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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Aarohi!😃

Read your Story and fell in love with the love-story😳😃

The ending took the cake for me😃

Keep writing!😎
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Posted: 10 years ago
aarohi!!!!!
superb ts man in love with it...
so cute firsdt the separation ( i felt like crying)
then their meeting aweee so cute
luhiii che is cho cute
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Posted: 10 years ago
Though it will not be that good , but won't b too bad either.So u can give ur precious little time... n dont worry, it will be edible.😊😊😊

Both critisism and appresiation will be whole-heartedly welcomed...

Ishra OS : Neighbors to soul mates

And there she was... Raman thought. After their week long voyage, he couldn't wait to see her. It's been a month they have met, rather started fighting. She was one of the firmest, toughest cookie he had ever seen. But yesterday night was different, after the banter her ex-fiancs mother created and the truth of her infertility got exposed, he had seen her crying, profusely. Was it her inability to conceive or her inability to be accepted that made her cry? Was she on the same verge as his? He pondered.

Mere saamnewaali khidki mein
Ek chaand ka tukda rehta hai
Mere saamnewaali khidki mein
Ek chaand ka tukda rehta hai
Afsos yeh hai ke voh humse
Kuch ukhda ukhda rehta hai
Mere saamnewaali khidki mein
Ek chaand ka tukda rehta hai

But the biggest question was, why the hell he the most eligible bachelor, CEO of a global company and heartthrob of all the women was peeping through the door of his neighbor?

Sure, he was a divorcee and father the of two children but his status as India's top business tycoon and his physical attractiveness was enough for him to bed any women of his choice...Still he was peeing through to have one glance of a typical Indian girl...sorry Dentist who awaited to get married with a looser of her parent's choice. And of course she was rejected by her lover and another guy due to her infertility.

Well, he didn't care. He just wanted to have a glance of her while drying her beautiful waist length hair, her humming cute incomprehensible yet majestic Tamil songs, her eyes that would meet his and he will retreat himself in the Sunday Supplement of the newspaper.

"Mr. Bhalla, though you may have the money to buy this entire building, this flat belongs to my appa and is not for sale, so you cannot come in here without permission" Raman heard her musical voice.

Shit! he thought. He had just stayed mesmerized by her simple yet enchanting beauty for a nano-second extra and she had started her bombardment.

"Well, Ms. dentist, I just came here to pick the Business special from your newspaper which is quite usual in Sundays" Raman said, in his trademark voice, fully aware of the name of the lady he used to stare.

Jis roz se dekha hai usko
Hum shamma jalaana bhool gaye
Jis roz se dekha hai usko
Hum shamma jalaana bhool gaye
Dil thaamke aise baithe hain
Kahin aana jaana bhool gaye

"Ishita, my name is Dr. Ishita Vishwanathan Iyer, incase your memory is too sharp to remember the name you lodged complaint against" Raman heard her retort back.

Well, she hasn't forgiven him for getting her family arrested in charge of kidnapping Ruhi, he thought.

"Well, I'm sorry Ishita for that day, I know what I did is not forgivable but if possible please forgive me, at least for Ruhi's sake" Raman said and he was gone, without giving her a second glance.

Ishita stood at her place, flabbergasted. Did the man just formally apologized to me? Apologize? She had once read in one of the magazines that Raman Bhalla was a man of pride and ego who never even felt the need to say a simple "sorry" and here she stood, having taken out a complete apology from him.

Did he feel something for me? In the deepest corner of Ishita's mind flashed this thought. But she immediately scolded herself for even the thought, no it cannot be, he is so much out of her league. He lives his day with the sexiest models and gorgeous ladies all around, everyone trying to woo him and he never gives them a damn. So it was completely out of question for him to have something for her.

Well it was no secret that she had something for him from the first day she saw him, and why not? He was a complete perfection - there's some reason that she visited his website.But the arrogance and rudeness of the man always made her hate him.

