SongOSthon#1 : 24 OSes | Catch up with the ones u hv missed! :) - Page 97

Originally posted by: shravsss

Do make it a TS please...😳😳

Originally posted by: .Harshita.

Yippeee...
Again I am veryyy LATE...but this time credit goes to my broadband...
Iss baar mera koi haath nahi h... 😆

Yayy...second part with song challenged by me...

This part is based on the song challenged by .Harshita.

I have added a few lines from her poetry too which u will see in red colour.
Did u just say that?? 😲 😲OMG really??...U knw wat before reading this part I was kind of upset as u dint reply to my comment...I thought u r angry with me...But above two lines brought a BIG smile on my face... 😃
"Love is just a word untill u find someone who gives it a definition... "
^^This quote is perfect for this update...
Both Ishita n Raman hav realized their feelings for each other but sumthngg is stopping them from confessing it...but koi nahi jaldi I luv u bol hi denge agar author sahiba ki kripa rahi toh... 😆 😆

Manny u have beautifully incorporated the lyrics in this update...
Ur words n the lyrics ...Superbb combination...

Then IshRa nok-jhok...Best part...
Its the Beauty of their relationship... I totally lovedd readingg Raman's one liners n Ishita's " kuch bhi"... 😳

Awww...Mihir sensed the awkwardness...he's such a sweet soul...I really like his character...
I guess he's gonna be Cupid for IshRa love story(vaise aap hamesha ulta hi karte ho... )

New morning???new beginning???...Curiosity level is high!!!...kya hone wala h??...Itni aasani se toh milne wale h nahi shayad...

To be continued...!!!...Yipeee...meri wish poori ho gayi...,Its a SS... 😃

All in Alll Superbbb job... 👏

Loving someone and having them love u back is the most precious thing...

Hwzz jiju Manny???...Jiju ko padhati ho ye love stories??? 😉

Originally posted by: maanvir

Hi hersheys...sorry fr nt rplyng fr the previous cmnt...m vry busy dese days...

I am glad u lykd it...do u knw mera update delete hogaya tha?

It ws so disheartening...

Jiju ko nahi pata ke mai stories likhti hun...agar patha chala na to meri khair nahi...

Mai official kaam ka bahana karke updates likhti hun😛

Waise ek baat batao tum sab jiju k peeche kyun pade ho?😡

Hiii!! Friends.. You all would be thinking what am I doing here as its the turn of AMBREEN to post her OS... So I should tell you all, I am here to post the OS on behalf of my dearest friend.. Actually I am posting all the Ishra stories written by her by her name in IF... As she doesn't uses IF...

This is the first time she is writing an OS based on the songs.. Hope you all will like it and you all will give your valuable comments..

Now coming to the OS.. The OS is..I Am Sorry

The songs used here in the OS are...Sab Kuch Bhula Diya (from the movie Hum Tumhare Hain Sanam) and Hum Marr Jayenge (from the movie Aashiqui 2)

I AM SORRY

It starts from the time shagun and aadi stayed with the bhallas ...and shagun was trying to create misunderstandings between them...!

Shagun instigated aadi against Ishita...aadi was being really rude!...his only aim was to make Ishita know that Shagun is Raman's wife...he wanted to get rid of her...and on the other hand Ishra were fighting on daily basis!...so naturally Ishita was most of the time angry in a terrible mood!!...she hated shagun ...and aadi was like a thorn in the rose!!...even Ishita couldn't tolerate him!!...but obviously she couldn't show...

Aadi- Ishita aunty...shagun muma puch rahi thi ki papa kab aayenge?...(Ishita aunty shagun muma was asking when dad will come?)

Ishu- thode der mein aa jayenge!!...kyon?...( he will be here soon...why?)

Aadi- kyon ki shagun muma aur unhe puja mein baithna haina!...( because shagun muma and dad should sit in the puja)

Ishu- puja mein ...mein aur Raman baithegen!...shagun aur Raman nahi!- (me and Raman will sit in the puja...not shagun and Raman)

Aadi- aap kyon?...(why u?)

