her towards his side saw in her eyes, it was moist. Raman felt guilty on his antiques and slowly said," buddhu mein mazaak kar raha tha. you know na that I will always love you. ab toh gussa mat ho"

" Raman its not a joke. you know about our relationship na. hum 18 years mein kabhi alag nahi rahe, aur ab hum ek doosre ko pasand bhi karte haI. I can't live without you"

" hey!!! I am sorry yaar. waise madam feelings are mutual here. ab toh hass de. I promise ek baar humaari studies over ho jaae aur him settle ho jaae, phir mein appa se khud tera haath maange asunga aur woh ille aur apdiya sapdiya wali rituals ke saath tujhe apne ghar ke jaaungaa"

ishita laughed on hearing his dialogue and hugged hi! tightly. he also receprocate his hug and both again started to enjoy the cool breeze of the chennai night

Raman smiled on their fond memories of that night. it was their last meeting before 2 days of that incident. that night was peaceful for them. ishita was angrier on him because to make him jealous he talked with shagun. he recalled how his jealous madrsan made faces when she spotted them together outside the college and how much hard work he had to do to made her pacify

he sat on his bed and took out the scarf from his bag. he gently caressed her scarf and kissed it gently. he recalled how his madrasan left her scarf on his Scotty while going to her medical classes. " I missed you madrasan. kitni koshishe kar chuka hoon tumse contact karne ki par kuch nahi ho pa raha hai. samajh mein nahi aa raha ki tumhe kaise bataaun ki mein Delhi mein hoon"
her words were still ringing in his ears when she told him that she can't bear separation from him. she always wanted to live with him. " Maine hi tumse promise kiyq that na,ki mein had waqt,had lamha tumhaare saath rahoonga but dekho na, 6 mahine se humne ek doosre ki aawaaz bhi nahi suni. I miss u madrasan and I love you also"

" puttar jaldi se khana khane aa jaa. aaj tera favourite banaya hai. chetti kar" Raman wiped his tears and went towards dining room for dinner. toshiji made raajma chaaval tody which was Raman and ishita favourite. Raman smiled on seeing the menu and recalled how ishita used to come daily to eat Punjabi meal and how his mother used to feed her from her own hands.

" bhallaji agar aaj ishita hoti toh kitne maze ate na. usko raajma chaaval kitne pasand the. aapko yaad hai na"

" haan toshiji yaad hai. abhi woh yahan par hoti ba toh kab ka Raman ki plate se khana khatm bhi kar chuki hoti aur aapka yeh khotta muh phula ke kamre mein bhi jaa chuka hota"

both husband and wife laughed on remembering their children cute mischief and started to eat dinner. Raman completed his dinner and quietly moved in his room. he bolted the door and layed down on bed and hugged her scarf. she was not physically with him but their essence,her feelings were with him. he took out the photo of his farewell day in which he and ishita was standing together. Raman laughed on seeing her face,she was angried on him because he put some cake on her dress and she was not looking less then a cartoon and Raman forcefully clicked a photo with her. Raman caressed her face and kissed it. " pata nahi main tujhse kab mil paaunga but u know main roz bhagwan se pray karta hoon ki tu safe aur happy rahe. tu bhale hi mere saath nahi hai but I know tu bhi mere baare mein hi soch rahi hogi" Raman closed his eyes and sleeped with the memories of her beautiful face and smile

Tu To Nahin Hai Lekin Teri Muskurahatein Hain
Chehra Nahin Hai Par Teri Aahatein Hain
Tu Hai Kahan Kahan Hai
Tera Nishaan Kahan Hai
Mera Jahan Kahan Hai
Main Adhoora Tu Adhoori Jee Rahein Hain

hey guys,this is first part of my TS. guys lots of apologies to whom who are hurted by my story. the political and religious riots was the setup for my story which was purely fictional. my personal feelinGS was not involved in it and scroll below for next part
Edited by aarohi26 - 10 years ago
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5 years later...

