FF: DESIRE II Part 15A-Part21E - Page 54

Originally posted by: fugitives123

Good one Vee...u write so well!!

thank god mihika was preoccupied with her own woes...else she wud have troubled ishu with her questions...

why is this abhi returning yaar? can't he stay there only 😆

I like what you are making ass-oak do on the case front...clearly shagun is interested in noone but herself. I could strangle her with those leopard print sarees. she and ass-oak deserve each other.

I loved puttar biwi conversation...loved how she hugged and comforted him saying they will always be each other's strength.

waiting for the next update(a longer one pls)!!!

Originally posted by: nrn1486

Brilliant updates😊

Loved how you've handled the custody case so sensibly! And of course, the IshRa moments are to die for😳

Originally posted by: .TIA.

Loved d update Vee.

Ishus fear n concern for puttar 😳

His fear of loosing Ruhi 😳

Superb. I really really want the cvs to read ur ff 😛

Next one sooon 😉

🤗

Originally posted by: shalz_123

Trying to outdo others...😆🤗

loved it completely...

Originally posted by: Veeann

Thanks Ann. Kya longer one yaar 😆 😆 😆

Originally posted by: beckysharp

That was a stupendous update Vee ! so emotional ! My heart went out to Raman ... I really wish the YHM writers would take creative advice from you !

So so so tremendously beautiful !

Originally posted by: rk654

brilliant update...loved it 👏

raman was so hurt...worried about ruhi

wat's cookin in ashok's dirty mind???😕

cont. soon

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

brilliant update..very emotional...well written..continue soon..👍🏼