Ishu- kyonki mein Raman ki wife hoon!-( because i am Raman's wife)

Aadi- aise kaise?...,nahi bilkul nahi!,.,..this is not right!!...,.puja husband wife ke liye hai!...aur shagun muma hi papa ki wife hai!...aap itne bure ho!!,...( what do u mean?...no ways...this is not right ...it is for husband and wife ...and shagun muma is dad's wife...u r really bad)

Ishu- aadi!!!...shagun aur Raman ka divorce ho chuka hai!...abh un dono ka koi rishta nahi!!...( aadi...they are divorced...they don't have any relation)

Aadi- yeh mera aur shagun muma ka ghar hai! ...(this is mine and shagun muma's house)

Ishu- aadi yeh aapka ghar hai!,,...lekin shagun muma ka nahi!!...( aadi this is your house but not shagun's)

Aadi- aapne hi mama papa ko dur kiya!!...yeh aapka ghar nahi hai!!( you are the one who made my shagun muma far from dad...this is not your house)

Ishu- aadi!...yeh ghar mere pati ka ghar hai ...aur shagun muma yahan ki mehmaan hai!!...yaad rakho!...( aadi this house is my husband's house...and shagun is guest ...remember that)

Aadi- mein dekh loonga ki aap kaise puja mein baithingi!...aap jo kar rahi hai woh bilkul galat hai!!...( i will see how you sit in the puja...what you are doing is absolutely wrong)

Ishu- mein galat kar rahi hoon?...meine sirf ek galti ki hai aaj tak!...woh yeh hai ki tumhe aur shagun ko uss kachre ke dabbe se utha kar le aayi!...tumhe aur shagun ko wahin chod dena chahiye tha!...u both belong there!...meine tumhaare upar chat daala!!,...agar tumhe yeh baat maane mein koi problem hai toh tum iss ghar chod ko jaa sakte ho!!...tumne toh Raman ko papa bulaana tak chod diya tha!...toh kis haq se yahan ho??...( i am wrong??...i did only one mistake so far...that is i took you and your shagun muma out of the dumpster and put in my house...i should have left you both there...you belong there...i have put a roof over your head...if you have any problem in understanding the situation...then you can get out...you even stopped calling Raman your dad...then with what right are you here)

The convo was going in the hall!!...only bhallas were there but not Raman!...he suddenly walked in...he hadn't heard the convo...he only heard what Ishita told in the end...he just slapped her!!!!...Raman was seen only when he slapped her...no one had seen him when he came in!,...he didn't know what was going on...after seconds he noticed that he had raised his hands on his beloved wife...he suddenly realised what he did was wrong...the whole house was silent after the slap...Ishita's eyes were full of tears...and his face full of regret!!...he lifts his hands to keep it on her shoulders and to apologise but she moves back!!...she suddenly starts taking steps back...

Raman- Ishita...I Am Sorry!...mein tum pe haath nahi uthane waala tha...woh galti se...i am sorry...Ishita listen to me...( Ishita ...i am sorry...i shouldn't have raised my hand...it was a mistake...i am sorry...please listen to me)

Ishita couldn't hear anything over his slap...she was feeling lost...the person who she talked as her soul was the one who stabbed her...she started walking back...she left the bhalla house...everyone saw this...except amma and appa...Ishita went to Iyer's house and locked herself in a room,,,...she cried as she never did before...it was brutal...amma appa were banging the door... Raman came and even he started knocking the door...amma started crying she got scared...appa calmed her down...Raman knew that nothing would make Ishita open the door,,,..and he couldn't tell amma what he did...how will he...he is like a son...Raman's eyes were tearing he went back home...he went to his room,...sat down on the bed and cursed his life...he cursed for slapping the goddess of the house...the angel!!...the soul!!!...he took a photo of ishita and started apologising,,,,,,he cried bad...

Even Ishita on the other hand couldn't believe that he was the one who slapped her...what was he thinking?...was there no space for her becuase of his son!...is he more important than she is??...does he value him(aadi) than her ...have the feelings disappeared...Ishita couldn't tolerate it...,,she tried to pull herself...but she was totally broken...everything she ever did was for Raman ...and when he didn't appreciate it...it was all for nothing,...just because of aadi he favoured shagun...