Ishita lazily opened her eyes. her eyes and body were refusing to wake up but her mind was alarming her again and again to wake up. she was getting late for her hospital. she sat on bed and smiled on a photo which was kept on side table.

" good morning raavan Kumar. kaise ho tum? I know acche hi hoge. aaj mujhe ek saal ho gaya hai Delhi aake. you know amma bohot roi this but mein phir bhi aa gayi. I know agar tum wahan hote na,toh mujhe bilkul jaane nahi dete but ab jab tum hi nahi ho toh...khair chodo,baaki baatein mein raat ko karoongi,abhi main late ho rahi hoon. bye and I missed you as always!" she kissed his photo and rushed towards washroom for getting ready

5 years are passed now from that incident. ishita now completed her MBBS degree and moved Delhi in AIMS hospital for her specialisation in cardio. her amma was not allowing her to go in another city but unknowingly her heart was saying her again and again to go Delhi. she hurriedly completed her breakfast and rushed to hospital

there was raining outside. the whether was more beautiful today. she smiled on seeing the whether and took a deep breath to inhale the smell of sand. she recalled how much she and Raman used to play in rain and enjoyed the whether. " mosam ki pehli baarish. har baar pray karti hoon ki kaash mosam ki pehli baarish mein tumhaare saath bheeg sakun but...aaj bhi mein yahi pray karoongi Raman." she opened her car and drove towards hospital.

meanwhile at Delhi airport the group of 15 members was anxiously waiting for their new CEO of PSR groups of companies. nervousness was clearly visible on their faces. after sometime, the flight landed and the awited person came outside the flight.
everyone greeted him including his new PA cum friend mihir. both shared a warm hug and headed towards their car.

" welcome bhai. poorer 2 saal ke baad aap aaj India aae ho. wahan par sab kaisa that bhai?"

mihir was continuously asking about his US visit but he was busy in admiring the weather beauty. the rain was looking more beautiful and soulful today. he was unaware from her presence but his heart can feel her, a different kind of happiness he was feeling today. mihir finally shook him and asked," bhai! itna smile kyon kar rahe ho? sab kuch theek hai na?"

" haan.haan. sab theek hai. bas baarish ko dekh kar khush ho raha hoon. khair tu woh sab chod aur ask ke schedule ki details de"

mihir started to list him his appointements with various investors and Raman was nodding on hearing him. atlast mihir mentioned his meeting with the dean of AIMS hospital for the development of cardiology dept

" but mihir. hospital mein yeh sab kyon?? humari company ne yeh sab start kiya?"

" actually bhai papaji chahate hai ki hum hospital ke cardio dept mein donation de. last year biji ko jab heart attack aaya tha,uske hi baad se."

" theek hai. main chala jaaonga. waise bhi hospital aur doctors se kuch zyada hi connection hai" he smiled again on recalling his madrasan face while mihir was again confused by Raman weird behaviour.

Aayi meri subah hassti hassati
Boli aankhein tere liye sandesa hai, haan hai
Jaagi aankhon ko bhi sapna milega
Koi khushiaane ka bhi andesha hai, haan hai

" hi Dr ishita,kaise hai aap?" ishita turned her face and found, her senior doctor and head of dept Mr abhimanyu raghav was standing on gate while ishita was busy in examining the patients. she greeted him with her smiling face and both started to visit the dept. after their visit, they both were sitting in abhimanyu cabin and having coffee while discussing something.

" ishita can you please give me the list of required equipment and the list of instruments and material which need upgradation?"

" sure Sir but aap yeh list...I mean why are you asking about this?"

" actually ishita, our dept is going to reconstruct again and the big businesses man of Delhi is supporting us financially. that's why."

