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Posted: 10 years ago
I've come across this FF recently and became a fan of your writings. As I'm an invisible reader in IF I've read almost entire of your writings...proves me invincible. Desire is such a desirable story that keeps me glued to it just to see if you've updated or not. Hope you'll update soon jaan. šŸ˜›
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Beautiful beautiful updates..
Awesome and brilliant...
Brilliant writing...šŸ‘šŸ‘
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Originally posted by: sudharminy

I've come across this FF recently and became a fan of your writings. As I'm an invisible reader in IF I've read almost entire of your writings...proves me invincible. Desire is such a desirable story that keeps me glued to it just to see if you've updated or not. Hope you'll update soon jaan. šŸ˜›



Thank you so much for your comments. Do comment more - dont be invisible 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shadeslayer

Absolutely brilliant Vee!!! Waiting for the next one...Shagun and her saris are #meh... Stooopid lady.

Heart breaks for RKB here but puttar and biwi are

Again u are just awesome!!!šŸ¤—



Thank you Su. I actually like some of Shaguns saris but not the leopard print one. That one is too much in sync with her character šŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: avni_19

Sorryy Vee Di for the delay reply! I was in India to attend my cousin brother's marriage! and I couldnot catch with updates, episodes too!

well back to the update! Chpt 18 a,b,and c! too brilliant! the way u explained everything was soo apt! Raman's fears, Ishita's worries and then instantly becoming each other's strength and then Shaggy assoak..as usual! blahhh!!

Loved ishu-ruhi convos! too heart warming! loved it!

Cont soon! <3 :D



Thanks Avni. I wondered where you had gotten to !!! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
Curious to know what Ass would do here, since you make him smarter than the show...though I have a faint hunch, if my instincts are correct what his move could be but will wait for your next update to see how far along right I am or if I completely missed the mark.
As always a lovely update Vee.
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Hey 😃
I strtd reading ur story a little late😳
But am loving it so much 😃 It's kind of addictive šŸ˜†
U write really well šŸ‘ What is Ashok going to do 😲

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Part 18D
Itti Si Hansi

Friday 11 September 2014
6.00am
Iyer Residence

Ishita woke up early on Friday morning.

The anxiety which festered deep within her had led to a restless night. She knew Raman would be in the same boat. After seeing Shagun on Wednesday, seeing the way Ruhi had reacted to her, Ishita wholeheartedly shared Raman's conviction that Ruhi needed to be kept as far away from Shagun as possible.

Thursday had passed by in a blur.

Raman had been busy with the Malhotra project, and they had reassured each other by phone but had not been able to meet.

Ishita had been to Ruhi's school at lunch time and had spoken to her teacher, but Mrs Khan had reassured her that Ruhi was fine and not disturbed.

At least that had been a relief, and yet, the anxiety remained, lingered.

What would the court decide today? Would the Judge order a hearing? Or would she ask them to settle the case, based on the case workers report?

"Please Murugan" she whispered, running a nervous hand over her hair as she stepped out of bed. "Please let everything be okay today."

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9.00 am
Bhalla Residence

Raman stood in front of the little mandir in his home, his head bowed. He did not pray often, in fact, since Shagun had left him, he had rarely prayed at all. God had stopped answering his prayers a long time ago, but since Ishita had come into his life, a little spark of belief, of faith, had reawakened.

He opened his eyes to see his parents standing close by, looking at him with concern.

"Raman, puttar, hum bhi chalte hai na court" {Raman, son, we will come to court with you too}

His mothers voice was laced with the anxiety he could see in his fathers eyes.

"Ma, aaj hearing nahi hai. Yeh sirf judge ke saamne pehli case conference hai, settlement explore karne ke liye. Agar...agar hearing hui, toh aap sab zaroor aayenge, lekin abhi sirf Ruhi ki parents se court milna chahti hai" {Ma, the hearing isn't on today. It's just a case conference to explore settlement. If...if a hearing does take place, then you all will definitely come. But at the moment, the court just wants to meet Ruhi's parents}

"Lekin puttar, hum wahan aa toh sakte hai na, tumhe support karne ke liye" {But son, at least we can be there for you, support you}

Raman hugged his mother briefly, then shook his head.

"Aap mujhe support kar rahe ho na Ma, Ruhi ki itni achi tarah se parwarish karke. Aap dono ke bina yeh paanch saal mein kya karta? Lekin, aaj court nahi . Aap sab rahoge toh Ruhi anxious ho jayegi. Aap jaanti hai na Ma, aap kitna drama karti hai. Rinki hai, who Ruhi ke saath rahegi."
{You are supporting me Ma, by bringing up Ruhi so well. What would I have done without you these past five years? But don't come to court today Ma. Ruhi will get more anxious if she sees you all there. You have to admit Ma that you do create a lot of drama. Rinki will be there with Ruhi, let it be}

"Theek hai Raman" Mr Bhalla said in a resigned voice. "Jaisa tum chaho" {Okay Raman. Whatever you want}

"Ten o clock ki time hai papa, hum chalte hai" {We need to be there at 10.00 papa. We'll take your leave now}

Raman bent down and touched his parents feet. Then calling Ruhi and Rinki, he straightened his shoulders and his usual mask slid over his face. He needed to hold it together, but soon she would be with him. And she would be his anchor.

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10.20 am
Family Court Delhi

Court no. 4
Khanna v Bhalla

Ishita looked at the names on the Court notice board and shivered. Neel had explained this was a case conference only, to explore settlement of the case, that nothing would be finalised today, but the anxiety wouldn't leave her.