Ishu(her state of mind)- hamesha aapki khushi ko aage rakha!!...aur aaj aapne mujhe thappad...kaise Raman??...aise kaise?...mein itni buri kabse ho gayi??"""...aapne wada kiya tha ki khabhi mera saath nahi chodoge...lekin aaj aapne dikha diya...mein aapka pyaar nahi hoon!""""u don't love me!!...mein aapki second wife hoon!!""""...aur aaj bhi mujhe aise he dekhte hai!!,...( i always kept your happiness ahead of mine...and today you slapped me?...how Raman?...how??...when did i become that bad??...you promised you won't leave my side,...but you showed that ...i am not your love...you don't love me...i am your second wife...and even till today you see me like that)

Ham ne tum ne hamaara rishtaa joda gam se(You and I cemented our relationship with grief)

Ek waffake sivaa kaunsi khataa hui thi ham se(Apart from faithfulness,what mistake did I make?)

Kabhi bandhan juda liyaa kabhi daaman chuda liya(Sometimes the bond strengthened,sometimes our unraveled)

O saathi re(O beloved,)

Raman on the other side...with tears near his window!!- kya kar diya Raman tune aaj?...uss pe haath uthane ki jurrat kaise ki?,..,kya soch raha tha?...agar tujhe jeene ki wajah mili toh uski wajah se!!...itna kiya usne...aur tune...meine apni zindagi khud bigad di!!...(What did you today Raman??...you raised your hand on her??...what the hell were you thinking...if you have reason to live then she is the reason...she did so much for you!!...and you??...i destroyed my life with my own hands!!!)

Raman was cursing himself for his uncontrollable anger...shagun was happy...but Ishra were broken...Ishita went near her bed...she saw a pic of her wedding...

kaisa sila diya yeh vafaa ka kaisa sila diyaa (what sort of repaymeint did I get for my faithfulness? what sort of gift did you give in return?)

tere vaade vo iraade(Your promises, (all) those intentions)

o saathi re(O beloved,)

sab kuchh bhuula diya yeh vafaa kaisa silaa diya (they were all forgotten; (so) what sort of gift did you give in return for myfidelity?)

meri yaadon mein tum ho meri saanson mein tum ho(You are in my memory, you're in my very breath)

magar tum jaane kaisi galatfahami mein ghuum ho (but who knows why you're lost in misunderstanding)

tumhaare ghar ko mandir devta tumko banaa liyaa (I made a temple of your house, and I made you my god;)

devta tumko banaa liya (I made you my god)

Raman- kaise maaf karegi mujhe,...,itna saara dukh diya hai meine!...mere selfishness ke karaan woh itna sab jhelti rahi!!,,...mujhe aadi pasand hai iss liye usne apne sautan ko tak jagah di apne ghar mein!!...meri beti...mera beta...sab kuch...meri khushi ke liye jee rahi thi!!,,...usne apni ek kami ke liya sab kuch chod diya!!...(How will she forgive me?...i have troubled her so much!...because of my selfishness she suffered...i love aadi and cause of that she bought my ex-wife to this house...my daughter...my son...my everything...she was living for my happiness...because of her one weakness)

Ishu- meri ek kamzori ne sab kuch cheen liya!!...pehle mera pyaar...abh mera dusra pyaar...just because mein maa nahi ban sakti!...( she throws all the things near her)...aur aaj jis insan ke liye mein kuch bhi karne ke liye tayyar hoon...uss insan ne mera saath chod diya!( my weakness took everything away from me...my first love...now my second love...just because i can't conceive ...( she throws all the things near her)...and today...the one person who i valued most has left my side.)

umar bhar so na sakenge kisi ke ho na sakenge (I'll never be able to sleep again, never be able to fall in love with someone else)

ajnabi to ho jaa'o gair ham ho na sakege (Go ahead and become a stranger; (but) I cannot become one to you)

kisi begaane ki khaatir tum ne apnon ko bhuula diyaa (For the sake of some stranger you forgot me)

tum ne apnon ko bhuula diyaa haan tum ne apnon ko bhuula diyaa(You forgot me; yes, you forgot all about me)

Next day she woke up ...she went near the cup board and took out some papers...she saw it...- aap yehi chahte the na??...,,mein aapko yehi dungi!!...( you wanted this right?...i will give you this only!)...

She was looking horrible...her make up was ruined...her hair was not straight,,,,,both hadn't slept ...she took the papers and went to his house...everyone was surprised to see her... Mrs bhalla was glad that Ishita had returned...

Mrs bhalla- tu aa gayi putr?...rab ka lakh lakh shukr!!( you came dear...thank god!)