" OK sir. I will cheak the requirements and will inform you by evening"

ishita leaved the cabin by smiling face and started her work by new excitement and enthusiasm. each and every person was surprised by her happy mood. her soul was feeling different kind of happiness today. it was the true love. your loved ones was not with you but still your heart can feel him near you.

ishita was in her cabin and making the list of requirments. at the same time,mihika entered in cabin. she was surprised by the sudden behaviour of ishita. ishita was smiling herself and humming song


Haannn haa...
Gulaabi si subah
Haaannn haa...
Sharaabi si hawa
Bhegi si bhagi si
haan haann
Meri baazuon mein samayi
Jogi si jaagi si
Koi prem dhun woh sunaye

" kya baat hai madam,aaj bada smile kar rahi ho? koi khushkhabri ya kuch khaas hai kya aaj?"

ishita smile widened on hearing mihika voice. she welcomed her by hug and said her to sat down." nothing re,bas pata nahi aaj na mera Mann bohot khush hai. ek ajeeb so khushi mehsoos ho rahi hai."

"hmmm...bhai,yeh toh sochne wali baaat hai but I am happy ki tu khush hai. aur suna yeh lists viste kya ban rahi hai?"

" oh!!!!yeh? yeh toh Dr abhimanyu ko submit karna hai. woh aaj koi industrialist aa rahe hai, humari wing ke development ke liye"

" are haan. Maine bhi suna. bohot bada aadmi hai woh. kya naam thaa uska...Mr. bha.." mihika was about to tell her full name but suddenly the wardboy came in her cabin to inform her about emergency and she rushed out without hearing full name.

@ PSR headquarters, in Raman's cabin

mihir and Raman finally got a sigh of relief after their back to back meetings and presentation. his first day was so much busy for him. his interaction with staff and the analysis of accounts and the meetings with investors made him exhaust and tired.

" mihir...yaar tu ab kaam sambhaal ke,main toh ab ghar chala.bohot thak gaya hoon."

" oy...oye bhai. chale jaana but pehle hospital toh chalo"
Raman again made a face but he knew he was important for his biji,so without making further arguments he went towards his car and both went towards their next destination.

...

" hey, its nyc to meet you Dr. Abhimanyu. I will make sure ki kaam jald se jald shuru ho sake. I will be happy agar mein aapke kisi kaam aa sakoon."

" its so kind of you Mr bhalla. agar mujge koi help chahiye hogi so I will definetly contact you"

both finally shakes hands with wch other and greeted them goodbye. Raman WS happy that his fathers wish was in safe hands. the meeting between Raman and abhi went well. raman was highly impressed with the ideas which abhi proposed him. they were passing through corridor when he heard a girl giggle. his feet's stopped in middle and his eyes stopped at the room

it was the general ward of cardiology dept where all the patients mostly of age late 60's were sitting in a circle and a girl of early 20's was laughing with them loudly. her chirpiness and laugh brought a smile on Raman's face and again reminded him about ishita. " yeh hasi,kitni jaani pehchaani si lag rahi hai. kahi yeh meri ishi..? nahi. woh kaise ho sakti hai." he brushed his thoughts and went towards his home.

...,...

" sacchi yaar jkr, aaj toh mere dimaag ki chatni ban gayi. kitna kaam that aaj aur upar se maa. phir se apna shaadi ka jaap chaloo karke baith gayi. samajh nahi aa raha ki unse kya kahoon. roz tumhe dhoondne ki koshish karta hoon,roz subah issi umeed se uththa hoon ki shaayad aaj tumhaare baare mein kuch pata laga sakoon,but..." his eyes welled up while talking with her photo.

it was his daily ritual of night. after dinner he used to talk with her. he shared his daily routein with ishita photo every nite in the single hope that one day she herself will with him to hear him. Raman was tensed from few days because his mother was forcing him to marry with their family friend daughter, meera. they were constantly asking him did he love some girl? but how could he tell them he loves a girl but he doesn't knew anything about her existence. he kissed her photo and slept hugging it.