What happened to him? Raman thought. He tried but this time really his sharp brain couldn't remember the last time he apologized to someone and that too to a women, he species he hated the most. Yes, he was falling for her- he concluded.

"Ms. Iyer, this dress is for you" a delivery boy handed Ishita a dress clad in expensive fabric.

"Wow akka, this dress looks so beautiful...and costly, you ordered this?" Mihika asked Ishita who gave a confused, no.

"Mr. Raman Bhalla has sent this and it costs 56 grads, pure diamond work madam" the delivery boy informed the two confused sisters.

"Akka...say something" Mihika asked Ishita who was in the world of her own, long after the delivery boy had left.

"I wanna be alone" Ishita said and ran into her room.

Ab aath paher in aankhon mein
Voh chanchal mukhda rehta hai
Mere saamnewaali khidki mein
Ek chaand ka tukda rehta hai
Mere saamnewaali khidki mein
Ek chaand ka tukda rehta hai

As she opened the sooth fabric, a note came down

"You have to were this in the new year party day after tomorrow...for Ruhi's sake"

Read the note. Ishita's temper reached the highest. Cheeks and nose read with anger mixed with embarrassment and shyness, she picked up her phone- the guts of this man, he didn't think twice to give her a typical western dress, and he expects her to were it! How dare he, she had to give him a good piece of her mind.

"What's with you? I'm in an impo*nent meeting, can't you call later?" he shouted. After the third attempt finally Mr. CEO had bothered to receive her call and before she could even start be proceedings, he banged in.

"I...I needed to talk to you" she fumbled to catch words.

"Come to the shoplex cafe at 7 P:M in the evening" he said and cut the call.

Did he just asked me for a date? Ishita wondered. No she had to teach him a good lesson.

Did she always looked this much beautiful or it's the blue leggings or the purple anarkali that made her look so ravishing? Raman thought. He had booked the entire cafe for the two of them, he didn't know why but he wanted to spend time with her.

As they settled down, the two involved in their own world where their was no pain, no rage, no expectations and no regrets...All Ishita's plan to teach him a good lesson went down the drain as she spoke freely for the first time with him.

Barsaat bhi aakar chali gayi
Baadal bhi garajkar baras gaye
Barsaat bhi aakar chali gayi
Baadal bhi garajkar baras gaye
Par uski ek jhalak ko hum
Ae husn ke maalik taras gaye
Kab pyaas bujhegi aankhon ki

Three weeks later:

"So, same time tomorrow" Raman asked Ishita sitting next to her in his silver Mercedes.

"Wha..." Ishita opened her mouth and reasiled they had reached their Akash Gnaga Society. Well, time spent with him passed like cool, soft breeze that assures you everything is gonna be fine. On the contrary of her thought that it was impossible to spent time with Raman, she enjoyed his company to the core, after so many years, she felt content.

"Well ... Yes" Ishita replied to Raman's earlier question as the two came to the front of their flats, where their houses separate...or their lives separate.

"Ok then good night" he said as some girls came down from the stairs and ogling at him for more than necessary time, giggled between themselves and went down.

Ishita's intestines burned in jealousy, she realized it must be the girls from upper flats but the fact that they had dared to shamelessly ogle at him made her insides burn.

"You ok?" Raman asked with a smirk, fully aware of Ishita's condition.

"What do you think of yourself?" Ishita asked with rage filling her voice.

"The girls stared, I didn't" Raman replied, trying to handle the situation.

"And you must be proud of yourself right" she asked.

"I..." before he could even reply, she held his collar.

"You...you are so bad, what was the need to spend time with me? Why did you make me see dreams again while all you wanted to play with me...why does it always have to happen with me? Why..." She said holding his collar.

Din raat yeh dukhda rehta hai
Mere saamnewaali khidki mein
Ek chaand ka tukda rehta hai
Afsos yeh hai ke voh humse
Kuch ukhda ukhda rehta hai
Mere saamnewaali khidki mein
Ek chaand ka tukda rehta hai

"Because...I like you" Raman replied after thinking hard.