Ishu- mujhe Raman se baat karna hai!...( i want to talk to Raman)

Mrs bhalla- haan toh jaana apne kamre mein,.,.wahin hai woh!...(yes so go to your room ...he is there upstairs)

Ishu- nahi .,,.woh mera kamra nahi hai!!...mera aur iss ghar ka koi rishta nahi hai!...aap Raman ko neeche bulaiye!!...(no that's not my room...i don't have any relation with this house...please call Raman down)

Mrs bhalla- aise kyon keh rahi hai putr tera hi toh...(why are you saying like this dear?...this is your...)

Ishu- please neeche bulayie!"...( please call him down)

Mrs bhalla- teekh hai!...Raman !!(okay!! she calls him and he comes down) half way down the stairs he stops and looks at Ishita ..he is so happy she came...she was looking the worst)...

Raman- Ishita...tum aa gayi( comes to her)...?...( you came???)

Ishu- Raman,,,,yeh woh papers hain jo aapne pehle banwaye the!...hamare divorce papers...jab aap mujhe chod kar Singapore jane waale the!!...,.lekin meine aapko rok liya tha!!...abh mein nahi rokungi!!...( Raman these are those papers that you have filled earlier...our divorce papers...when you were gonna leave me for Singapore...but i stopped you...i am not stopping you now!)

Raman- matlab??...( what do you mean?)

Ishu- matlab yeh ki...aapne toh sign kar diya tha!...aur abh in papers mein mere bhi sign hai!!...abh iss divorce mein meri bhi marzi hai,,.,.yeh lijiye!!...( she puts the papers in his hands(Meaning...you had signed them before...now these papers contain even my signature...even i have my will in this divorce...here you go...( she gives the papers in his hands)

He was shocked to his very nerve ...drops the papers...he doesn't say anything ...he instantly sits down...he couldn't believe it...she had signed the papers...the divorce papers she didn't throw out!!.,...,,.she had them...and it was signed by him before he left for the airport when he was running away,...she was breaking the relationship...

Ishu continued- Ruhi ka custody mere paas hai...mein lawyer se keh kar aapke naam kar dungi!!...(i have Ruhi's custody ...i will talk to lawyer and give it back to your name)

Everyone was too shocked...Raman was numb...he had no idea...Mrs bhalla was weeping...

Mrs bhalla- aisa na kar putr!!...mein tere aage haath jodti hoon!!!...teri wajah se hi mujhe Ruhi mili...uski maa hai tu!...usko phir se maa se alag mat kar...Raman ko tum hi sambhal sakti ho!...apna ghar gusse mein mat ujaad!!...( don't do this...i beg you...i got Ruhi because of you...please don't take the mother's love away from her...only you can handle Raman...don't destroy your house with anger)

Ishu- gusse mn meine nahi...Raman ne yeh kiya hai!...mein unki layak nahi hoon...aur yeh baat unhone prove kar di!!...(i didn't do it in anger,,...,Raman did!!,...i am not worth him...and he has proved this...)

Mrs bhalla- kuch bol Raman...isse jaane mat de!!...Raman kuch bolta kyon nahi!!...(say something Raman...why don,t you say anything??)

Raman stands up- chalo mere saath!!...( come with me)

Ishita stands there...her eyes on floor...she can,t look at anyone...Raman drags her into his(their) room!

Ishu- chodo ...jaane do!...( leave me!!)...

Raman- ishita meri baat suno!!...,,,look meine bahut badi galti ki hai...is ke liye zindagi bhar maafi maangne ke liye tayyar hoon...lekin this is not right!...( ishita listen to me...look i did a big mistake...i can say sorry my entire life for this...but this is not right!!)...

Ishu- right or wrong ke baare mn nahi baat karo!!...aur you know what...mein iss halat mn nahi hoon ki mein aapse behes karoon!...meri zindagi mazak ban chuki hai!!...,,aur nahi sehen karungi!,..,.( please don't talk about wrong and right!!...and i am not in a condition to argue with you.right now...my life has become a joke...i can't tolerate anymore)

Raman- ishta look you are angry that's why tum yeh kar rahi ho!"""...warna tum mujhe divorce nahi deti!Yaad hai last time tumne mujhe airport mn bhaga- bhaga kar maara tha!!! toh tum?...(you are saying this because you are angry...other wise u wouldn't divorce me!!...remember last time you chased me in airport and trashed me!! so you??)...