" so raavan kumar. kaise ho? all well na? waise mein toh theek hi hoon. don't worry about me. you know sirf aaj hi mein tumse freely baat karne paa rahi hoon kyonki kal se tumhaari doctor saahiba busy hone wali hai. actually renovation ka kaam hone wala hai na hospital mein,so we have to be more careful about patients na. you know what Raman, aaj na mujhe bohot khushi ho rahi hai, I don't know why but I am so much happy today. I always wish ki tum bhi humesha aise hi smile karte raho. love you always. gud note Raman. miss u." she kissed his photo and switched off the night lamps.

Raahein wahein bole baatein rumani
Aao baitho suno baatein kahani hai, haan hai
Taazi taazi lagey humko roozana
Teri meri baatein yun to purani hai, haan hai
Ahhh haannn
Khayalon se pale
Ahhh haaann..
Ye zindagi chale...

the reconstruction of the wing was on full swing. Raman wanted to complete this work before his biji's birthday. the 5 months of this construction period flew away. ishita was completely involved with her team and looking after the work and requirements while mihir was coordinating them from Raman's side. it was the day of enougration where Raman was invited as a chief guest if inougration function.

" Dr ishita, aap please entrance par mere sath hi rahieaga. aaj mein aapko humare cheif guest se mikwana chahata hoon. is poorer project mein aapne humari bohot help ki hai"

" but sir...I mean Dr.abhi mein toh function ki arrangements dekh rahin hoon na"

" its OK Dr. function ka charge Dr mihika handle karne lengi. aap please mere saath hi rahega"

ishita nooded sadly and indicated mihika to handle things. she never wanted to showoff about her work. she was happy with the development of wing but never wanted to show her contribution. her favourite group of small children was going to perform today and she wanted to spend her single minute with them but abhi demand irked her and with heavy heart she went towards washroom for change.

" good evening Mr. bhalla." abhimanyu welcomed Raman and mihir with a warm smile. Raman and mihir finally managed to reach on time. Raman was wearing crisp black suit with white shirt. the front two buttons of his shirt was open which making him more handsome. mihir was standing behind him. the small kids who was patients, came forwards and welcomed Raman by putting tika on his forehead and handed him rose bouquet. Raman smiled on seeing her innocence. he gently held her hand and asked her, " bacche, yeh aapko kisne sikhaaya"

" ishita aunty ne. unhone bola ki attii... bh...kya bola tha?"

" athithi devo bhava:." Raman corrected it." haan uncle yahi tha. thank you." she peaked his cheeks and ran away. Raman smiled on her cuteness. he thought about the word ishita again but seeing abhimanyu he brushed his thoughts and looked at him.

" sorry Raman. actually Maine ishita se kaha bhi that ki woh yahi rahe but pata nahi kahan chalo gayi. actually itne time se Jo bhi development aur suggestion aapko mil rahe hai woh ishita hi se rahi thi."

" its OK Dr. shaayad woh thoda busy hongi but main inn ishitaji se milna zaroor chaahonga. waise bhi ishita naam se mera kuch purana rishta hai" he said while smiling and went towards auditorium with kids and the team of doctors.

" aree...yeh saare kahan gaye?" ishita came towards entrance of the auditorium but surprised to find no one here. she searched at every point but found no one. she finally called mihika. " oye kahan ho tum sab?"

" ishu. tu kahan hai? tujhe pata hai Dr tujhpar kitna naaraaz ho rahe the. jaldi back stage aa" ishita hit her forehead and cursed herself for choosing saree for this event. she was clad in a simple white saree with the orange border. her hairs was partially clutched in a clatcher and was wearing a golden chain in her neck and big earrings in her ears. she was looking like a typical south Indian girl.
she hurriedly ran towards auditorium. the program was already started and the group of children already started their performance. she smiled on seeing her children who was dancing cutely on song "bamm bamm bole".

" oye ishu! kahan atki hui thi tu?"