"Liar" Ishita said.

"Don't you dare..." And he did it, holding her hands with his tightly, resisting all her resistance, he kissed her full on her luscious lips. He smooched both her lips while she moaned in pleasure. Then suddenly Raman stopped, realizing the gravity of what he has done, Raman backed himself of.. Ishita opened her eyes to see Raman standing far. It was her first kiss, she was full of love and emotions dedicated just for him and he just hung her there in the middle! A sadiest he is...but I love him sadistically- Isihita thought.

"I...I'm sorry." Raman said.

Sorry- she let the words sank deep in her mind. Yes, there it was her love feeling sorry for giving her the most cherished moment of her life. Why, why is life so unfair to her?

"Ishita listen" Raman said as Ishita walked towards him. Well, she is all ready to slap, he thought.

"Ishita I'm sorr..." words trailed of his mouth as Ishita brought his head close to hers.

"Stup up" she said and captured his lips with hers to shut him up forever.

Next day morning:

Ishita woke up in her room and found herself entwined with her man, her Raman- she thought. Yes, finally she had the one whom she could say hers. Her amma-appa had gone to attend a wedding in Chennai so she was alone in her house which gave way to their all night rendezvous.

She looked at their entwined state and blushed the deepest and purest shed of red. She remembered how Raman had carried her in her room, how he had possessively encircled her waist, how they had kissed each other hungrily savoring their souls, how Raman had slowly switched of the lights, how their loud moans filled the room and finally how they had slow yet the most passionate love making, how she felt when Raman entered inside her...when she lost her priceless virginity...to him, to her Raman.

But alas, they only had a f**k relationship, he never said that he even feels an iota of what she feels for him...For him she is just another women to spend night with.

That bought fresh tears in her eyes.

He became off-guard as he saw the tears on her beautiful cheeks. It's been a while he was awake, watching the changing emotions on her face. Any morning has never been so beautiful for him, he was wondering how beautiful she looked inside-out, draped with nothing and entwined with him. He felt so lucky to have a fairy like her in his life, yes she definitely was an angel.

"Hey...why this tears" He asked her.

"Am I the nth one or you have a count on how many women you f**k" she asked, smiling through her tears. Somehow, Raman found the smile sarcastic.

He without saying anything, just came upto her face and kissed the tears of her.

"Ishita I..." Raman said as he took her hands in his "After Shagun you are the only one in my life, I've never ever felt so much in love with anyone around..."

Ishita's eyes became moist at his words.

"Miss Ishita Iyer, I Raman Bhalla love you more than I can ever imagine, will you be with this moron for the rest of your life, will you like to wake up in my arms for the days to come, will you marry me?" Raman ended, to be cocooned in the arms of his Ishita, yes his Ishita.

"I love you too Raman, I love you...I always, for seven births wants to be with you" Ishita said, hugging him with all her might as if someone will take him away, tears falling freely of her as she let go off all the self control.

Mere saamnewaali khidki mein
Ek chaand ka tukda rehta hai
Afsos yeh hai ke voh humse
Kuch ukhda ukhda rehta hai


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Edited by RS472 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
People say my updates r small so this one is bigger... ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Our bday girl Anjali (RS472) has just updated her OS above. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Happy b'day Anjali
You have written a fantastic one shot.👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Happy brday Anjali.. May god bless u..nd coming back 2 update it was wonderful..
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Posted: 10 years ago
@RS472
Hey bday girl.
many many happy returns of the day.
the os was lovely.
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Posted: 10 years ago
omg its amazing anjali...
happy birthday
you have written an amazing story
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Posted: 10 years ago
People,

We will move to thread # 2 for the Song-OSthon tomorrow onwards.

We will also have 2 surprise inaugural OSes for the thread no. 2 tomorrow 😃

Link to thread no 2: The Song-OSthon Thread #2
Edited by peace.. - 10 years ago

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