Ishu- uss waqt alag tha...uss waqt aap the mere saath...( it was different then...you were with me!!)

Raman- main bhi bhi hoon!"...( i am there even now!!)

Ishu- nahi ho aap!""...aur mein jaanti hoon kyon...kyonki main woh khushi nahi de sakti jo shagun de sakti hai!!...( no ...you are not...and i know why...because i can't give the happiness which shagun can!!)

Raman- baat yeh nahi hai!...( this is not the case)

Ishu- Raman ...meine aapko dokha nahi diya...aapko pata tha ki mein maa nahi ban sakti...i didn't betray you!...( Raman...i didn't betray you...you knew that i can't have kids ...)

Raman- meine thodi na kaha ki...( i didn't saythis...)

Ishu- mujhe laga ki mein maa nahi ban sakti iss baat ka koi farak nahi padta aap pe!...lekin main galat thi...( i thought that i can't be a mom and this matter didn't bother you...but i was wrong)

Raman- nahi padta!...(it doesn't matter)

Ishu- mein aese nahi reh sakti!...i don't want to live with you...aapko apne bache pyare hai toh aap unke saath rahiye!...( i can't live with you and i don't want to live like this...your children are more dearly so you live with them)

Raman- ishita you are important for me...i can't live ...

Ishu- aisa kuch nahi hai Raman!!...meine apne pehle pyaar ko bhula diya!"...aap bhula nahi paaye!!...aap ko abhi bhi shagun important lagti hai!...meine subbu ko bhula diya,...aapko bhi bhula dungi...pyaar mein pehle hi dokha kha chuki hoon...yeh koi nayi baat nahi hai!!...you are lucky aapko apna pehle pyaar ke saath dusra mauka mila hai!!!...you should be happy...,..(That is rubbish...i forgot my first love ...you were not able to forget...even now shagun is important to u...i forgot subbu...now i will forget u also...i have already faced decisiveness ...its not new to me...you are lucky you got your first love...you should be happy!!)

Raman- ishita please understand...

Ishu- nahi Raman...mein kisi ki bhi nafrat bardaash kar sakti hoon...lekin aapki nahi!!...,aapki nafrat nahi sehen kar sakti!!...aur aapse shadi karke thode der ke liye acha tha!...lekin abh nahi ...nahi hota mujhse ...(no Raman!!...i can tolerate anyones hating me...but not yours...it was fun for a while...but its enough...i can't take more...)

Raman- tum aise nahi kar sakti!...you are my wife!!...you are my life!...( you can't do this...you are my life...my wife!!!)

Ishita smirked in a sad depressed way- aap ji loge!!...i don't need you or anyone...if people don't like me then let it be...i don't care...mein padhi likhi dentist hoon...acha khasa kama leti hoon!...i can manage!!...( you will move on...i don't need you or anyone...if people don't like me let it be...i am an educated person...i am a dentist...i earn well...i can manage...)

Raman- ishita listen to me...

Ishu- meri ruhi ka dhyan rakna!!...( take care of my ruhi)

She was totally broken...she couldn't listen to him...his actions talked more than his words...he knew that at that moment he can't persuade her...he had made her into bits and pieces...

Ishita ran down stairs...she was about to leave...when some one caught her hand...she turned to see Ruhi...she can't face her...she was deceiving her...she saw her innocent eyes...She then removed her hand...she went to her house and directly when to her room and locked it from inside...

tere vaade vo iraade(Your promises, (all) those intentions)

o mitwaa re (O my lover,)

sab kuchh bhuula diya yeh vafaa kaisa silaa diya (they were all forgotten; (so) what sort of gift did you give in return for myfidelity?)

ab mujhe jina nahin sanam yeh zahar pinaa nahin sanam (I can't live now, darling; I can't drink this poison, my love)

janam janam ka naata chaand lamhon mein mita diya(In just a few moments, a connection of many lifetimes was erased)

chaand lamhon mein mita diya (It was erased it in moment)

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Sorry for the errors... I have tried to proof read Ambreen's update.. Still there might be many errors...

Hope you all will like... Do give your valuable comments...

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P.S. ... This OS will be in the continuation in the next post on the same page... but I will post it by 16th night...

Pallavi dii...my apologies to you... I am unable to post the whole OS in the given time period..Hope you will understand.. sorry dii...

Thanks,

TamannaSethi

{Ambreen's Story}