" sorry miku. woh yeh saree. issi ke maare mein late ho gayi thi" she pointed towards her cotton saree. both friends were talking. their gossips was interrupt by abhimanyu,who was standing near them. his hands was folded near his chest and the angerness was visible on his face

ishita bite her tounge on seeing abhimanyu face. she understood that today she will be definetly died. " ishu...aaj toh tu gayi kaam se"
mihika spoked slowly in her ears. " I..I am sorry sir but woh...main"
" rehne do ishita. phir se koi naya banana maarne se accha tum chup chap khadi raho"

" no no sir. main iss baar koi banana nahi maar rahi balki sach keh rahi hoon. woh mujhe na..."

" tumhaare bahane mein baad mein sun loonga, ab tum chief guest se Milne ka kastt karogi ya phir se meri bezzati karwaane ka iraada hai?"

" sorry... sorry sir. chaliye chalte hai" both headed towards front row. " dekho ishita. please guest ke saamne acche se behave karna. zor zor se baat toh karna hi mat aur faltu ke jokes toh maarna hi mat. please be sophisticated there"

" yesss sirrr" she said like a 1st standard child and made a face behind abhimanyu. they finally reached at first row where Raman and mihir was sitting. ishita was standing behind abhi.

" Mr. bhalla!!!" ishita ears alearted on hearing the surname. her attention diverted towards a figure who was sitting at middle and talking animatedly with the shubhi, the small child,who was heart patient. " Mr bhalla. aapko ishita se milna tha na? yeh miliye Dr. ishita iyer se."

ramans ears alearted on hearing name ishita iyer. his mind and heart was not ready to accept was is true?? did his ishita iyer was a girl who was standing there with Dr abhi. his one mind wanted to believe and see the girl but other side his mind was refusing to see it. what happened if she will be another girl? if his dreams again got crumbled? he shut his eyes closely in the fear of rejection again.

" Mr bhalla" this time the voice was louder. he felt a hand on his shoulder. abhi again asking him to meet Dr. he stood up from his seat and now he was facing ishita. his eyes was tightly closed and his hands was forwarded towards her.

ishita condition WS not less. the man who was standing in front her was the same person for whom she waited for 5 years,with whom she used to talk at night. he was the same person for she used to pray from murgun for his well being. did it was the last day of her wait? did her prayers answered by murgun? did it was a dream? numerous questions were running in her mind. she was battling between her mind and her heart. her heart want to believe the truth but her mind was refusing again and again. she was somehow not ready to believe the truth until his hand touched her hand.

their hands touched each other and they formally shake hand after 5 years. Raman slowly opened his eyes. the view in front of him not less then a dream. his madrasan was standing in front of him,draped in a white and orange saree. she was not same madrasan who used to play with him in capries,she was not same madrasan who used to avoid long hairs. she was changes now. her luscious long black hairs were open and waving with the air. she was converted into a slim and tall girl who have every feature to attracte any man. her figure and curves were looking attractive from her saree. her big black eyes were staring him continuously,might be still trying to believe the truth.

Raman was always an attractive and smart person from his teenage age. after their realisation of love,ishita always felt a different kind of insecurity for Raman. his smart looks,friendly behavior always made her insecure for herself. she was sure in this 5 years, that he will surely look like a Greek god but today her virtual image came true. he was looking absolute ravishing in black suit and white shirt. the first opened two buttons of his shirt making him irresistible. there eyes finally met. there eyes were conveying lots of emotions through their eyes.

" hi Dr. ishita. I am Mr.Raman bhalla. nyc to meet you"

" hello Mr bhalla. I..I am ishita. pleasure to meet you" she shaked hands and excused herself and left the auditorium while Raman was staring the retreating figure. the time might be slow today or the god was in full mood to test his patience. Raman was eagerly waiting for programme to get over. he can't wait more to meet her again. his eyes were etching to see her,his hands wanted to feel her again,his arms wanted to take her in his embrace but the time!!!!shit. it was not passing today.

finally after the whole one hour,the function was over. the auditorium and premises was almost empty now. he somehow sended mihir to home. every one was complementing him for his contribution. he smiled weakly on their comment but his eyes was searching only for one person, for his ishita.