Ever since Raman had picked her up from the around the corner to their building, she had been holding on tightly to Ruhi. The judge might want to talk to Ruhi separately, Neel had explained, and she had been trying to prepare her daughter for the meeting. Ruhi had nodded her head, but looked frightened, and when they arrived at the court, Raman had asked Rinki to take her for a walk to keep her busy.

Raman and Ishita were standing at the door to the court with Neel, waiting to be called. There was no sign of Shagun, Ashok or their lawyer. Suddenly, the door opened and the court usher came out and motioned to the trio.

"Bachi ko rehno do" he said. "Judge Sahiba ne sirf aap logon ko bulaya hai" {Leave the child here. The judge just wants to see you}

Ishita signalled to Rinki to stay where she was and then taking a deep breath, clutched her equally nervous husbands hand tightly as they walked junto the court behind Neel.

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A mere ten minutes later they were out of the court again, their eyes shining, smiles lighting up their faces.

Shaguns lawyer had been sitting inside when they entered the court and the Judge had informed them that the application was being withdrawn.

"In any event Mr Gupta" the stern faced Judge lectured the lawyer " I would not have made the orders sought by your client. I have had a very strong recommendation from the case worker that the child remain with her father and step mother, and there would need to be exceptional reasons for me to disturb that arrangement."

The Judge had then turned to Ishita and Raman.

"Mrs Khanna's application is being withdrawn Mr Bhalla. That means that there will be no change to the current arrangement. Since Mrs Khanna is not seeking access, I won't make any orders. I have read the case report and your daughter appears to be a very well brought up and loved child. All the best for the future".

And that was it. It was over.

They had skipped out of the court, their hearts close to bursting with the immense joy they felt inside.

Now, standing outside, Raman grabbed Ishita into his arms, crushing her to himself.

"It's over baby" he murmured, his voice breaking. "Ruhi won't leave us."

Ishita hugged him back tightly, unmindful of the public space they were in. "And Adi will join us too Raman. One day Adi will join us too"

He pulled away to look at her, his eyes shining

"When you say it, I almost believe it will happen" he whispered.

"Believe it Raman. We will make it happen" She touched his cheek lovingly, and he drew her back into his embrace.

"Ishima, papa" Ruhi's voice drew them out of their cocoon and they both turned toward her, Raman whooping with joy as he gathered her up and twirled her in the air.

"Let's go home baby" he told her, as he covered her face with countless kisses, then held her towards Ishita who added her own kisses to the collection.

"Mujhe school nahi jaana hoga, papa?" {I don't have to go to school papa?}

"No, aaj no school. We are going to celebrate"

"Bhai, Bhabhi, I'm so happy" Rinki had come up and threw herself into the family hug, as Neel stood by grinning. Ruhi wriggled down from Raman's embrace and did a happy dance as her parents watched adoringly.

"Let's go celebrate, Rinki, Neel" Raman wanted to draw them all into his happiness.

"Raman" Ishita said quietly, drawing him aside. "Aap ki papa aur Ma bhi kitne khush hoge na? Aur Simmi aur Romi. Sab ke saath celebrate karte hai na?" {Your papa and Ma will be so happy too. And Simmi and Romi. Let's celebrate with them all}

"Lekin Ishita , phir tum?" Raman shook his head. {But Ishita, then you...?}

"Aap apne neighbours ko bula sakte ho na?" {You can invite your neighbours can't you?}

"But Ishita..."

"Raman, we have to start bringing the families together now. Aisa kab tak chalega?"

"You're right." Raman cupped Ishita's face and dropped a light kiss on her hair. "We will celebrate at home tonight. I'll convince my mother to invite your mother. You convince your mother to accept. Deal?"

"Deal"

"Kahan jaa rahen hai papa?" Ruhi asked excitedly, interrupting them. {where are we going papa?}

"Aap school ja rahi hai. Aur papa aur mein office" Ishita said firmly, picking Ruhi up. {You are going to school. And papa and I to office}

"But Ishima, papa said..." Ruhi said pouting.

"I know baby, but change of plans. We'll celebrate tonight. With everyone."

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Itti si hansi
Itti si khushi
Itti si tukda Chand ka
Khwabon ke tinke se
Chal banaye ashiyaan

Part 19 A: Aa Dekhen Zara - pg 87
Edited by Veeann - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res 🄳
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Veee ā¤ļø.. Me first to res and then yes yes yes commenting on the update as soon as it is posted. Sounds lame but I am super excited.

His nautanki family wanted to come along with him for the custody case but puttar needed biwi more than anyone 😳, how can he get his "Extended family šŸ˜‰" to accompany him. Outside the court the group hug was so cute just like the one they had after Adi's juvenile case but there was no sort of embarrassment between IshRa


Thanks to you for wrapping up the custody case neatly so that we can gush over other things and yes family needs to be informed about their relation. More fun ahead and lot of romantic moments stolen. I really can't wait to read the future updates. Get them to dance ā˜ŗļø

Beautiful choice of song, one of my favorites. Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it Vee. This should have happened in the original track instead of that horrible drama. I remember how scared Ruhi was in the original...especially after Ashok scares her outside the courtroom. Yours wasn't scary at all. Such a cute family moment there. I love it when puttar displays his affection for Ruhi.
Waiting for the party to start now. You are an amazing writer. I lub you and I lub your stories!!! I just want to keep reading more and more of your stories.

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