he cheaked whole section, but there was no sign of her. he was now standing in lawn of the cardio wing and was searching her like mad. it was the last expected place where he can search her. he suddenly saw a shadow behind a tree. he went towards the shadow, and there she was. her back was facing him. she was standing there,her back was lean on tree. he moved towards her. she felt a hand on her shoulder but she was not frightened of it. she was aware with the touch. she recognized this touch.

she moved towards him. her eyes were moist and after seeing him,her eyes welled up with tears. Raman can see anything but tears in his madrasan eyes? he never imagined that there meet will brought tears in there eyes. the water was brimming in their eyes but they was still not ready to leave each other face.

Meri aankhon ki siaahi, piya deti hai gawahi
Main pyaasi thi niraasi, kyun paani ki surahi
Meri aankhon ki siaahi, piya deti hai gawahi

they slowly moved towards each other. there was no requirements of words today. their eyes were enough to tell,how much they missed each other. how much they longed for each other. Raman finally broke the bridge and took her in his embracel. she also hugged him tightly and started crying loudly. he can't see tears in her eyes but today he wanted her to pour her all pain to him. her sobbed now converted into cry. he said nothing just patted her back till she became normal.

" ka...Kahn the aap Raman? how much we try...tried to contact you. aap kahan ch...chake gaye the? aap jaante ho main aapke bina itne saal kai..kaise jee"

" are..areee meri jkr. milte hi talwar nikaalogu kya?" rqman said in between his tears. he wiped her tears and joined their foreheads. "I also missed you ishita. tumhaare bina yeh 5 saal kisi sazaa se kam nahi the mere liye. Maine apna ek ek din kaise bitaaya hai sirf mein hi jaanta hoon."

they both closed their eyes. a smile was lingering on their lips and they both were just feeling the moment.

" bataao na aap kahan they Raman? aapke college friends ko aapje baare mein kuch bhi nahi pata tha"

" hum sab Delhi mein the ishita. usss raat ke baad hum log bhaag karne biji ke pass yahan par aa gaye the"

"but you can call us na. you didn't tried to call me a single time"
" I tried ishita but tum logo ka phone no nahi lag raha tha."

suddenly ishita recalled after that riots incidents,all phone lines were also burned and after that new numbers were alloted. she hit her head with her hands and told him the same reason.

" shaayad bhagwan bhi humaare pyaar ka imtihasn Lena chahate the,isliye Hume itne saal ek doosre se door rakha. hai na?"

ishita nodded in positive and said, " aur humaara pyaar jeet gaya na raman? humaara intezaar ko uska mukaam dekho mil hi gaya na... I love you Raman. I love you a lot. 5 saal aapke bina jee chuki hoon Raman but ab aur nahi jeena chahati hoon"

" main bhi madrasan. I love you too. Maine kaha tha na,his din tu doctor ban jaaegi,uss din tujhe miss se Mrs banaa loonga. see I kept my promise"

ishita laughed on his comment and hugged him tightly. the nature was also happy with this union. the cool winds were blowing in happiness of their union. the rain also started to pour down. a smile of happiness came on their lips. not the first rain of the season but she was enjoying the rain of this season in her loved ones arms.
the rain was enough to wet them. they both were shivering in each other arms. ishita came out from hug. they both were looking in each other eyes again. Raman slowly peaked her forehead. she closed her eyes in reflex. he smiled on her response and trailed a line of kisses on her cheeks,eyes,ears nose. she tightened her grip on his shoulders.

his eyes were now on her pink tempting lips. he came forwarded and claimed her soft petal lips. it was first experience for her. she slowly started to respond him. her fingures lost n his thick hairs while his hands were roaming on her back and feeling her soft skin. they finally broke their kiss and looked each other eyes. there was nothing to say. they both were completed today. he again hugged her tightly and she hide her face in his chest

Tujhe dekha to khila hoon
Tere chahat mein dulah hoon
Mile mandir mein khuda ju
Main to tujh mein yun mila hoon

Meri aankhon ki siaahi, piya deti hai gawahi
Meri aankhon ki siaahi, piya deti hai gawahi

Dhoonde na ab koyi
Aaa haann
Main khoya tu khoyi
Bheegi si bhaagi si
haan haann
Meri baazuon mein samayi
...

6 years later...

"are oye madrasan, saare kaamo mein roz kyon bhool jaati hai ki tera ek pati bhi hai. oye madrasan!!!jaldi aao na."

"kya hai raavan Kumar? kyon subah subah halla macha rahe ho?"
ishita finally came outside of bathroom,draped in a blue saree. her hairs were wet and making her blue blouse and her back wet making her more tempting. Raman heart skipped a beat on seeing his wet form. she came towards him and started to tie his tie. " yeh kya hai Raman, subah subah halla machaane lag jaate ho. aise accha lagta hai kya?"

" oye madam!! apne lectures na apne patients ko chipkaana,mujhe banaane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. sab tumhaari galti hai. jab tumhe pata hai ki main tumhe aawaaz doonga toh pehle hi aa jaaya karo. jaan boojh kar pareshaan karti ho na mujhe?"

ishita bite her lower lip and smiled in her cheeks. she resumed her work and pretend to ignore him. she completed her work and about to go when Raman held her hand and pulled her towards himself. she landed on his chest. her hands was tightly clutching his shirt while he tightened his grip on her waist. " Raman jaane do na. dekho mujhe bohot saare kaam karne hai aur gate bhi khula hai,koi aa jaega"

" are madam 6 saalo mein bahane toh naye seekh leti. cause tumhe yaad hai aaj Hume doobaara milkar 6 saal ho gaye."

ishita smiled on remembering the beautiful day. it was the life changing moment for them. two incomplete souls finally completed. the love for which they longed finally got. after their meeting,they disclosed their wishes to their families and within months they both became one.

" so madam, mujhe mera gift nahi dogi?"

" kaise gift" ishita asked with confused looks. Raman pointed towards his lips. she denied but she also knew how much her ravan Kumar is stubborn. she finally stood on her toes,he tightened his grip around her waist, their lips were inches apart,they was about to kiss but stopped hearing a voice

" eesheema,silf paa ko hi kissu dogi, luhi ko nahi" their attention drifted towards door. their 3 years daughter ruhi was standing at the entrance of room. her hands were on her hips and she was staring her parents. both Raman and ishita laughed and Raman indicated her to came. ruhi runed and jumped in Raman's arm. " nahi bacche. ishima toh papa ki tie theek kar rahi thi"

" aap dooth bol rahe ho??" both stared at their 3 years daughter presence of mind. ishita smacked his hand on Raman's shoulder. " aap log toh loohi ko pyaar hi nahi kalte na"

" nahi bacche papa and mumma both loves you" and both Raman and ishita kissed their life on each cheek. ruhi happily hugged her parents and trio shared a beautiful family hug. the beautiful smile was spread on their lips which were telling their happiness.

hufff!!!! finally ho gays. guys lots of apologize for length but kya karoon. is TS ne mujhe bohot dukhi kiya yaar. ae ajnabi ke liye toh plot tha but second part ke liye song hi nahi mil raha tha. kitna dhoondh tab jaakar bheegi si bhaagi si... mila. this TS exactly consumed my 4 days. I seriously don't know ki yeh kaissa hai buy just waiting for your reviews. I hope you guys will like it.
Edited by aarohi26 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
just posted my TS above. do read. waiting for your reviews. comments se zaroor dena yaar badi mehnat lagi hai...
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Posted: 10 years ago
People,

aarohi26 has just posted her TS above. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome story aarohi loved it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update
first love then sprestion
n again meet both become one
loved luhi also sooo sweet
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aarohi...
This is an awesome TS...
totally loved it...
What a love story...
And the ending is sooo good..
The way ruhi talked is cute...


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